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Who stops writing right before the big fight??? I don’t know if this Is common with the other but I also noticed that there are huge gaps between updates so this will probably be the only story I read by them.
I read up to ch 12 so far, it seems interesting so the main problem is Does his resetting qi give him any advantages? I just wanna know Im too impatient to read everything and find out.
we are approaching 130 chapters and our MC is still not close to the peak of the 1st level 😡. Author , I get that u want to publish many chapters but pls make it enjoyable. fighting scenes are almost nonexistent , alchemy is now seeing the light , body tempering came along and disappeared and above all we know very little the world, sects, kingdoms etc.Usually when one goes around carefree they are usually very very strong 😮💨. Pls give us something great to like and discuss about. I'll be back in 2weeks to check it again, HOPEFULLY 👋
Great story and character development.But will his Qi keep reseting in the future or will it stop?
I love this writing style, the interaction between the characters are entertaining. I especially love Archie and Michael's relationship. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Great start to the story so far, Michael seems like a typical lazy teenager before the tragedy strikes. It will be great to see how he matures, you can already see how his character has changed. Waiting for the cultivation aspect to start, as it's been pretty absent so far. Good luck Author
Story reads very well, character dialogue doesn't seem forced and no huge info dumps. Pace seems a little slow in the beginning but hoping things kick off soon. Can't wait for next chapter Author
Okay, i only read 4 chapters till now. Let me tell you, i am very impressed. I don't usually read about cultivation novels but i am happy i gave it a try. Your writing style is also very unique that's why i enjoyed reading it more. Hopefully you get more views. Great work. [img=recommend][img=update]
A good read so far! The pacing is nice and easy flowing, and the way you kntroduce your character is great! I usually dont read this kind of novel due to my lack of knowledge of cultivation, but it's so interesting that I had to know what comes next! Definitely added to my collection
The author did not waste time by having the story pop! The story is entertaining and the ML is a well-round likable character. There's a lot of potential in the story, and I look forward to future updates! Only thing I’d comment on is a more in-depth explanation to the op’s world and qi (but maybe that's just me or will be presented over time). Overall, I enjoyed the concept of the story and see great potential from the author! Great job!
The book is very nice, i like the descriptive state, its only fee chapters but its worth, Micheal is my favorite, hOpe to see more of him[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This book is great. The writing is outstanding. The pacing of the story is easy to flow with. And the plot is excellent Great job author GO!!! WE WANT MORE!!
Love it bro, you done a great job writing the book, I like the paced of the story unfolding. Great storyline, and the writing quality is great. I will re-review this as the story progressed great job author, loved it
Author here. This is my first contracted book with Webnovel. The book is about Michael's journey to avenge his families murder after he discovers them burnt to a crisp in his home town while he was out picking herbs. There is no concrete evidence to begin with as to who or why, so it may seem like the whole revenge plot is kind of vague. However please bear with me! There is an amazing story I'm trying to tell with plenty of twists and turns. I apologise if the chapters may seem a little rushed in the beginning or nonsensical. A lot of my inspirations in this novel come from Eastern Cultivation novels ie. (ISSTH, Coiling Dragon, AWE etc.) So if you've had exposure to those then great! you're halfway there. I'm happy to answer any questions in the comments section if you need clarity on certain aspects of Cultivation. Qi, Storage dimensions etc. Finally I want to thank those of you who are reading and hope that you continue to enjoy my work and help me grow. Also worth noting that I am from Australia, hence you may see some UK spelling rather than US. (favour, prioritise etc). Thank you again
Who stops writing right before the big fight??? I don’t know if this Is common with the other but I also noticed that there are huge gaps between updates so this will probably be the only story I read by them.
I read up to ch 12 so far, it seems interesting so the main problem is Does his resetting qi give him any advantages? I just wanna know Im too impatient to read everything and find out.
we are approaching 130 chapters and our MC is still not close to the peak of the 1st level 😡. Author , I get that u want to publish many chapters but pls make it enjoyable. fighting scenes are almost nonexistent , alchemy is now seeing the light , body tempering came along and disappeared and above all we know very little the world, sects, kingdoms etc.Usually when one goes around carefree they are usually very very strong 😮💨. Pls give us something great to like and discuss about. I'll be back in 2weeks to check it again, HOPEFULLY 👋
Great story and character development.But will his Qi keep reseting in the future or will it stop?
I love this writing style, the interaction between the characters are entertaining. I especially love Archie and Michael's relationship. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Great start to the story so far, Michael seems like a typical lazy teenager before the tragedy strikes. It will be great to see how he matures, you can already see how his character has changed. Waiting for the cultivation aspect to start, as it's been pretty absent so far. Good luck Author
Story reads very well, character dialogue doesn't seem forced and no huge info dumps. Pace seems a little slow in the beginning but hoping things kick off soon. Can't wait for next chapter Author
Okay, i only read 4 chapters till now. Let me tell you, i am very impressed. I don't usually read about cultivation novels but i am happy i gave it a try. Your writing style is also very unique that's why i enjoyed reading it more. Hopefully you get more views. Great work. [img=recommend][img=update]
A good read so far! The pacing is nice and easy flowing, and the way you kntroduce your character is great! I usually dont read this kind of novel due to my lack of knowledge of cultivation, but it's so interesting that I had to know what comes next! Definitely added to my collection
The author did not waste time by having the story pop! The story is entertaining and the ML is a well-round likable character. There's a lot of potential in the story, and I look forward to future updates! Only thing I’d comment on is a more in-depth explanation to the op’s world and qi (but maybe that's just me or will be presented over time). Overall, I enjoyed the concept of the story and see great potential from the author! Great job!
The book is very nice, i like the descriptive state, its only fee chapters but its worth, Micheal is my favorite, hOpe to see more of him[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This book is great. The writing is outstanding. The pacing of the story is easy to flow with. And the plot is excellent Great job author GO!!! WE WANT MORE!!
Love it bro, you done a great job writing the book, I like the paced of the story unfolding. Great storyline, and the writing quality is great. I will re-review this as the story progressed great job author, loved it
Author here. This is my first contracted book with Webnovel. The book is about Michael's journey to avenge his families murder after he discovers them burnt to a crisp in his home town while he was out picking herbs. There is no concrete evidence to begin with as to who or why, so it may seem like the whole revenge plot is kind of vague. However please bear with me! There is an amazing story I'm trying to tell with plenty of twists and turns. I apologise if the chapters may seem a little rushed in the beginning or nonsensical. A lot of my inspirations in this novel come from Eastern Cultivation novels ie. (ISSTH, Coiling Dragon, AWE etc.) So if you've had exposure to those then great! you're halfway there. I'm happy to answer any questions in the comments section if you need clarity on certain aspects of Cultivation. Qi, Storage dimensions etc. Finally I want to thank those of you who are reading and hope that you continue to enjoy my work and help me grow. Also worth noting that I am from Australia, hence you may see some UK spelling rather than US. (favour, prioritise etc). Thank you again