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best kanokari fanfic...plus others.....................................................................................................................................................................come back author-san
Buena historia, me enganche bastante al leerla sin darme cuenta ya termine de leer los 104 capítulos que tiene, pero me surge la pregunta va a seguir o ya fue abandonado, ya paso un año desde la última actualización. Me gustaría una respuesta. Un ¡saludo!
Straight up copy of the OG story. The only difference is that mc reincarnated into kazuya. Still a big simp. isn’t creative bro there is too many bad thing about this that amma just end it here😮💨
Not gonna lie, I'm digging this Fan-Fic more and more each chapter. Got a Question: Are you holding out on us with a few chapters that are hiding in a folder?
Could ahve been really good. Sadly this MC is stupid and has mental problems. Someone who dies of alcohol is named because he drank in such an excess as to kill himself. Then when you get another chance to live goes out drinking again and gets drunk. Basically the main characters is alcoholic. No one would drink after they die from alcohol poisoning no one would drink to the point where they do die of alcohol poisoning. Unless they're alcoholic. Then the other big problem with him is his taste in girls. Both of the girls that were introduced as possible love, interests or past love interests. All have mental issues. He keeps saying it's challenging girls. That's not it? You're not girls with minor issues. Or unique personalities. They're girls with mental issues. No healthy relationship starts with people with mental issues. And I don't want to see a character struggle and play games with girls. It's fun for no one. Always having to watch what you say. Watch your back, and always planning two steps ahead with someone who's supposed to love you. This guy is one of those guys who makes his life harder and then wonders why his life is so hard. Basically a pathetic person who self sabotages.
You get a 5* just for killing that retard. Thanks a lot ........................................................................................................................................................................
Though people criticized it heavily, I still think it's good. To make a romantic relationship of Alpha Male through a realistic approach is not a easy task..
It was good at first but I just felt like the romance became so dry and boring after a while. I’ve read a few romance novels and I was always binging them while smiling from ear to ear at the romance but in this book it was very hard for me to care at all after a while. At some point it just feels like the mc is one sidedly chasing after Chizuru while she makes no effort at all to reciprocate or makes up excuses as to why she doesn’t want to be with him.🤷♂️ I liked your writing style tho so that’s a plus.
Guys u need to read this, it’s very good romance fan fic how he soeak treat his woman flirt with woman his mindset, his ambition! Cheers for author that had done this masterpiece! I really enjoyed it and this come from a guy that read cultivation, naruto and love villain anti-villain don’t give a f to woman novel! I think i like the story very much bcs everything he do with his life is what I’ll do if i was reincarnated in a parallel earth and i know nithing about it!
Talking about "pure romance" then making it harem lol....................................................................................................
Es una historia muy entretenida, que me permitió tener un respiro de tantas historias parecidas de isekai y fanfic. Aunque me hubiera gustado que sea publicaciones aunque sean semanales, espero con ansias los capítulos de este mes, y los que siguen. Me encanta como el autor logró crear una trama entretenida y un harén en mi opinión bien logrado. Lo que si me tiene algo angustiado es la trama sobrenatural que el autor tenga pensado. Espero no exagere colocándolo en un universo alternativo super poderoso.
Look dude, I love your writing. please don't abandon it like you did with the previous one and please try to update more. Thank you
One of the best fan fics I've read yet (although I haven't read that many) Keep up the good work Author-san. [img=coins][img=recommend]
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Wish update stability was better but I am a fan of the symbiot fanfic and it’s the most popular so I happy you are updating the story that the majority of people enjoy.
author, did you drop this fanfic or just focusing on the symbiot fiction ?
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bro this story is realy good but we need more chapters here plz....... I realy love this story plz update :'(
If you read this because you hate original rent a girlfriend then don't it only seem good at the first few chapter after that he pretty much got simp mentality going and doing back and forth & back and forth rinse and repeat like that Saying that he will try it one more and give her one more chance ask for her date but in the end he doesnt care when she refused and just back to being simp really frustrating to read no different then the original at this point tbh Kinda regret waste so much time read to chapter 38 and hoping something would change but nah from simp to licking dog and back to being simp no different
The novel is good but some thing seem force like telling about miami and getting away scawt free.and author some time hide 18 secnes but they are on patreon.
This is one of the better fanfic out there.It definately worth reading. ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♥︎♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♥︎♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♥︎◇◇■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■
Author uses no sense of logic or reason to a characters traits or development. No women with any self respect, especially one as indepdent, would accept her boyfriend cheating on her… I suggest going outside and talking to real people.
I really liked the fan fiction until Chizuru agreed for having another woman I wanted this story to MC have only one love but then he has more. From what I know from reading KanoKari manga and anime Chizuru will never agree to this bullshit of a request from MC. Well you could say I only like Chizuru but that was the reason I started reading this novel to see how she'll react and how the story goes but after chapter 54 I lost any interest. But nonetheless I really enjoyed until then. I enjoyed there conversations it felt natural and real to their character. Good job author 👏 Would have given 5 stars if not for that.
best kanokari fanfic...plus others.....................................................................................................................................................................come back author-san
Buena historia, me enganche bastante al leerla sin darme cuenta ya termine de leer los 104 capítulos que tiene, pero me surge la pregunta va a seguir o ya fue abandonado, ya paso un año desde la última actualización. Me gustaría una respuesta. Un ¡saludo!
