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- คุณภาพงานเขียน
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- กาสร้างตัวละคร
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เขียนรีวิว
This has harem label and as I see it the Mc would be in the harem of ash[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
if MC starts his own journey instead of following Ash then I think the story will be better.
Mc what only follows ash I thought he would have his own adventure and I was waiting for gengar as the starting pokemon [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
This author is the kind of author that does Polls but doesn’t bother to listen to them. The starter Pokémon poll had a list Pokémon based on the total likes & suggestions.… then the author decides to have Nidoran(male) as the starter for the MC. Will change the rating if the story gets good but so far it’s boring, too long pre-journey doing nothing, ignoring the poll, and looks to be following Ash.
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Hydreigon or also none as Deino it's a pseudo legendary pokemon and is relevant even later on in the sires and in my opine is a all all-rounder in stats and potential that's all also good fan-fiction so far.
If you love Ash so much, do you want her to marry your MC, I don't understand the harem etiquette as a previous comment, is MC part of Ash's harem? And what was the point of the initial pokemon poll if you put a completely different one, making it look like the opinion you asked for from your readers, you didn't care about it at all, it's a very disappointing fic and had potential[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
This has harem label and as I see it the Mc would be in the harem of ash[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
if MC starts his own journey instead of following Ash then I think the story will be better.
Mc what only follows ash I thought he would have his own adventure and I was waiting for gengar as the starting pokemon [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
This author is the kind of author that does Polls but doesn’t bother to listen to them. The starter Pokémon poll had a list Pokémon based on the total likes & suggestions.… then the author decides to have Nidoran(male) as the starter for the MC. Will change the rating if the story gets good but so far it’s boring, too long pre-journey doing nothing, ignoring the poll, and looks to be following Ash.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Hydreigon or also none as Deino it's a pseudo legendary pokemon and is relevant even later on in the sires and in my opine is a all all-rounder in stats and potential that's all also good fan-fiction so far.
If you love Ash so much, do you want her to marry your MC, I don't understand the harem etiquette as a previous comment, is MC part of Ash's harem? And what was the point of the initial pokemon poll if you put a completely different one, making it look like the opinion you asked for from your readers, you didn't care about it at all, it's a very disappointing fic and had potential[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]