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I haven't read it yet so I'm not gonna judge.. but Rick would pretty much know when his grandkid is hijacked I mean it's Rick
El autor trato de crear un morty mas especial que todos los mortys y asta sierto punto lo logro lo de que se acueste con su hermana y mama lo veo muy bien porque con ello le mete contenido fan service ala historia para que no se buelva monotona y aburrida en general gran historia pero se paro y no continua espero que el autor muestre signos de vida y que la continue
Ei autor continue a escrever! Existe muita poucas fanfic de Rick and morty e isso tá me deixando louco! Tô gostando bastante dessa fanfic então por favor não desista dessa fanfic e continue a escrever!
........Gostei mas tem pouco cap, foi a primeira fic de Rick end Morty que achei boa só espero que o autor não largue a obra ....................................................................................
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I actually really like this story it’s exactly what would happen if someone became morty but smart only problem I have with it is the update time and schedule other than that it is a great story
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Hoonesstlyyyy. .... .. . You're Morty but worse *points at the MC* doebeif eowhc diwjdktbr qifjf .tig .wkwi .tieiwb tjruvbrei wiw
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Tienes una buena historia me gusta y es una historia con un tema q no e leido en otro lado solo te falta mejorarla un poco en siertas partes para q sea aun mejor la historia yo te doy 9/10 buena historia
The only redeemable thing about this Fanfiction is the title... Which by the way is incredible. After giving credit where credit is due, I have to say that this is a steaming pile of garbage. Any MTL would be a more cohesive and enjoyable read than this. Please, spare your brain cells and stay away from this with a 10ft pole.
Trust me everyone it's a good read and worth your time Don't let those negative trolls tell you otherwise. as a fan of the show it was like a true itch being scratched when you see Morty being competent
Got halfway through chapter 1. It's a badly translated Spanish novel, impossible to read without checking over the words many times over to realize what is being written. So far it's not doing a good job making it a better Morty, at least he had his grammar in order.
listen the idea is amazing the grammer is pretty bad tbh but i can ignore it cuz this is an amazing idea keep up the good work
Are these people giving 5-star reviews reading the same fic? How can they even review it if you can understand what its saying?
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stop. please for the love of god please stop writing 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 it's hurt my brain reading this novel.
Adorei, por favor continua!!!! Sério essa fic e incrível.uma das melhores de Rick e morty que já tive o prazer de ler sinceramente você fez um ótimo trabalho ao escrever essa fic parabéns
buen mundo casi sin usar con buena idea de personaje cap muy largos y bien escritos lo unico malo son las actualizaciones amigo trata de subir en un horario
Joder esta muy bueno Esta historia es muy interesante Espectativas altas [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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I haven't read it yet so I'm not gonna judge.. but Rick would pretty much know when his grandkid is hijacked I mean it's Rick
El autor trato de crear un morty mas especial que todos los mortys y asta sierto punto lo logro lo de que se acueste con su hermana y mama lo veo muy bien porque con ello le mete contenido fan service ala historia para que no se buelva monotona y aburrida en general gran historia pero se paro y no continua espero que el autor muestre signos de vida y que la continue
Ei autor continue a escrever! Existe muita poucas fanfic de Rick and morty e isso tá me deixando louco! Tô gostando bastante dessa fanfic então por favor não desista dessa fanfic e continue a escrever!
........Gostei mas tem pouco cap, foi a primeira fic de Rick end Morty que achei boa só espero que o autor não largue a obra ....................................................................................
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I actually really like this story it’s exactly what would happen if someone became morty but smart only problem I have with it is the update time and schedule other than that it is a great story
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Hoonesstlyyyy. .... .. . You're Morty but worse *points at the MC* doebeif eowhc diwjdktbr qifjf .tig .wkwi .tieiwb tjruvbrei wiw
good rmmrmrmcrmfcjiemdcjijfecejncijdijcnijnncenjfnicendjicnijfencidnijcemfcedmcjimfjicmijefmcjimfjimcjfmcijmijcmjifmcjemcmjjfmjmvjemjcmefmjemjcdcemfjmvjfnnefjcmfecmvnegjvngv
Tienes una buena historia me gusta y es una historia con un tema q no e leido en otro lado solo te falta mejorarla un poco en siertas partes para q sea aun mejor la historia yo te doy 9/10 buena historia
The only redeemable thing about this Fanfiction is the title... Which by the way is incredible. After giving credit where credit is due, I have to say that this is a steaming pile of garbage. Any MTL would be a more cohesive and enjoyable read than this. Please, spare your brain cells and stay away from this with a 10ft pole.
Trust me everyone it's a good read and worth your time Don't let those negative trolls tell you otherwise. as a fan of the show it was like a true itch being scratched when you see Morty being competent
Got halfway through chapter 1. It's a badly translated Spanish novel, impossible to read without checking over the words many times over to realize what is being written. So far it's not doing a good job making it a better Morty, at least he had his grammar in order.
listen the idea is amazing the grammer is pretty bad tbh but i can ignore it cuz this is an amazing idea keep up the good work
Are these people giving 5-star reviews reading the same fic? How can they even review it if you can understand what its saying?
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stop. please for the love of god please stop writing 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 it's hurt my brain reading this novel.
Adorei, por favor continua!!!! Sério essa fic e incrível.uma das melhores de Rick e morty que já tive o prazer de ler sinceramente você fez um ótimo trabalho ao escrever essa fic parabéns
buen mundo casi sin usar con buena idea de personaje cap muy largos y bien escritos lo unico malo son las actualizaciones amigo trata de subir en un horario
Joder esta muy bueno Esta historia es muy interesante Espectativas altas [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Please give me mor chapter......................................................................................,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.