Unlimited Wishes in The Omniverse.

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Alpha_09

Hmm. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. . .. .. .

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AkashicLibrary

Honestly its pretty good but the plot feels forced and i would’ve given it a 4 if not for the bad grammar and few mistakes and the forced plot but its good enough to read

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CreatorOfSystema

im giving it 4 stars bcz i am very satisfied the story would be perfect if you add some descriptions and bit of an explanation for the reader o understand and least a clean sentence

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Nestor_Bar

Es bueno para pasar el rato, aparte que se siente forzada la trama yo le daría a cada mundo mínimo 10 capítulos solo para disfrutar mejor la trama y como la cambia.

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Meta0202

you can throw when he's letting his system run its course. because we can guess how history will unfold....................................................................................................