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I daresay it's one of the best story about Overlord. Don't believe me just try it on your own.
this fic become quite awful when the new mc acting casual to ainz. and ainz in this fic is braindead instead of canon ainz. also the noc loyalty in ainz basically nerfed to the ground with hentai logic. not for OVERLORD canon fan. but a good hentai read ig
Five Stars because i trust you. I believe you can make this book completed too 🤗
the book it's amazing in every way I hope you continue to release more chapters
No tomes en cuenta esta reseña. Padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru
Not even a completed series yet and somehow already the GOAT of Overlord Fan Fictions. Character's are depicted well and the changes are reasonable. The Main Character thought process and genesis is completely possible within the actual Overlord canon and while Ainz is still in the story and is technically his boss it actually works very well. Can't wait to see more updates.
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Sinceramente creo que es una de las historias más entretenidas de Overlord, la historia no se hace lenta ni aburrida como en la gran mayoría. El protagonista es de los mejores que me he topado, es despiadado pero no cruel, es inteligente pero no pedante, es orgulloso pero no engreído, y sobre todo tiene suficiente respeto por la vida como para no abandona sus ideales y su "humanidad". Una joya que recomiendo encarecidamente.
Hello author I wanted to make a suggestion for s** for , please add sounds and dialogs between Mc and his lovers during s** scene and please make the s** longer.
This is literally my favorite overlord fanfic. From the character interactions to the gaining of power through saved bug items to achieve godhood. This is a very fun read if you give it a chance.
I just realized you’re the author for Broly Saiyan of Legend because you definitely 2 for 2 right now for good stories.
recuerdo haber leido 2 fanfic de overlord, pero a pesar de ser buenos, son similares al original, tragedia, oscuro, psicologico , esas cosas. y sin romance, por eso me aburri. hasta ahora no encuentro uno bueno, y este se malogra al tener un mc que odia a su esposa, relleno ridiculo.
The premise is interesting and the writing quality is okay. However, the MC has rocks for brains and no interest in bettering himself. He was also immediately obsessed with albedo before he even got to know her. Anyway, this is a mid slice of life with a cringe harem MC. Take that as you will.
Espero que sigas con la historia . . . . Mmm. . . . . . . .. . yo hogxugxkgxigxihxihcihcihclhcicihcigcgic . . . .hvihckgcgckg g jf jf f jf jf jf fj jf kg kg kg h kg tk kg . . Me . . .
good story Regarding the structure of the mc and the interactions with the rest of the character, it is quite natural and in line with the personalities. The idea is quite innovative and exploitable. Glad someone finally used it, Overlord's world knowledge is pretty good too. The only negative would be the romance and the whole structure is too over the top, but it's understandable considering that you wanted to make a harem story with the setup the heroines already have.
pretty great story honestly it has potential to be your best fic but the weeky update kills me where the chapter author
It's pretty good. You wouldn't be wasting your time reading this novel. BUT the author made the weird decision of adding characters from other sources (nier automata, one punch man) AND then even giving them OC names. Every time you wrote about "sueko" (or whatever her name was), my brain pulled up a blank mannequin and it ruined the experience because I had to think "was this 2B? or the other Android?"
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it seriously don't have potential, . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . .. .. . . . . . . . . .......................................... . . ...........................................................................
The story Theme is good and but i don't really like your setting for MC ITS awful for my mind
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This is one of the best fanficts I must have read. The MC and the story is has an original development and very good writing. Characters don't feel left out and writer has a good grasp of the original world Keep up the good work author-kun 👍
The kingdom of God has come near. Repent and believe the good news! John3.16 For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only Son, that whoever believes in him shall not perish but have eternal life. 17 For God did not send his Son into the world to condemn the world, but to save the world through him. 18 Whoever believes in him is not condemned, but whoever does not believe stands condemned already because they have not believed in the name of God’s one and only Son. 19 This is the verdict: Light has come into the world, but people loved darkness instead of light because their deeds were evil. 20 Everyone who does evil hates the light, and will not come into the light for fear that their deeds will be exposed. 21 But whoever lives by the truth comes into the light, so that it may be seen plainly that what they have done has been done in the sight of God. For more information: youtube.com/@PastorPatrickWinfrey
Mc doesnt hates albedo! Dont trust other reviews. He is just trying not to get hanged because they can think he has been mind controlled or something else. He tries to act like he hates her while trying to smooth things out for a proper character change so they wont get suspicious.
