Encanto: Ice Man

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Arkmediz

you could have added the powers of the character Jack Frost from the movie secret of the guardians because in addition to the basic powers over ice he can also fly being that the characters you are using as a base cannot

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ObamaUchiha

like it's decent but the main character doesn't fit into this place at all, and these tags you are using are overkill. enough power to kill everyone on earth a trillion times over, freeze time etc. my point is that this story will probably just be boring, the only goal he has is to dive into art, this could world in a comic or picture book though.

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Link_Kokiri_Fan

Hello, author here. This is being written on my phone without an editor and for fun. I have not and most likely will not write long chapters, in fact most will probably be only a few hundred words each, no more than a thousand or so if I really get the writing bug.

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Jerry_Davison

I really hope you're going to continue this book I love it and I can't wait to see the next chapter if you're continuing it that is