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Absolutely loved this. Can't wait for more. It's my favorite type of fanfic where all the power systems are actually thought out instead of just taken at face value or changed to suit the Authors power fantasy. Though, hopefully now that the MC has looped back around to Star Wars, there won't be that much of a gap between chapter since the base of the power systems have been more thoroughly fleshed out... I hope I didn't just jinx it
Currently on chapter 78. Really good fanfic, the author has made realistic characters and development of said characters for the settings he’s presented them in. Great explanation and execution of power systems, author included the exploration of these worlds to have us learn with the MC and their views on them, Very on theme and subtlety for plot points for us to see without the use of flashbacks. I would highly recommend this book despite it not even being halfway done for fellow enjoys of the settings involved. Keep cooking man.
Even though updates are slow as hell the quality of every chapter is more than satisfactory
Although the worlds chosen are in oarts strange(I mean if you want a magic word why go for Harry potter over the more interesting options like the Nasuverse or Mushoku for example and why chose HxH over for Example JJK? They both have options to create conditions that benefit the one making them. The entire ability set Reileigh has created through his Hatsu exept maybe the sword of Babylon itself can easily be recreated with binding vows and the world of JJK doesn't lack a strong sword. Not to mention the worlds he already can acess like One piece or Marvel, even Naruto has some good swors like the Kusanagi series so why bother with the strange ability if something simmillar can easily be achieved by for example going to the marvel universe, adopting a Symbiote and letting it eat a devil fruit and some famous swords.) But overall the story is a good read with excellent writing and a lot more creativity I had thought possible. Normally when someone writes a story like this, it turns iut generic and boring with other people only existing to give the mc some power ups with maybe one or two targets for revenge among them who previously did some unspeakable things to him so the author can justify turning the main character into a murder hobo with the strange desire to capture all the pokemon or something. So it's great to see someone this talented making stories like these.
Absolutely excellent. The world building, but not only the world building of each individual world, but how all those power system interact and how the players mix into it is extraordinary. A truly excellent read, even if you don’t like some of thise anime/movies. Worth a read. I just wish the updates were more frequent.
I have to say that the setting is extremely creative. The story gets better and better as you read. Now, here’s a bit of critique. The first couple of chapters were an absolute slog. Pure unadulterated exposition. The first chapter is somewhat important. No matter what the author says. Don’t skip it. Around chapter 10 I realized what the problem with the story is. We connect with people and characters. If something is not related to characters or plot, it becomes a chore to read through. It feels like a text book. There is exposition and then the author uses that at times. There is no hook. Sure when the info is used, it feels good. But before that, it is a chore and irritation to read through. So, yeah, the story is good and very creative. But be patient. The payoff is good. Otherwise so many people wouldn’t like it. Sorry for the unorganized review, but typing in a tab is irritating. Anyways, thanks for reading. Give it a try and hope you have a day.
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I’ve seen this book before but I’ve always ignored it, but I decided to finally read it and I LOVE IT. This book while not my favorite one I’ve ever read it is still in my top 10 easily. One of the best fan fictions I have ever read and I seriously can’t wait to read more.
This is a great story I would love if this was the start of a new fanfic genre this is a beautifully written book I greatly enjoyed it and might use the idea Andale my own
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please continue this book I really enjoy it and I really hope that you can continue it into the far future AKA 200 + chapters
All I can say is this is amazing I want more please I am ready for the clone wars arc I love star wars I love one piece so I hope we can get more of this
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it's a very well done multiverse fanfic. the writing quality is great and the rest is even better, a breath of fresh air between thousands of harem novels
Great use of different anime power systems and recalibrating it to work on par to different power systems. My main issue for crossovers is when one power system is obviously more powerful than the other, and I don't see it here. Updates are on the slow side.