I will be reading this with great interest hopefully you make a really good story
I daresay it's one of the best story about Overlord. Don't believe me just try it on your own.
this fic become quite awful when the new mc acting casual to ainz. and ainz in this fic is braindead instead of canon ainz. also the noc loyalty in ainz basically nerfed to the ground with hentai logic. not for OVERLORD canon fan. but a good hentai read ig
Five Stars because i trust you. I believe you can make this book completed too 🤗
the book it's amazing in every way I hope you continue to release more chapters
No tomes en cuenta esta reseña. Padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru
Not even a completed series yet and somehow already the GOAT of Overlord Fan Fictions. Character's are depicted well and the changes are reasonable. The Main Character thought process and genesis is completely possible within the actual Overlord canon and while Ainz is still in the story and is technically his boss it actually works very well. Can't wait to see more updates.
Muito bom ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Sinceramente creo que es una de las historias más entretenidas de Overlord, la historia no se hace lenta ni aburrida como en la gran mayoría. El protagonista es de los mejores que me he topado, es despiadado pero no cruel, es inteligente pero no pedante, es orgulloso pero no engreído, y sobre todo tiene suficiente respeto por la vida como para no abandona sus ideales y su "humanidad". Una joya que recomiendo encarecidamente.
Hello author I wanted to make a suggestion for s** for , please add sounds and dialogs between Mc and his lovers during s** scene and please make the s** longer.
This is literally my favorite overlord fanfic. From the character interactions to the gaining of power through saved bug items to achieve godhood. This is a very fun read if you give it a chance.
I just realized you’re the author for Broly Saiyan of Legend because you definitely 2 for 2 right now for good stories.
recuerdo haber leido 2 fanfic de overlord, pero a pesar de ser buenos, son similares al original, tragedia, oscuro, psicologico , esas cosas. y sin romance, por eso me aburri. hasta ahora no encuentro uno bueno, y este se malogra al tener un mc que odia a su esposa, relleno ridiculo.
The premise is interesting and the writing quality is okay. However, the MC has rocks for brains and no interest in bettering himself. He was also immediately obsessed with albedo before he even got to know her. Anyway, this is a mid slice of life with a cringe harem MC. Take that as you will.
Espero que sigas con la historia . . . . Mmm. . . . . . . .. . yo hogxugxkgxigxihxihcihcihclhcicihcigcgic . . . .hvihckgcgckg g jf jf f jf jf jf fj jf kg kg kg h kg tk kg . . Me . . .
good story Regarding the structure of the mc and the interactions with the rest of the character, it is quite natural and in line with the personalities. The idea is quite innovative and exploitable. Glad someone finally used it, Overlord's world knowledge is pretty good too. The only negative would be the romance and the whole structure is too over the top, but it's understandable considering that you wanted to make a harem story with the setup the heroines already have.
pretty great story honestly it has potential to be your best fic but the weeky update kills me where the chapter author
It's pretty good. You wouldn't be wasting your time reading this novel. BUT the author made the weird decision of adding characters from other sources (nier automata, one punch man) AND then even giving them OC names. Every time you wrote about "sueko" (or whatever her name was), my brain pulled up a blank mannequin and it ruined the experience because I had to think "was this 2B? or the other Android?"
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it seriously don't have potential, . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . .. .. . . . . . . . . .......................................... . . ...........................................................................
The story Theme is good and but i don't really like your setting for MC ITS awful for my mind
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This is one of the best fanficts I must have read. The MC and the story is has an original development and very good writing. Characters don't feel left out and writer has a good grasp of the original world Keep up the good work author-kun 👍
The kingdom of God has come near. Repent and believe the good news! John3.16 For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only Son, that whoever believes in him shall not perish but have eternal life. 17 For God did not send his Son into the world to condemn the world, but to save the world through him. 18 Whoever believes in him is not condemned, but whoever does not believe stands condemned already because they have not believed in the name of God’s one and only Son. 19 This is the verdict: Light has come into the world, but people loved darkness instead of light because their deeds were evil. 20 Everyone who does evil hates the light, and will not come into the light for fear that their deeds will be exposed. 21 But whoever lives by the truth comes into the light, so that it may be seen plainly that what they have done has been done in the sight of God. For more information: youtube.com/@PastorPatrickWinfrey
Mc doesnt hates albedo! Dont trust other reviews. He is just trying not to get hanged because they can think he has been mind controlled or something else. He tries to act like he hates her while trying to smooth things out for a proper character change so they wont get suspicious.
I will be reading this with great interest hopefully you make a really good story
Was clearly written by a middle schooler. Super cliche. 0/10.