4รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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เขียนรีวิว
Amazing story, I'm currently addicted to DBZ/DBS stories and without a doubt this is Top 3 of all the stories I've read so far, I hope the author continues.
Currently up to chapter six so far it’s not too bad in fact I would say it’s doing pretty good for now. Writing quality is ok rarely will you find any misspelled words. Development is doing fine for now just as long as you don’t do any cliches with the dragon balls like fruit tree of might or pocket space I’ve seen enough of those. I think it would be interesting to involve some xenoverse plot considering how you are changing the timeline.
good.......................good.....................................good...........................good..................................good..........
Dropped at chapter 6 (which as of the time of this review is more the half way) Powerlevels make no sense (two saiyans training together doesnt increase power level at all) MC has absolutely no brain (he spares raditz which would be pure stupidity in every sense of the word. Who cares if the author likes him? You can revive people!) Basically the same problem most DBZ fanfics have but instead of a power fantasy its watching the MC be pathetic unless the plot absolutely demands it.
Amazing story, I'm currently addicted to DBZ/DBS stories and without a doubt this is Top 3 of all the stories I've read so far, I hope the author continues.
Currently up to chapter six so far it’s not too bad in fact I would say it’s doing pretty good for now. Writing quality is ok rarely will you find any misspelled words. Development is doing fine for now just as long as you don’t do any cliches with the dragon balls like fruit tree of might or pocket space I’ve seen enough of those. I think it would be interesting to involve some xenoverse plot considering how you are changing the timeline.
good.......................good.....................................good...........................good..................................good..........
Dropped at chapter 6 (which as of the time of this review is more the half way) Powerlevels make no sense (two saiyans training together doesnt increase power level at all) MC has absolutely no brain (he spares raditz which would be pure stupidity in every sense of the word. Who cares if the author likes him? You can revive people!) Basically the same problem most DBZ fanfics have but instead of a power fantasy its watching the MC be pathetic unless the plot absolutely demands it.