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Welcome to Night City 2077! Amazing technological progress and horrible social inequality. Extreme wealth and astonishing crime rates. Corporates, street gangs and runners. What they have in common? Violence. With violence come wounds and injuries. This is where you step in. Trauma Team. But remember we ain't saints we work for cash only. So check their balance and insurance first! Now turn on the music we got a job Trauma Team !

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Batcard
LV 14

MC somehow gets to Cyberpunk 2077 world or a few years before at least. Hasn’t gotten to “canon” but anyway he joins Trauma Team and we get to see the crazy stuffs Trauma Team gets to deal with every day. I love the situations and story. MC is slowly getting his “build” together and I can’t wait for more chapters!

1yr
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Darkmusho

I can't wait to see what you do with this considering there's not that many cyberpunk fanfics out there. keep up the amazing work I'm rooting for you all the way

1yr
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AnotherAtlas

The grammar makes me look twice every two seconds to see if I misread something. The story is forced bs, i'd rather he had transmigrated directly into a newbie of the trauma team. The mc's reactions are generic and cringy. Also the whole "I predicted that i'm in trouble cause of a bad feeling" trope is a bit overused, especially in non supernatural power worlds. It's like what, did you unlock ultra instinct or something?

1yr
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Zaelum

Not bad. Hopefully we can see an end to this fanfic. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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1yr
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ThatOneGUy

Book is fine, author needs to touch up in grammar though, some characters speak like cavemen and the writing is inconsistent when it comes to proper grammar, punctuation and vocabulary, the author I also suggest should do some more research into firearms, the technical details of them, and weapons in general.. Writing quality is down to a 3 due to authors grammar inconsistentcy World background as well due to his clear lack of knowledge of military tactics and weapons and lack of research..

1yr
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moonlitsummer

I don’t write many of these reviews but I have to say this is a great novel. The author brought the character into the world a little off, but the growth and struggle while having a dark sense of humor that you would hear in the field helps paint vivid and interesting characters.

1yr
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Konrad_The_Fourth

The concept of the fanfic is good, but fix your grammar first, bye

1yr
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SomethingMalefic

Just writing this review because I've kind of lost interest because of the fact that he will probably leave trauma team. I'm not sure if he does because I've not read that far but its the main reason I liked this fanfic, it was cool and unique to see a trauma team members daily life and without that its not as unique.

1yr
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rthreatt

Liked the overall story, the various different cases, the small charcter development and pulling in different part of the cyberpunk world but the story gets distracting when there are writing errors or misspelled names/words. I would appreciate it if you would let me edit the story to fix those errors.

3d
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AoDlightwolf

He needs to fix the grammar it hurts to read. please, author, get a proofreader.

9d
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Slushy_Apollo

Overall a good novel but the grammar is beyond awful

1yr
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Dao_of_Rebirth

Amazing, I love this story so much. chapter 22 was a nice plot twist. Really really looking forward to more.

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1yr
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SomethingMalefic

love it. its a cool and unique read. quality: 5. really good no problems. development: 4 i only put 4 because it doesn't seem to have much of a story but that's actually preferable to me. I just wanted people to know that right now its not that story driven, more just daily life of a trauma team member. design: 5 no problems from me. it would be nice if you added a bit more to the other team members that didn't get much attention but apart from that great. stability: 5 I'm not really sure about this one, I'll pit 5 stars but we'll just have to wait and see. background: 5 quite fleshed out. it doesn't seem like you just skimmed over the wiki which is good and I can tell there's heart in it.

1yr
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Rahimus
LV 13 Badge

sorry for bad grammar english is not my first language. however i really like this story and wanted to say some nice words. i really like the characters and the fact that he went with trauma team, the main character isnt op and has a nice personality. the action scenes are good written and i am interestes in seeing how the author is going to expand the story and how it is going to progress.

1yr
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xAr4m1s

aburrido, aparte de que es todo el rato los puto mismo, tiene un equipo > completa misiones > cosas locas > se desintegra el equipo, todo el rato. Cuando por fin crees que algo va a cambiar mesclando con personajes principales o va haber algún romance, pues no era bait todo sigue igual. y así como 4 veces ya. es horrible y encima no cambia nada del canon del juego o de la serie. te hace creer que va a haber un romance con Sasha y no, se va y no vuelve nunca mas en la historia, es lo mismo que si le hubieran matado. es muy repetitivo y carece algo interesante que deje con ganas de mas, es esta imagen.

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1mth
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Sailova_Sailo

I'll just let the ⭐ talk..................

11mth
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MrLo4ding

I like this fanfic a lot. The writing and English have a few mistakes but it really is better than some fanfics I have read. The concept of the fanfic and the development of the story is good. In all this is my favorite CyberPunk fanfic.

11mth
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Zero_Stare

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11mth
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_DEKIM_

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11mth
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Orions

Great story, not a lot of thing to say to be honest apart from the fact that if the author changed the title to "The Penguins Commando" i wouldn't be surprised XD. Writing Quality (5/5): Nothing to say since i didn't see any grammatical error (not that i could since English isn't my 1st language) and his writing is good enough to make you laugh easily. Even if, from my understanding, he write his story in his 1st language than translate it to English so it's good! Stability of Updates (4/5) : The only reason why i choose 4 and not 5 it's because it's not a lot more each week. But that's not really important since he add more chapter, once a week. Story Development (4/5) : Great beginning an interesting way to introduce the MC to his new reality and a realistic one in the Cyberpunk clusterf*ck. And as the story goes on, the veil of "innocence" is being pull away from you to look at the real face of the Corporation and to be fair i'm even impress that there is some "good" guy in there. Character Design (5/5) : One word, Simplicity. I will not spoil but when he arrive he is like a blank sheet, a really Pure one from Cyberpunk perspective. So No magic or anything like a perks from a ROB just straight in his "adventure". And for the last part... Cat. World background (4/5): Same as Stab of Update, the only reason i don't set it to MAX is because i don't know enough about Cyberpunk Lore to accurately say that there isn't any hole in there but since everything make sense and if you go on the wiki all the thing that are not explained in the story will be say there.

