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It's a great and interesting fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍😍 It have a great storyline/plot and great english/translation.. And the grammar is good too.. I like his farming system.. It makes him stronger if his farm more bigger/advance.. I like that he's got Turtwig (Midori) for his farm (it's suitable pokemon for farm and guard him too).. But maybe he should summon more guard to protect his farm (it will be hard for Midori alone).. There's not only Demonic Beast to threat him, but also another people/race whose want to get his magical vegetable and fruits.. Love your story.. Keep up the great job author sama 😁👍😍😍😍
grammar is good, the plot is good, character development is... how do i say it... it's okay i guess... world background is still unknown (the confirmed one is dxd but i feel there's still some franchise and the world is a cross-fiction)
great story hope you don't take another long hiatus though. love the farming theme. huge fan of MCs who main in some form of production class rather than combat.
It is a good fanfiction, the main problem is the author does not post very often if at all. I have been looking for fanfictions with similar systems, but haven't found any yet. please recommend some.
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Hope it doesn't get dropped or go on a long hiatus[img=update][img=recommend][img=coins]
well the fanfic is unexpectedly 😎good At first i though mc reincarnated on some new world.......but turns out he is not.....
Good stuff, I can see that you are partly inspired from crossedge fanfics and the max level farmer anime, and so far the the book is rightly paced and the development seemed gradual. The only glaring issue to me was MC didn’t seem to have much of a character he seems more like an casual NPC to me, it is my opinion and it may be subjective. I also hope to see him saving strays (kuroka, individg, valerie, tosca (the church who is kiba’s batch mate) and many more.
the is stupid and naive does he think he will have a peaceful life in a fantasy world where god demons angels and others mythicals creatures roam free just how stupid can he be
There is not much to say, I love this novel despite the few chapters; If you are looking for a quiet novel then this is your cup of tea. moremoremoermroemroemreomroermeomreomroemromeorme
My only real complaint about this is the lack of updates the MC is a bit cliche but overall it does not ruin the story and adds a bit of humor
this fanfic is so much fun i hope you keep posting Kskskskskskskskksksksksksskskakakskskskakakkwksjshsjfjjsjjdsjskwjdkakskakskskjskskakskskkskskskkshsjaujeiwjdjwksjjskskskjdjzkuwjduxjwhdjshjw
Só posso dizer muito é uma novela estável ao meu ver enredo está bom o MC e suas convocações também só um pouco complicado o plano de fundo do mundo difícil saber quantos estão juntos até agora eu chutei um DXD,HP pelos lobisomens,Nurarihyon mago creio eu mais ainda nao posso confirmar só tenho realmente esta dúvida de onde e o mundo total na base
Interesting so far you have the usual misunderstanding about the mc where is super secret expert or reincarnation of someone, its not much of fanfic its more like a story where some stuff is got from various story and so far a single pokemon is the only thing that can be found to call this story a fanfic. its currently in the world building page so not much plot/agenda & etc.
the author shows how much they(I don't know the gender of the author) care about expanding the world of DXD through character interactions
It's a great and interesting fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍😍 It have a great storyline/plot and great english/translation.. And the grammar is good too.. I like his farming system.. It makes him stronger if his farm more bigger/advance.. I like that he's got Turtwig (Midori) for his farm (it's suitable pokemon for farm and guard him too).. But maybe he should summon more guard to protect his farm (it will be hard for Midori alone).. There's not only Demonic Beast to threat him, but also another people/race whose want to get his magical vegetable and fruits.. Love your story.. Keep up the great job author sama 😁👍😍😍😍
grammar is good, the plot is good, character development is... how do i say it... it's okay i guess... world background is still unknown (the confirmed one is dxd but i feel there's still some franchise and the world is a cross-fiction)
great story hope you don't take another long hiatus though. love the farming theme. huge fan of MCs who main in some form of production class rather than combat.
It is a good fanfiction, the main problem is the author does not post very often if at all. I have been looking for fanfictions with similar systems, but haven't found any yet. please recommend some.
Essa história é muito boa continue nao deixe de escrever continue assim [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Hope it doesn't get dropped or go on a long hiatus[img=update][img=recommend][img=coins]
well the fanfic is unexpectedly 😎good At first i though mc reincarnated on some new world.......but turns out he is not.....
Good stuff, I can see that you are partly inspired from crossedge fanfics and the max level farmer anime, and so far the the book is rightly paced and the development seemed gradual. The only glaring issue to me was MC didn’t seem to have much of a character he seems more like an casual NPC to me, it is my opinion and it may be subjective. I also hope to see him saving strays (kuroka, individg, valerie, tosca (the church who is kiba’s batch mate) and many more.
the is stupid and naive does he think he will have a peaceful life in a fantasy world where god demons angels and others mythicals creatures roam free just how stupid can he be
There is not much to say, I love this novel despite the few chapters; If you are looking for a quiet novel then this is your cup of tea. moremoremoermroemroemreomroermeomreomroemromeorme
My only real complaint about this is the lack of updates the MC is a bit cliche but overall it does not ruin the story and adds a bit of humor
this fanfic is so much fun i hope you keep posting Kskskskskskskskksksksksksskskakakskskskakakkwksjshsjfjjsjjdsjskwjdkakskakskskjskskakskskkskskskkshsjaujeiwjdjwksjjskskskjdjzkuwjduxjwhdjshjw
Só posso dizer muito é uma novela estável ao meu ver enredo está bom o MC e suas convocações também só um pouco complicado o plano de fundo do mundo difícil saber quantos estão juntos até agora eu chutei um DXD,HP pelos lobisomens,Nurarihyon mago creio eu mais ainda nao posso confirmar só tenho realmente esta dúvida de onde e o mundo total na base
Interesting so far you have the usual misunderstanding about the mc where is super secret expert or reincarnation of someone, its not much of fanfic its more like a story where some stuff is got from various story and so far a single pokemon is the only thing that can be found to call this story a fanfic. its currently in the world building page so not much plot/agenda & etc.
the author shows how much they(I don't know the gender of the author) care about expanding the world of DXD through character interactions