13รีวิว
4.6
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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The beginning is quite captivating. The story develops at a steady pace while not lowering it's quality, with the only problem being grammar but just some minor mistakes here and there. The character descriptions are basic and simple though, but doesn't ruin the story and is enough to still let you imagine the character. World building is, as usual, what you would expect of a fantasy story which can be a good thing. All in all, a great read to say the least. Keep up the good work!
Seeing as this is the same author as hvisland, I am expecting big things. i don't much care for Grammer mistakes so long as you can tell what it was trying to say. overall I will be sure to read till the end
No real big issues with this series. Has some gradual storyline buildup that helps ground it from being too outrageous. I stopped at locked chapters since I wasn't captured fully.
Great novel 👍 good humour.The story is very dark. hope the author has not abandoned it yet?This novel seems to not have been updated for some time.
The mc acts like a hero and goody two shoes the entire time. He tells his Minotaur general to not kill humans and makes him do adventurer requests all for the sake of spreading his name. He attacks a drug trading black market because a random lady hates what drugs did to her son. All the villlan things he makes his minions do are useless to the plot and usually fail. Nightmares or sucubus minion failed to add any meaningful change to the plot. He apologizes and acts like a beta character to Emily even after she cuts his new succubus. Normally when this is the case like in Overlord - the adventurer Momon, There is a juxtaposition with a villan plot happening behind the scenes so Momom can fool the humans but in his case the mc is just a hero that happens to be the demon king.
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The story is fun to read but the title and description is VERY miss leading ... The MC is an Anti Hero not a demon king ... He is basically a Hero who doesn't feel the need to save every cat he sees in a tree.
Hey author the discord link says "Invite Invalid" pls fix it and BTW do not drop this masterpiece
Hello author, chapter 1 here, I still don't know if the world is real or it's just a game, but even if it's just a game, it seems to be interesting, since the protagonist said that it looks real, I'll keep reading, congratulations and hope that the story is good.
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This story is very interesting to continue to follow. The plot is well structured and the words are well used. To be honest, I almost never read stories about games and this makes me a little confused hihi But, no problem. I like this 🤩 To author... Fighting 💪🏼
The story has an inviting synopsis, and the first two chapters were captivating, although there are some places I feel like the writer didn't adequately elucidate for the right perceptibility, I do like the writer's creativity l just feel that the writer should seek out more of that originality.
The story is really good. The characters name are lit and I recommend this novel to everyone.
It's insane if the author doesn't give five stars to his own work. I just hope you guys enjoy this story, and any form of support would be appreciated.
The beginning is quite captivating. The story develops at a steady pace while not lowering it's quality, with the only problem being grammar but just some minor mistakes here and there. The character descriptions are basic and simple though, but doesn't ruin the story and is enough to still let you imagine the character. World building is, as usual, what you would expect of a fantasy story which can be a good thing. All in all, a great read to say the least. Keep up the good work!
Seeing as this is the same author as hvisland, I am expecting big things. i don't much care for Grammer mistakes so long as you can tell what it was trying to say. overall I will be sure to read till the end
No real big issues with this series. Has some gradual storyline buildup that helps ground it from being too outrageous. I stopped at locked chapters since I wasn't captured fully.
Great novel 👍 good humour.The story is very dark. hope the author has not abandoned it yet?This novel seems to not have been updated for some time.
The mc acts like a hero and goody two shoes the entire time. He tells his Minotaur general to not kill humans and makes him do adventurer requests all for the sake of spreading his name. He attacks a drug trading black market because a random lady hates what drugs did to her son. All the villlan things he makes his minions do are useless to the plot and usually fail. Nightmares or sucubus minion failed to add any meaningful change to the plot. He apologizes and acts like a beta character to Emily even after she cuts his new succubus. Normally when this is the case like in Overlord - the adventurer Momon, There is a juxtaposition with a villan plot happening behind the scenes so Momom can fool the humans but in his case the mc is just a hero that happens to be the demon king.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ The story is fun to read but the title and description is VERY miss leading ... The MC is an Anti Hero not a demon king ... He is basically a Hero who doesn't feel the need to save every cat he sees in a tree.
Hey author the discord link says "Invite Invalid" pls fix it and BTW do not drop this masterpiece
Hello author, chapter 1 here, I still don't know if the world is real or it's just a game, but even if it's just a game, it seems to be interesting, since the protagonist said that it looks real, I'll keep reading, congratulations and hope that the story is good.
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This story is very interesting to continue to follow. The plot is well structured and the words are well used. To be honest, I almost never read stories about games and this makes me a little confused hihi But, no problem. I like this 🤩 To author... Fighting 💪🏼
The story has an inviting synopsis, and the first two chapters were captivating, although there are some places I feel like the writer didn't adequately elucidate for the right perceptibility, I do like the writer's creativity l just feel that the writer should seek out more of that originality.
The story is really good. The characters name are lit and I recommend this novel to everyone.
It's insane if the author doesn't give five stars to his own work. I just hope you guys enjoy this story, and any form of support would be appreciated.