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There's a really good story here probably the grammar isn't at an acceptable level. and the story isn't worth having to auto correct it all in my head while I read this. No doubt other people can ignore it and find this story entertaining. the author does warn you so I didn't lower the rating any further. its possible the story could be a 5/5 otherwise but im going to have to pass on it. good luck!
so so so much, but the only problem is there is mistakes here and there with the grammar but seeing as the author admitted to writing this while at lunch in school I understand typing fast and messing up.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
فقط يجب أن أكتب مراجعة من فئة الخمس نجوم لأن ما يمكنني قوله ، أنا متحيز للمؤلف. أحبهم كتب أمنية كاملة مؤلف وكتاب جيد يستحق هذا التصنيف [img = fp]
Currently Chapter 4... I hope the grammar improves.. Also the word count should need to increase too. . The interaction between the characters seems dry and that's kinna issue for me but there's still room for improvements. Some edit from here and there and your good. ... Maybe with editor or using Grammar checker in the web will be nice.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
I whould give it's 5 star ,because mc attitude with girls is quite admirable. He doesn't create some useless drama and wants to take girls which he liked. That's whould be already enough for a good reading time. Unfortunately, author is buthurt stupid mongrel. That's dislikes a useless trophy wifes (which I totally agree with) and wants to make things more "logical". Let's look at his closely. 11 years old reincarnator tells his mommy that he takes over her son body - it's great that this stupidity was glosed over soon, but just think about it. Let it sink. How dumb is this? Don't get me started that relationship and interaction between them, is literally one paragraph. What readers supposed to think? Does he start to see her as his actual mother even though he does have family before? No answers, just assume and pretend that this is right thing to do. Okay... Fine. Every girls start to train with weapons and different skills to be useful... Let me tell you, they wasn't intrested in any of this skills. They not coming from martial arts or shounen anime. And author just saying, yeah from now on they all useful. Talented and expirienced in killing and taking care of themselves... Normal,little girls, living an easy life in modern time...just with a bit training talking about claiming others life. They could take anothers route to help out mc, like working on getting money. Actually be housewifes ,whatever feminists talking it's a good way to support husband. Learning different skills in future like alchemy, blacksmitting, anything at all. Living they lives as normal girls. No, because author was hurt by stupid cringe, he create different stupid cringe and claim this stupidity as smart decision. Well f7cking done. Brilliant. Now I am buthurt. Thank you,mongrel.
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It’s just another harem fic but mc quickly revealed his system and reincarnation, just a warning to those who hate such actions such as myself
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great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍
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Btw... there might be some crossover in another world to like HOTD + Triage X and etc. This fic will have a lot of harem so basically it's pokemon fic where MC take girl left and right. So bear with it. So enjoy and don't complain to much~ because I has warn you~
For starting it's quite good... I came here because the cover photo. and you know what? This Author don't disappoint me. [img=recommend]
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There's a really good story here probably the grammar isn't at an acceptable level. and the story isn't worth having to auto correct it all in my head while I read this. No doubt other people can ignore it and find this story entertaining. the author does warn you so I didn't lower the rating any further. its possible the story could be a 5/5 otherwise but im going to have to pass on it. good luck!
so so so much, but the only problem is there is mistakes here and there with the grammar but seeing as the author admitted to writing this while at lunch in school I understand typing fast and messing up.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ فقط يجب أن أكتب مراجعة من فئة الخمس نجوم لأن ما يمكنني قوله ، أنا متحيز للمؤلف. أحبهم كتب أمنية كاملة مؤلف وكتاب جيد يستحق هذا التصنيف [img = fp]
Currently Chapter 4... I hope the grammar improves.. Also the word count should need to increase too. . The interaction between the characters seems dry and that's kinna issue for me but there's still room for improvements. Some edit from here and there and your good. ... Maybe with editor or using Grammar checker in the web will be nice.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
I whould give it's 5 star ,because mc attitude with girls is quite admirable. He doesn't create some useless drama and wants to take girls which he liked. That's whould be already enough for a good reading time. Unfortunately, author is buthurt stupid mongrel. That's dislikes a useless trophy wifes (which I totally agree with) and wants to make things more "logical". Let's look at his closely. 11 years old reincarnator tells his mommy that he takes over her son body - it's great that this stupidity was glosed over soon, but just think about it. Let it sink. How dumb is this? Don't get me started that relationship and interaction between them, is literally one paragraph. What readers supposed to think? Does he start to see her as his actual mother even though he does have family before? No answers, just assume and pretend that this is right thing to do. Okay... Fine. Every girls start to train with weapons and different skills to be useful... Let me tell you, they wasn't intrested in any of this skills. They not coming from martial arts or shounen anime. And author just saying, yeah from now on they all useful. Talented and expirienced in killing and taking care of themselves... Normal,little girls, living an easy life in modern time...just with a bit training talking about claiming others life. They could take anothers route to help out mc, like working on getting money. Actually be housewifes ,whatever feminists talking it's a good way to support husband. Learning different skills in future like alchemy, blacksmitting, anything at all. Living they lives as normal girls. No, because author was hurt by stupid cringe, he create different stupid cringe and claim this stupidity as smart decision. Well f7cking done. Brilliant. Now I am buthurt. Thank you,mongrel.
HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
It’s just another harem fic but mc quickly revealed his system and reincarnation, just a warning to those who hate such actions such as myself
Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't Drop! Don't 💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓
great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍
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Btw... there might be some crossover in another world to like HOTD + Triage X and etc. This fic will have a lot of harem so basically it's pokemon fic where MC take girl left and right. So bear with it. So enjoy and don't complain to much~ because I has warn you~
For starting it's quite good... I came here because the cover photo. and you know what? This Author don't disappoint me. [img=recommend]
366224 Thank me later 😉 366224 Thank me later 😉 366224 Thank me later 😉 366224 Thank me later 😉 366224 Thank me later 😉 366224 Thank me later 😉 366224 Thank me later 😉 366224 Thank me later 😉 366224 Thank me later 😉 366224 Thank me later 😉 366224 Thank me later 😉 366224 Thank me later 😉 366224 Thank me later 😉 366224 Thank me later 😉 366224 Thank me later 😉 366224 Thank me later 😉 366224 Thank me later 😉 366224 Thank me later 😉 366224 Thank me later 😉 366224 Thank me later 😉 366224 Thank me later 😉 366224 Thank me later 😉 366224 Thank me later 😉 366224 Thank me later 😉 366224 Thank me later 😉
Shameless Author here for liking his own fanfic so... don't mind me