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XAkarrinX Great Fanfic Keep doing a great job You can do this game of thrones fanfic idea immediately after a game of thrones and magic Game of Thrones: Kitsune Our MC Jack Paulson after successfully passing a trial by a God gets put into the World of Game of Thrones with the techniques,powers and abilities of the Kyuubi no yoko from Naruto. He’s reborn into House Tarth. He will take over Westeros piece by piece. Tags: Smart MC, Alpha MC, Strong MC, Cunning MC, Strategic MC,Loving MC. Harem Rhealla Targaryen Elia martell Ashara dayne Arianne Martell Cassana Baratheon Genna Lannister Elissa Forrester Elaena Glenmore Cersei Lannister Catelyn Stark Miranda Royce Janna Tyrell Lysa Tully Ros Melisandre Walda Bolton Talisa Stark Alerie Hightower Margaery Tyrell Sansa Stark Mira Forrester Jeyne Poole Ellaria Sand Tyene Sand Nymeria Sand
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I hope there will be more updates This is great! I love the concept, as well as the laid-back personality of the MC Great novel. thank you!
Great story , funny mc , nice idea but some grammer mistakes that i can forgive.
I enjoyed it, not perfect, I hope there will be more updates as I really like the premise
Идея хорошо, но исполнение подкачало. ,.......................................................... ..................................................
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Portrait of Lyanna F**king Strak. Enough said. Here a notepad screenshot of my bashing of Starks. Because of word cap of webnovel's comment and review sections ........ ......... ........... ...................
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Good but terrible update schedule. Wouldn't be surprised if this was dropped early.
I normally don't start a story with a few chapters Absolutely happy that I jumped in the beginning. was only gonna read 1 chapter before bed but stayed up late reading till that last one available. Truly recommend this it's an amazing read.
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Really good read. Takes on a different Is approach than others. Can't wait to see what happens next
The story is well written, and the way you build up the story is stupendous not to mention how the character interacts with the world, he knows he's powerful yet he doesn't let it get to his head he knows that he should be careful specially after chapter 12 when he learned that his actions have garnered the attention of a few beings. All in all keep up the good work, though I won't just put aside some minor details that should be fixed, all in all though I love it, specially if DnD is included in it.
I think it's pretty good .........................................................................................................
'Reviewed' as of chp12(latest) Score: 3.2/5 TLDR; Too few chps to properly review but I'm dropping this. MC feels like a Stark fanboy. Can't take it seriously. Not for me but give it a try perhaps you might like it. WQ(4/5) - Nothing abhorrent & quite readable thought there are some mistakes(misspellings, capitalizations, etc.). The writing itself isn't too flat & can be somewhat entertaining to read. A bit of editing could really help elevate the story. SD(4/5) - Personally, it seems the author has a definite goal & vision of the plot. Not a bad premise & pretty decent execution. CD(2/5) - I believe this is a biased score but mostly due to my utter dislike of the MC. It mostly stems from the fact that it seems he is a Stark fanboy & lapdog, I can understand playing the game but you have literally powerful magic. You can be anyone but MC choose to be a vassal Lord to the Starks. Some might enjoy this. US(3/5) - Decent post rate. For now. WB(3/5) - It's GoT. Nothing added or explored so far.
This story is really good! The writing quality isn't amazing, but it's good enough. The only downside is the slow update speed. But the story is worth the wait
Incredibly good fanfic. Exciting, funny and well written. I look forward to more chapters. Author, please don't drop this, there's a lot of potential in your fic.
Your writing quality is $#!t... from the @nvs. Really, what a disappointment. A wonderful plot ruined by $#!tty writing. At least try to write properly. It's very easy.
