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Noticable language problems, I get the sense that it's translated, gives me wuxia vibes. Names for things are much like a toddler has smashed two random generated words together which really hurts the world building 'deaths valhalla'. Nothing new tries to set character up as an underdog but the power scaling is off which means the book has no suspense or gritt. Additionally the Mecha genre is over used and the author would really need to bring something unique which they do not.
This book has potential and it is unfortunate that it is heavily flawed. The author attempts to creates conflict in the beginning of the chapters by making mc the underdog, nothing wrong with that, but the author chooses the worst possible way to do it. The author basically uses the common Chinese novel trope where everyone dogpiles on the mc for no real valid reason. There are better ways to create an underdog situation. Like I said this book has major potential but if the author commits to cliches and trash tropes like that, you will kill it.
Mc is a clown. writing quality is meh. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
A great novel to read. The chapters are short so pls make them longer. Less than 10 chapters when I found this gem so pls don't drop!!!! I really like this novel. Also MC seems too dense towards what people are saying behind his back. I mean its ok for MC to be dense for a while but if its too long it will get awkward to read more otherwise keep making more chapters author!!:)
Don’t waste your time reading this author’s books as he never completes them and drops them whenever he thinks the views have dropped. If you don’t believe me check his profile.
Noticable language problems, I get the sense that it's translated, gives me wuxia vibes. Names for things are much like a toddler has smashed two random generated words together which really hurts the world building 'deaths valhalla'. Nothing new tries to set character up as an underdog but the power scaling is off which means the book has no suspense or gritt. Additionally the Mecha genre is over used and the author would really need to bring something unique which they do not.
This book has potential and it is unfortunate that it is heavily flawed. The author attempts to creates conflict in the beginning of the chapters by making mc the underdog, nothing wrong with that, but the author chooses the worst possible way to do it. The author basically uses the common Chinese novel trope where everyone dogpiles on the mc for no real valid reason. There are better ways to create an underdog situation. Like I said this book has major potential but if the author commits to cliches and trash tropes like that, you will kill it.
Mc is a clown. writing quality is meh. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
A great novel to read. The chapters are short so pls make them longer. Less than 10 chapters when I found this gem so pls don't drop!!!! I really like this novel. Also MC seems too dense towards what people are saying behind his back. I mean its ok for MC to be dense for a while but if its too long it will get awkward to read more otherwise keep making more chapters author!!:)
Don’t waste your time reading this author’s books as he never completes them and drops them whenever he thinks the views have dropped. If you don’t believe me check his profile.