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# RELAXED
“Ding! Congratulations! You have received 7 billion red pockets!”
“Ding! Congratulations! You have received 50 million yuan!”
“Ding! Congratulations! You have received a Lamborghini Aventador!”
“Ding! Congratulations! You have received 51% stock of a listed company!”
“Ding! Congratulations! You have received a whole tower worth 5 billion!”
“Ding! Congratulations! You have received the skill, Combat King!”
“Ding! Congratulations! You have received the skill, God’s Singing Voice!”
“7 billion red packets? How long will it even take me to open all of them?” Lin Fan complained.
“Excuse me, how long do you think it will take you to earn a million?” a certain random reporter asked.
Lin Fan was silent.
“Sorry, but, why do you keep blinking?” the reporter asked.
“Didn’t you ask how long it would take?”
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เขียนรีวิวLike all stories of this type, there are major flaws. The problem I see is the constant reality bending nature of the system that is created. If a system has to bend reality constantly then there is going to be millions of little changes occurring each time it does something. Personally I think it is better for the system just to be creating items out of nothing than go the whole reality change route. These novels can be fun for a few chapters, but those of us who like to think more deeply about things will be looking at this type of story as if there are a bunch of problems that just get more irritating as things go on.
Why is this ranked so high up? This novel is nothing original and the MC is a terrible person. Literally gets rich and it's like it's nothing. MC is missing way too many brain cells and everywhere he goes he gets worshipped. Also the MC gets a girlfriend who had a crush on him since high-school then later on proceeds to cheat on her with multiple other women. One of the woman is a flight Attendant who he bumps into and at the end of the chapter sleeps with her when she even said herself she didn't offer herself when another rich person came before him. This is very clearly written by a misogynist who thinks women are just objects. He has twins fall for him when he stops a basketball from hitting them and they for no reason even after the MC doesn't talk to them for days turn die hard fans of him and are permanently loyal to him. Again, no reason at all. If you wanna read about a brain dead MC with other bootlicking side characters who have no other qualities other than to raise the MCs ego and materialistic cardboard cutout women who are just there to sleep with him and drive mini cooper's then go ahead and read this.
i have read this before, I love the money and the skills, what I do hate is the tantananan~drum roll pls. the HAREM! guy suddenly becomes a big shot and felt like he could have the world,(he does, in future chaps maybe) he tells them he has a gf but they act like they didn't hear him, the proceed to act like brainless lovesick golddigging fools. question is, do you remember you have one(a gf?) or does she know you're not that great? just (act like) another reckless second/third gen. he got the skills, the money, but is he worth it? everything other than the harem, I love.
This book needs more creativity, but for your time and effort and ideas put into this, I'll give it a 3 star rating. Also, the update stability is very good and constant. My reason; Almost every event is repetitive. He meets a friend or old colleague, they get a call, he follows them to said locations, he finds out they are in a tough situation, and he bails them out. It's the same everytime, nothing new. Also, in terms of female characters, it would be more interesting if the story was centred around a female rather than many that don't add to the story or give very little. For example, the first lady he met, though, she had a bad personality but it fits real life situations when a lady is looking for one who can help her financially. Honestly, if you worked around her, including her into the story more, things will be more interesting. She doesnt have to be his main love interest, maybe except she change. But story is a gradual process. The high school friend he met, the one he did a grand birthday for, she is so boring. Their interactions doesnt add anything to the story. That's why I said rather than centralising the story around multiple females, choosing one or a few would be much better. It needs proper structuring and this would probably ' truly' become a 4 star novel or higher. That's just an idea, not an absolute, I'm just saying. It doesnt have to be the way I said it. You are the author, and your decision is always wahats best for your story, but let there be a target, proper structure and so on. Thanks for the story, I'll keep reading 😀
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์What idiotic time skippy chapters in beginning only no proper story reason or thinking everything feels free given and free taken. No conversations about anyone else but pauper Lin, who doesn't even have the brain to think of logic behind his cheat [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
the characters are rather repetitive, you're either a. the protagonist b. the beautiful fl c. the pretty girl who dislikes the MC but regrets it d. MC fanboys e. MC fanboys foreign edition (same story as D but less screen time and respect) f. xenophobic foreigner who gets face slapped g. Chinese competitors who get face slapped h. MC family/family friends at several points in the story it's stated how so and so foreigner thinks they're better than Chinese people but actually Chinese are better the protagonist tries to take back shares of Chinese companies from foreigners because they should belong to Chinese people but happily accept share of foreign companies the MC also makes a point to basically only speak Chinese (because he's Chinese) and expects others to speak Chinese to accommodate him even in foreign countries (note. he can speak other languages he just doesn't want to because he's Chinese)
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์This is absolute trash. How this novel has higher ratings is a mystery. The MC has the personality of a plank of wood (if I'm being generous), every single character he meets is portrayed cartoonishly "evil" or greedy, the story is just mind numbing, endless repetition. This novel reads like a bad wattpad fan fiction, written by a hormonal teenager back when Twilight was popular. A 1/5 is too high for this.
nope, nooe, nopw, nopw, nope, nope, nope, nope, dont even bother reading thia, I've read different concept like this but this one is somehow worse
A decent story, I read the raw for it, after a while the story seems to venture away from the original plot though..
Up until chapter 550 this is an acceptable novel after that the whole basis of the novel gets forgotten and the plot becomes an entirely different novel. My recomendation read until the doomsday mission is declared then drop it.
It's getting annoying when he keeps saying "I'm a student" instead of just admitting "I'm a capital owner" like the capitalist he is
absolutely loving reading this book I can't wait to see what's going to happen next please hurry and update more chapters
it gets boring starting from dimensional rift. every countries have their chosen ones, and every countries have their names changed. heck it's more confusing after the time skip, many new names keep popping up and many of the familiar people disappeared. idk if it's worth to read the more it goes. so for you guys new readers take care
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์Poison Tester here so here it is: It's fun at first if you're bored, its the usual trope System/Face Slapping/Harem. Arcs are arbitrary and if readers don't like it the author will drop it. After the World Doom arc treat it as ending if you want because after that it became a cultivation novel. the arcs are Face Slapping / World Doom/ Cultivation Spoiler Alert!!! After world doom arc He suddenly gained massive power up, then discovered he's a Chaos Divine Dragon with no foreshadowing. He copied Han Jue of Top Tier Providence turtled on earth and used curse on enemies. He comes out once in a while. He created systems but only gave them once Anyways it's a good time to be a consumer if you got nothing better to read.
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The novel is good, minimum face slap, harem. but in the later chaps it suddenly became a cultivation world background and the women are like s#xs dolls, mc treat them as S Dolls, f there f anywhere f everywhere but everything else is good other than the later chaps