Straight up copy of the OG story. The only difference is that mc reincarnated into kazuya. Still a big simp. isn’t creative bro there is too many bad thing about this that amma just end it here😮💨
Not gonna lie, I'm digging this Fan-Fic more and more each chapter. Got a Question: Are you holding out on us with a few chapters that are hiding in a folder?
Could ahve been really good. Sadly this MC is stupid and has mental problems. Someone who dies of alcohol is named because he drank in such an excess as to kill himself. Then when you get another chance to live goes out drinking again and gets drunk. Basically the main characters is alcoholic. No one would drink after they die from alcohol poisoning no one would drink to the point where they do die of alcohol poisoning. Unless they're alcoholic. Then the other big problem with him is his taste in girls. Both of the girls that were introduced as possible love, interests or past love interests. All have mental issues. He keeps saying it's challenging girls. That's not it? You're not girls with minor issues. Or unique personalities. They're girls with mental issues. No healthy relationship starts with people with mental issues. And I don't want to see a character struggle and play games with girls. It's fun for no one. Always having to watch what you say. Watch your back, and always planning two steps ahead with someone who's supposed to love you. This guy is one of those guys who makes his life harder and then wonders why his life is so hard. Basically a pathetic person who self sabotages.
You get a 5* just for killing that retard. Thanks a lot ........................................................................................................................................................................
Though people criticized it heavily, I still think it's good. To make a romantic relationship of Alpha Male through a realistic approach is not a easy task..
It was good at first but I just felt like the romance became so dry and boring after a while. I’ve read a few romance novels and I was always binging them while smiling from ear to ear at the romance but in this book it was very hard for me to care at all after a while. At some point it just feels like the mc is one sidedly chasing after Chizuru while she makes no effort at all to reciprocate or makes up excuses as to why she doesn’t want to be with him.🤷♂️ I liked your writing style tho so that’s a plus.
Guys u need to read this, it’s very good romance fan fic how he soeak treat his woman flirt with woman his mindset, his ambition! Cheers for author that had done this masterpiece! I really enjoyed it and this come from a guy that read cultivation, naruto and love villain anti-villain don’t give a f to woman novel! I think i like the story very much bcs everything he do with his life is what I’ll do if i was reincarnated in a parallel earth and i know nithing about it!
Talking about "pure romance" then making it harem lol....................................................................................................
Es una historia muy entretenida, que me permitió tener un respiro de tantas historias parecidas de isekai y fanfic. Aunque me hubiera gustado que sea publicaciones aunque sean semanales, espero con ansias los capítulos de este mes, y los que siguen. Me encanta como el autor logró crear una trama entretenida y un harén en mi opinión bien logrado. Lo que si me tiene algo angustiado es la trama sobrenatural que el autor tenga pensado. Espero no exagere colocándolo en un universo alternativo super poderoso.
Look dude, I love your writing. please don't abandon it like you did with the previous one and please try to update more. Thank you
One of the best fan fics I've read yet (although I haven't read that many) Keep up the good work Author-san. [img=coins][img=recommend]
I like it.[изображение=рекомендовать][изображение=рекомендовать][изображение=рекомендовать][изображение=рекомендовать][изображение=рекомендовать]
Wish update stability was better but I am a fan of the symbiot fanfic and it’s the most popular so I happy you are updating the story that the majority of people enjoy.
author, did you drop this fanfic or just focusing on the symbiot fiction ?
Srx rougir d'être appelé belle ? , non mais ptn d'abruti [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
bro this story is realy good but we need more chapters here plz....... I realy love this story plz update :'(
If you read this because you hate original rent a girlfriend then don't it only seem good at the first few chapter after that he pretty much got simp mentality going and doing back and forth & back and forth rinse and repeat like that Saying that he will try it one more and give her one more chance ask for her date but in the end he doesnt care when she refused and just back to being simp really frustrating to read no different then the original at this point tbh Kinda regret waste so much time read to chapter 38 and hoping something would change but nah from simp to licking dog and back to being simp no different
The novel is good but some thing seem force like telling about miami and getting away scawt free.and author some time hide 18 secnes but they are on patreon.
This is one of the better fanfic out there.It definately worth reading. ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♥︎♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♥︎♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♥︎◇◇■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■
Author uses no sense of logic or reason to a characters traits or development. No women with any self respect, especially one as indepdent, would accept her boyfriend cheating on her… I suggest going outside and talking to real people.
I really liked the fan fiction until Chizuru agreed for having another woman I wanted this story to MC have only one love but then he has more. From what I know from reading KanoKari manga and anime Chizuru will never agree to this bullshit of a request from MC. Well you could say I only like Chizuru but that was the reason I started reading this novel to see how she'll react and how the story goes but after chapter 54 I lost any interest. But nonetheless I really enjoyed until then. I enjoyed there conversations it felt natural and real to their character. Good job author 👏 Would have given 5 stars if not for that.