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suprb content and I like it very much but increase the number of chapters like 3 chapters per week
The way to describe this novel is this: EDGELOR OC was the most powerful being in the DxD Univers by the time he was a teenager. Practically, if you love OP characters, this story is for you, but if you are someone like me that hates OP characters that become OP in like 5 chapters you will hate this.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
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You make him a fallen angel or half in first chapter and then remove in the second? Idk why you made that connection in first place if you are going to remove it right after you
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Seriously, that's all about history, I'm disappointed author, there wasn't even a construction and resolution of the mc's character, we didn't even see a fight against his enemies, you just made a description that he conquered all the domains of death and destruction. With all 11 chapters the only one that had a character growth of the mc was when he was reborn as a shadow monarch
I like it it just keep getting better and better idk why other people no like this .............................................................................................................................
unfortunately in chapter 5 it comes across as if the MC were a masochist, which is unfortunately exactly the opposite of what I was hoping for. I hoped that the MC is dominant and maybe also a sadist. But if you like masochistic MCs have fun
Very good story till now especially liking the main character with ashborns power///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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This is very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Please continue! I be waiting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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VEry good novel ????????????????????????????????/////////<<<<<<<<<,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>..>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
suprb content and I like it very much but increase the number of chapters like 3 chapters per week
The way to describe this novel is this: EDGELOR OC was the most powerful being in the DxD Univers by the time he was a teenager. Practically, if you love OP characters, this story is for you, but if you are someone like me that hates OP characters that become OP in like 5 chapters you will hate this.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
Gran trabajo!! 👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
You make him a fallen angel or half in first chapter and then remove in the second? Idk why you made that connection in first place if you are going to remove it right after you
Ты как автор мертв в моих глазах. Ты как автор мертв в моих глазах. Ты как автор мертв в моих глазах. Ты как автор мертв в моих глазах. Ты как автор мертв в моих глазах. Ты как автор мертв в моих глазах. Ты как автор мертв в моих глазах. Ты как автор мертв в моих глазах.
Seriously, that's all about history, I'm disappointed author, there wasn't even a construction and resolution of the mc's character, we didn't even see a fight against his enemies, you just made a description that he conquered all the domains of death and destruction. With all 11 chapters the only one that had a character growth of the mc was when he was reborn as a shadow monarch
I like it it just keep getting better and better idk why other people no like this .............................................................................................................................
unfortunately in chapter 5 it comes across as if the MC were a masochist, which is unfortunately exactly the opposite of what I was hoping for. I hoped that the MC is dominant and maybe also a sadist. But if you like masochistic MCs have fun
Very good story till now especially liking the main character with ashborns power///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ below mid. ...... ....... ....... ...... ....... ...... ...... ... ..... ....... ........ ....... ...... ...... ......... ....... ...........
This is very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Please continue! I be waiting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!