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The writting is quite often messy: words are missing, sometimes there are no link between paragraphs, changement of POV is also done without tansition, etc... it lacks a lot of edditing... so it is confusing. Story is bit meh and the plot very slow paced. It's clearly over rated and really need a rewrite!
I like the pacing of the story. Some of the sentences are really long but it's like music. The idea of cult against got me like we have dead people and an arguement.
The storyline is intriguing... The diction is top notch. Just one chapter and I am hooked I recommend this novel to anyone who loves a good fantasy book
Am completely loving this book the more I read it.[img=update][img=update][img=update]
been good so far, excellent storyline. good character development. Very versatile author
I love the book and have been following since it's nice but the updates are slow
the update is slow but the bookk is amazing I couldn't bring myself to takeaway any star. Please update soon. it's an amazing book and I can't stop reading
I've not finished all the chapters, but the few I've read is more than enough for me to say that this is a masterpiece. The author is talented and a good writer. Keep up the good work ❤️
A work that covers all aspects of fantasy, action, horror and all. Join me on this journey and find out what happens to Justin and the cults, and I promise you won't regret ❤️
I have never really been a huge fan of fantasy but this book has made me one. This book is amazing. Amazing characters, amazing world building, amazing pacing. I just hope that the write is able to keep it up 👏
wow wow wow wow wow this book is just wow everything is good the way the author uses his words is cool and I like the characters and everything in the book I feel lucky to have found this interesting book dear author ur doing a really wonderful job keep up the great work 🥰🥰🥰
The reletable protagonist makes you fall in love with this thrilling fast paced story as it takes you on a rollercoaster of emotions from the first page. Character development and plot is superb, anxious to see how it progresses.
This book has it all, action, suspense and thriller.And I'm sensing a hint of romance between Wilson and Ashley. In all, its a wonderful book and I can't wait to read more chapters
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I've always loved magic and superpower based books, and this book elevated the entire thing in just eight CHAPTERS. Already in love with the book.
I love Justin's and Ashley's relationship. This book is definitely a good piece of art. Good use of words, nice plot and story development. It just perfect. Nice work author ❤️❤️❤️
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The story development is wow The storyline is also great... I don't know what anyone was expecting to read when they downloaded the book but I promisee this book will deliver 10 times better of what they were expecting. The choice of using simple languages that every reader of any age and academic group will be able to comprehend is also another trait in favor of the book. Great job Author You have my five stars If I could, I would rate it a fifty stars🥰
its was a good novel, a steady story development it was good im telling you guys it was a gem, but im only in chap 29 and i want to read more but idk where to read and im only reading in laptop i cant download the app and i dont have a coins to buy a chapter
The writting is quite often messy: words are missing, sometimes there are no link between paragraphs, changement of POV is also done without tansition, etc... it lacks a lot of edditing... so it is confusing. Story is bit meh and the plot very slow paced. It's clearly over rated and really need a rewrite!
I like the pacing of the story. Some of the sentences are really long but it's like music. The idea of cult against got me like we have dead people and an arguement.
The storyline is intriguing... The diction is top notch. Just one chapter and I am hooked I recommend this novel to anyone who loves a good fantasy book
Am completely loving this book the more I read it.[img=update][img=update][img=update]
been good so far, excellent storyline. good character development. Very versatile author
I love the book and have been following since it's nice but the updates are slow
the update is slow but the bookk is amazing I couldn't bring myself to takeaway any star. Please update soon. it's an amazing book and I can't stop reading
I've not finished all the chapters, but the few I've read is more than enough for me to say that this is a masterpiece. The author is talented and a good writer. Keep up the good work ❤️
A work that covers all aspects of fantasy, action, horror and all. Join me on this journey and find out what happens to Justin and the cults, and I promise you won't regret ❤️
I have never really been a huge fan of fantasy but this book has made me one. This book is amazing. Amazing characters, amazing world building, amazing pacing. I just hope that the write is able to keep it up 👏
wow wow wow wow wow this book is just wow everything is good the way the author uses his words is cool and I like the characters and everything in the book I feel lucky to have found this interesting book dear author ur doing a really wonderful job keep up the great work 🥰🥰🥰
The reletable protagonist makes you fall in love with this thrilling fast paced story as it takes you on a rollercoaster of emotions from the first page. Character development and plot is superb, anxious to see how it progresses.
This book has it all, action, suspense and thriller.And I'm sensing a hint of romance between Wilson and Ashley. In all, its a wonderful book and I can't wait to read more chapters
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I've always loved magic and superpower based books, and this book elevated the entire thing in just eight CHAPTERS. Already in love with the book.
I love Justin's and Ashley's relationship. This book is definitely a good piece of art. Good use of words, nice plot and story development. It just perfect. Nice work author ❤️❤️❤️
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ The story development is wow The storyline is also great... I don't know what anyone was expecting to read when they downloaded the book but I promisee this book will deliver 10 times better of what they were expecting. The choice of using simple languages that every reader of any age and academic group will be able to comprehend is also another trait in favor of the book. Great job Author You have my five stars If I could, I would rate it a fifty stars🥰
its was a good novel, a steady story development it was good im telling you guys it was a gem, but im only in chap 29 and i want to read more but idk where to read and im only reading in laptop i cant download the app and i dont have a coins to buy a chapter