it is nice to see you are posting again iv been whating for this Since you stopped
the story is very good and very veried I'd say. but quite a few times now he's gone a very long time without updating he's gone months and months on and without updating but it's a great story read it if you get hooked continue to read it and even if it is like 2 3 4 months since they last updated it usually is just an aggravating weight. too lazy to actually write this down cuz I type way too slow so I'm just using Text to speech
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this is one of the best fanfictions out there with gnome writing about worlds nobody writes about but what makes it one of the is how in-depth gnome is with his writing
goated story ngl, I love imagining my own character concept. three classes would be warrior, hunter and ninja. my main plan would be to learn from Bulma about technology and then turn myself into an android with shadow clones and stuff and then I'd abuse the infinite ki and make a vow that all my abilities now use ki as its source and I'd always try to increase my ki output
One of the best stories I have read, the premise got be so absorbed so quickly it was insane. The world building as well is really good and somehow he has linked it together so well. I would love to see this premise be taken as a trend but i am addicted to it currently
if you are reading this review to see if it's worthwhile then let me tell you....
Your ability to craft compelling narratives and create vivid, memorable characters is truly impressive. Your latest book is a testament to your talent, offering readers a captivating story that lingers long after the final page. Your dedication to the craft of writing and your unique voice make your work stand out, engaging and inspiring those who read it.
Лучшее, что я читал за последние время. Единственное, что расстраивает это скорость выхода глав, я остановился, когда начался перерыв, но уже закончил за 2 дня всё, что вышло. Было бы здорово, будь у автора пара редакторов, чтобы помочь ему писать быстрее и исправлять ошибки, пока он продумывает сюжет. Ах, автор говорил, что открыт к любым предложениям. Так вот, почему бы не добавить скрытую механику в таверну? Возможность приходить в мир, не связанный с твоим классом была бы интересной. Сражение с Саске и Наруто в их полной силе, драка с Гоку и прочее. Ну и надеюсь, что не будет любовной драмы; отношения с игроками? Не очень хотелось бы, но окей. Отношения с жителями миров, к которым есть доступ? Было бы интересно. Особенно, если это про Игрока, который успешно построил такие отношения и умер. Что было бы дальше?
Absolutely loved this. Can't wait for more. It's my favorite type of fanfic where all the power systems are actually thought out instead of just taken at face value or changed to suit the Authors power fantasy. Though, hopefully now that the MC has looped back around to Star Wars, there won't be that much of a gap between chapter since the base of the power systems have been more thoroughly fleshed out... I hope I didn't just jinx it
Currently on chapter 78. Really good fanfic, the author has made realistic characters and development of said characters for the settings he’s presented them in. Great explanation and execution of power systems, author included the exploration of these worlds to have us learn with the MC and their views on them, Very on theme and subtlety for plot points for us to see without the use of flashbacks. I would highly recommend this book despite it not even being halfway done for fellow enjoys of the settings involved. Keep cooking man.
Even though updates are slow as hell the quality of every chapter is more than satisfactory
Although the worlds chosen are in oarts strange(I mean if you want a magic word why go for Harry potter over the more interesting options like the Nasuverse or Mushoku for example and why chose HxH over for Example JJK? They both have options to create conditions that benefit the one making them. The entire ability set Reileigh has created through his Hatsu exept maybe the sword of Babylon itself can easily be recreated with binding vows and the world of JJK doesn't lack a strong sword. Not to mention the worlds he already can acess like One piece or Marvel, even Naruto has some good swors like the Kusanagi series so why bother with the strange ability if something simmillar can easily be achieved by for example going to the marvel universe, adopting a Symbiote and letting it eat a devil fruit and some famous swords.) But overall the story is a good read with excellent writing and a lot more creativity I had thought possible. Normally when someone writes a story like this, it turns iut generic and boring with other people only existing to give the mc some power ups with maybe one or two targets for revenge among them who previously did some unspeakable things to him so the author can justify turning the main character into a murder hobo with the strange desire to capture all the pokemon or something. So it's great to see someone this talented making stories like these.
Absolutely excellent. The world building, but not only the world building of each individual world, but how all those power system interact and how the players mix into it is extraordinary. A truly excellent read, even if you don’t like some of thise anime/movies. Worth a read. I just wish the updates were more frequent.
