17รีวิว
2.98
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This story wasn't thought out very well. Full of plot armor, meaningless progression, and just not interesting despite the promising premise for the story.
Writing quality is bad, yes lemme start with that. I do like the storyline but it's like those novels that keep coming out nowadays, it lacks depths and feel rushed. However with a good editor, this can still be a good novel to pass time so lets hope it gets picked
just straight bad, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,...............................................................................
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
Story is really bland, MC stupid and half the story is MP arguing and being toyed with by his system. MC is supposed to stay low key but the part where he gets his level tested his ridiculous. MC gets tested->MC gets money and upgrade his level->MC gets retested and surprise, he got x more level in the last 10 minutes. Rince and repeat numerous times and nobody finds it stange.
Whelp another very unlikable protagonist and system. Always annoying seeing a system that is a semi character itself and caring about its honor insulted, or actively works against the user by activating bogus features and random price hikes just cause. Mc also activates all 6+ elements and goes and gets them all tested, while also supposedly there isn't a single dual element mage apprentice in the entire city, then brags the entire time about being lowkey. Annoying.
I'm really speechless, There isn't even ONE slightly interesting or readable novel in this week. Trash /Clone/butchered plagiarism /nonsense plot holes/ that my experience for this week. As for this i novel don't bother, it's not even slightly interesting or entertaining. Even generic Cultivation novels are better than this novel.
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MC alternates between trying to be low-key to avoid being "dissected", and bragging about his powers, selling unique system items, and reporting multiple level increases in a day.
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I like the concept but the mc alternates between i must be low key followed by being so greedy he attracts attention and the constant incorrect genders are indicative of laziness
This story wasn't thought out very well. Full of plot armor, meaningless progression, and just not interesting despite the promising premise for the story.
Writing quality is bad, yes lemme start with that. I do like the storyline but it's like those novels that keep coming out nowadays, it lacks depths and feel rushed. However with a good editor, this can still be a good novel to pass time so lets hope it gets picked
just straight bad, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,...............................................................................
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Story is really bland, MC stupid and half the story is MP arguing and being toyed with by his system. MC is supposed to stay low key but the part where he gets his level tested his ridiculous. MC gets tested->MC gets money and upgrade his level->MC gets retested and surprise, he got x more level in the last 10 minutes. Rince and repeat numerous times and nobody finds it stange.
Whelp another very unlikable protagonist and system. Always annoying seeing a system that is a semi character itself and caring about its honor insulted, or actively works against the user by activating bogus features and random price hikes just cause. Mc also activates all 6+ elements and goes and gets them all tested, while also supposedly there isn't a single dual element mage apprentice in the entire city, then brags the entire time about being lowkey. Annoying.
I'm really speechless, There isn't even ONE slightly interesting or readable novel in this week. Trash /Clone/butchered plagiarism /nonsense plot holes/ that my experience for this week. As for this i novel don't bother, it's not even slightly interesting or entertaining. Even generic Cultivation novels are better than this novel.
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤸♀️🤸♀️🤸♀️🤸♀️🤸♀️🤸♀️🤸♀️🤯🤸♀️
MC alternates between trying to be low-key to avoid being "dissected", and bragging about his powers, selling unique system items, and reporting multiple level increases in a day.
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I like the concept but the mc alternates between i must be low key followed by being so greedy he attracts attention and the constant incorrect genders are indicative of laziness