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เขียนรีวิวLoving the story so far. Very unique MC and origin. Powers are as well. still grasping how they work and their mechanics but the story is early and has yet to settle so I expect more will be explained. Im hoping the MC makes attachments and allies and becomes more sociable but thats all character development we may see in the future. Honestly nothing so wrong that experience alone won't fix. Keep it up!
i have been enjoying it a lot especially the mystery surrounding the ruthless heaven. also i am curious about whether the novel will be only on naruto or would he be able to travel to other works.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์Wow I actually enjoyed this story it's not even that bad it's actually pretty good compared to a lot of other fanfics this one it's original and it's pretty good you'll like it trust me.
Loving the story so far. Very unique MC and origin. Powers are as well. still grasping how they work and their mechanics but the story is early and has yet to settle so I expect more will be explained. Im hoping the MC makes attachments and allies and becomes more sociable but thats all character development we may see in the future. Honestly nothing so wrong that experience alone won't fix. Keep it up!
i have been enjoying it a lot especially the mystery surrounding the ruthless heaven. also i am curious about whether the novel will be only on naruto or would he be able to travel to other works.
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Wow I actually enjoyed this story it's not even that bad it's actually pretty good compared to a lot of other fanfics this one it's original and it's pretty good you'll like it trust me.