I have to say that the setting is extremely creative. The story gets better and better as you read. Now, here’s a bit of critique. The first couple of chapters were an absolute slog. Pure unadulterated exposition. The first chapter is somewhat important. No matter what the author says. Don’t skip it. Around chapter 10 I realized what the problem with the story is. We connect with people and characters. If something is not related to characters or plot, it becomes a chore to read through. It feels like a text book. There is exposition and then the author uses that at times. There is no hook. Sure when the info is used, it feels good. But before that, it is a chore and irritation to read through. So, yeah, the story is good and very creative. But be patient. The payoff is good. Otherwise so many people wouldn’t like it. Sorry for the unorganized review, but typing in a tab is irritating. Anyways, thanks for reading. Give it a try and hope you have a day.
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I’ve seen this book before but I’ve always ignored it, but I decided to finally read it and I LOVE IT. This book while not my favorite one I’ve ever read it is still in my top 10 easily. One of the best fan fictions I have ever read and I seriously can’t wait to read more.
This is a great story I would love if this was the start of a new fanfic genre this is a beautifully written book I greatly enjoyed it and might use the idea Andale my own
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ please continue this book I really enjoy it and I really hope that you can continue it into the far future AKA 200 + chapters
All I can say is this is amazing I want more please I am ready for the clone wars arc I love star wars I love one piece so I hope we can get more of this
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ it's a very well done multiverse fanfic. the writing quality is great and the rest is even better, a breath of fresh air between thousands of harem novels
Great use of different anime power systems and recalibrating it to work on par to different power systems. My main issue for crossovers is when one power system is obviously more powerful than the other, and I don't see it here. Updates are on the slow side.
it is nice to see you are posting again iv been whating for this Since you stopped
the story is very good and very veried I'd say. but quite a few times now he's gone a very long time without updating he's gone months and months on and without updating but it's a great story read it if you get hooked continue to read it and even if it is like 2 3 4 months since they last updated it usually is just an aggravating weight. too lazy to actually write this down cuz I type way too slow so I'm just using Text to speech
THIS FAN FIC IS NEVER NOT RELEVANT[img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]
this is one of the best fanfictions out there with gnome writing about worlds nobody writes about but what makes it one of the is how in-depth gnome is with his writing
goated story ngl, I love imagining my own character concept. three classes would be warrior, hunter and ninja. my main plan would be to learn from Bulma about technology and then turn myself into an android with shadow clones and stuff and then I'd abuse the infinite ki and make a vow that all my abilities now use ki as its source and I'd always try to increase my ki output
One of the best stories I have read, the premise got be so absorbed so quickly it was insane. The world building as well is really good and somehow he has linked it together so well. I would love to see this premise be taken as a trend but i am addicted to it currently
if you are reading this review to see if it's worthwhile then let me tell you....
Your ability to craft compelling narratives and create vivid, memorable characters is truly impressive. Your latest book is a testament to your talent, offering readers a captivating story that lingers long after the final page. Your dedication to the craft of writing and your unique voice make your work stand out, engaging and inspiring those who read it.
Лучшее, что я читал за последние время. Единственное, что расстраивает это скорость выхода глав, я остановился, когда начался перерыв, но уже закончил за 2 дня всё, что вышло. Было бы здорово, будь у автора пара редакторов, чтобы помочь ему писать быстрее и исправлять ошибки, пока он продумывает сюжет. Ах, автор говорил, что открыт к любым предложениям. Так вот, почему бы не добавить скрытую механику в таверну? Возможность приходить в мир, не связанный с твоим классом была бы интересной. Сражение с Саске и Наруто в их полной силе, драка с Гоку и прочее. Ну и надеюсь, что не будет любовной драмы; отношения с игроками? Не очень хотелось бы, но окей. Отношения с жителями миров, к которым есть доступ? Было бы интересно. Особенно, если это про Игрока, который успешно построил такие отношения и умер. Что было бы дальше?