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เขียนรีวิวWhat to say .... hmm... you're playing the long game i get it but that doesn't make it any better but for the sake of it the story is ok plot is forced but its ok cus with how you started the story killing off his parents i expected this. The only reason i wont say you have a bad mc is because he is 10 years old so you somehow saved that part. The truth I don't wanna watch a kid make mistakes and grow up under the care of other superheroes to become a good hero cus if i wanted to read that i would actually read Spider-Man comics but again thats a personal preference so i havent removed a star for that. Btw the grammer is really bad.
What to say .... hmm... you're playing the long game i get it but that doesn't make it any better but for the sake of it the story is ok plot is forced but its ok cus with how you started the story killing off his parents i expected this. The only reason i wont say you have a bad mc is because he is 10 years old so you somehow saved that part. The truth I don't wanna watch a kid make mistakes and grow up under the care of other superheroes to become a good hero cus if i wanted to read that i would actually read Spider-Man comics but again thats a personal preference so i havent removed a star for that. Btw the grammer is really bad.
basically too forced the story and a really really bad grammar