3รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
แบ่งปันความคิดของคุณกับผู้อื่น
เขียนรีวิว
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
This is my first ever story on Webnovel. I'd really appreciate if I got some reviews so I can have feedback. I aim to make this story more enjoyable for you after all.
great start, and I like the mc. something I noticed is one of your scenes, the one in the alley is in another fic and he pretty much used the same mo to be padmes guard. I am guessing he copied you since he used a character name from another story here for the mc. hope you start back up.
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ This is my first ever story on Webnovel. I'd really appreciate if I got some reviews so I can have feedback. I aim to make this story more enjoyable for you after all.
great start, and I like the mc. something I noticed is one of your scenes, the one in the alley is in another fic and he pretty much used the same mo to be padmes guard. I am guessing he copied you since he used a character name from another story here for the mc. hope you start back up.