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I give you 5stars For creativeness Backstory and all Potentialof the story to grow more This story of yours is an excellent one i tell you coming from my perspective a free reader Hoping for mofe chapters to read coming from you aauthor This one is saved and already downloaded on my library hahahahah Thanks to the author praying for your good health
In few words, the novel is great. I saw some old reviews about bad grammar, not sure if its been edited since but the spelling and grammar are more then up to snuff. The MC is fun, feels more like a real person and less like a computerized Chad who only makes the right decisions. My only gripe about this Fic is the low update speed
XAkarrinX Great Fanfic Keep doing a great job You can do this game of thrones fanfic idea immediately after a game of thrones and magic Game of Thrones: Kitsune Our MC Jack Paulson after successfully passing a trial by a God gets put into the World of Game of Thrones with the techniques,powers and abilities of the Kyuubi no yoko from Naruto. He’s reborn into House Tarth. He will take over Westeros piece by piece. Tags: Smart MC, Alpha MC, Strong MC, Cunning MC, Strategic MC,Loving MC. Harem Rhealla Targaryen Elia martell Ashara dayne Arianne Martell Cassana Baratheon Genna Lannister Elissa Forrester Elaena Glenmore Cersei Lannister Catelyn Stark Miranda Royce Janna Tyrell Lysa Tully Ros Melisandre Walda Bolton Talisa Stark Alerie Hightower Margaery Tyrell Sansa Stark Mira Forrester Jeyne Poole Ellaria Sand Tyene Sand Nymeria Sand
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I hope there will be more updates This is great! I love the concept, as well as the laid-back personality of the MC Great novel. thank you!
Great story , funny mc , nice idea but some grammer mistakes that i can forgive.
I enjoyed it, not perfect, I hope there will be more updates as I really like the premise
Идея хорошо, но исполнение подкачало. ,.......................................................... ..................................................
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Portrait of Lyanna F**king Strak. Enough said. Here a notepad screenshot of my bashing of Starks. Because of word cap of webnovel's comment and review sections ........ ......... ........... ...................
more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter more
Good but terrible update schedule. Wouldn't be surprised if this was dropped early.
I normally don't start a story with a few chapters Absolutely happy that I jumped in the beginning. was only gonna read 1 chapter before bed but stayed up late reading till that last one available. Truly recommend this it's an amazing read.
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Really good read. Takes on a different Is approach than others. Can't wait to see what happens next
The story is well written, and the way you build up the story is stupendous not to mention how the character interacts with the world, he knows he's powerful yet he doesn't let it get to his head he knows that he should be careful specially after chapter 12 when he learned that his actions have garnered the attention of a few beings. All in all keep up the good work, though I won't just put aside some minor details that should be fixed, all in all though I love it, specially if DnD is included in it.
I think it's pretty good .........................................................................................................
'Reviewed' as of chp12(latest) Score: 3.2/5 TLDR; Too few chps to properly review but I'm dropping this. MC feels like a Stark fanboy. Can't take it seriously. Not for me but give it a try perhaps you might like it. WQ(4/5) - Nothing abhorrent & quite readable thought there are some mistakes(misspellings, capitalizations, etc.). The writing itself isn't too flat & can be somewhat entertaining to read. A bit of editing could really help elevate the story. SD(4/5) - Personally, it seems the author has a definite goal & vision of the plot. Not a bad premise & pretty decent execution. CD(2/5) - I believe this is a biased score but mostly due to my utter dislike of the MC. It mostly stems from the fact that it seems he is a Stark fanboy & lapdog, I can understand playing the game but you have literally powerful magic. You can be anyone but MC choose to be a vassal Lord to the Starks. Some might enjoy this. US(3/5) - Decent post rate. For now. WB(3/5) - It's GoT. Nothing added or explored so far.
This story is really good! The writing quality isn't amazing, but it's good enough. The only downside is the slow update speed. But the story is worth the wait
Incredibly good fanfic. Exciting, funny and well written. I look forward to more chapters. Author, please don't drop this, there's a lot of potential in your fic.
Your writing quality is $#!t... from the @nvs. Really, what a disappointment. A wonderful plot ruined by $#!tty writing. At least try to write properly. It's very easy.
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I give you 5stars For creativeness Backstory and all Potentialof the story to grow more This story of yours is an excellent one i tell you coming from my perspective a free reader Hoping for mofe chapters to read coming from you aauthor This one is saved and already downloaded on my library hahahahah Thanks to the author praying for your good health
In few words, the novel is great. I saw some old reviews about bad grammar, not sure if its been edited since but the spelling and grammar are more then up to snuff. The MC is fun, feels more like a real person and less like a computerized Chad who only makes the right decisions. My only gripe about this Fic is the low update speed