11mth
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Chapter 83: Who's tougher? 10 days ago

จำนวน 1

  1. 1
    Welcome to Night City ! 1 years ago
  2. 2
    Quick Start 1 years ago
  3. 3
    Case 001 - Lost Manhood and Chase 1 years ago
  4. 4
    Case 002 - Meat bag 1 years ago
  5. 5
    Having a break. 1 years ago
  6. 6
    Case 003 - Meet the psycho 1 years ago
  7. 7
    Case 004 - Rich edgerunner. 1 years ago
  8. 8
    Case 005 - Drugs, Sex and Panic at the disco. 1 years ago
  9. 9
    Grab dragon by his.... 1 years ago
  10. 10
    ......shank you! 1 years ago
  11. 11
    Case 006 - I love brothels, boys! 1 years ago
  12. 12
    Case 007 - Part 1(secret name) 1 years ago
  13. 13
    Case 007 - Part 2. (secret name) 1 years ago
  14. 14
    Announcement 1 years ago
  15. 15
    Time to get some souvenirs.... 1 years ago
  16. 16
    ....from Lion's den. 1 years ago
  17. 17
    Rock stars either burn bright or fade away 1 years ago
  18. 18
    Fear and Loathing in Night City 1 years ago
  19. 19
    Show must go on. 1 years ago
  20. 20
    Case 008 - Afterlife and Alive Only 1 years ago
  21. 21
    Awakening and Debts (Part 1) 1 years ago
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    Awakening and Debts Part 2 1 years ago
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    Awakening and Debts Part 3 1 years ago
  24. 24
    Down to Abyss 1 years ago
  25. 25
    Traps and Runs 1 years ago
  26. 26
    Run! Morons Run! 1 years ago
  27. 27
    Fears within. Part 1 1 years ago
  28. 28
    Fears within Part 2. (No Gods, No Masters, No Chains) 1 years ago
  29. 29
    Return to good old shithole. Part 1. 1 years ago
  30. 30
    Return to good old shithole. Part 2. 1 years ago
  31. 31
    Case 009 - Is that you Skynet? 1 years ago
  32. 32
    Bulldog fight under a rug. 1 years ago
  33. 33
    Case 010 - Nobody expects..... (Part 1) 1 years ago
  34. 34
    Case 010 - Nobody expects....(Part 2) 1 years ago
  35. 35
    Little announcement 1 years ago
  36. 36
    Case 011 - Hazardous Toys 1 years ago
  37. 37
    Case 012 -A set-up. 1 years ago
  38. 38
    House always wins 1 years ago
  39. 39
    Trauma Team's got talent 1 years ago
  40. 40
    New toys 1 years ago
  41. 41
    Case 013 - Test Drive 1 years ago
  42. 42
     Case 014- Meet the Cyberpsycho.....client.  1 years ago
  43. 43
    Going to write and stockpile 1 years ago
  44. 44
    Free Flight. 1 years ago
  45. 45
    Free Flight. Part 2 1 years ago
  46. 46
    Free Flight. The end. 1 years ago
  47. 47
    Case 015- Puppy. Part 1. 1 years ago
  48. 48
    Case 015-Puppy. Part 2. 1 years ago
  49. 49
    Stopping 1 years ago
  50. 50
    Friends in high places. Part 1. 1 years ago
  51. 51
    Friends in high places. Part 2 1 years ago
  52. 52
    Case 016 - The Dirty Trick. 1 years ago
  53. 53
    An educational spanking. 1 years ago
  54. 54
    Young, Stupid, One of Us. Part 1. 1 years ago
  55. 55
    Young, Stupid, One of Us. Part 2. 1 years ago
  56. 56
    Head Hunting 1 years ago
  57. 57
    Penguin Commandos are set! 1 years ago
  58. 58
    Case 017 - Improper Education 1 years ago
  59. 59
    Cat 1 years ago
  60. 60
    Save Private Maine and the Cards of Destiny. 1 years ago
  61. 61
    Heist with Explosions 1 years ago
  62. 62
    The Bird and the Cat. Part 1 12 months ago
  63. 63
    notification. 12 months ago
  64. 64
    The Bird and the Cat. Part 2 11 months ago
  65. 65
    Survival and Nightmares. Part 1. 10 months ago
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    Survival and Nightmares Part 2 10 months ago
  67. 67
    Goodbye, fucking desert. 10 months ago
  68. 68
    Not Rats, but scum. Part 1. 10 months ago
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    Not Rats, but scum. Part 2. 9 months ago
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    Not Rats, but scum. Part 3. The End. 9 months ago
  71. 71
    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year 9 months ago
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    Extended vacation 7 months ago
  73. 73
    Fans and Moirai. Part 1. 4 months ago
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    Fans and Moirai. Part 2 4 months ago
  75. 75
    Country Needs You! Part 1 2 months ago
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    Country Needs You! Part 2 2 months ago
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    boosty account and translations 2 months ago
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    Birthday and Surprises. Part 1. 1 months ago
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    Birthday and Surprises. Part 2. 1 months ago
  80. 80
    Here comes the Mort 1 months ago
  81. 81
    Not Love, Death and Robots. 1 months ago
  82. 82
    New fanfic 21 days ago
  83. 83
    Who's tougher? 10 days ago

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