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- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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No Synopsis Hardly any tags No Info Chapter Chapters without title Sorry but those are big red flags
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story has grammar errors and calls Ki the source of power in dragon Ball chi. which technically it is the same thing but it makes the story feel like a cringe cultivation novel. I found the whole system an interesting idea but giving him super Saiyan 4 right off the bat just feels like it makes the story a bad power fantasy. as come on make some context for him work for it like a training Arc or something.
The real name is “Dragon Ball: God-level Choice” you can read it on mtlnation My biggest peeve though is that they introduced techniques from other cultivation novels… so now ki has “attributes” etc etc Also he takes out freeze, but what is the point if he doesn't end up saving nor caring to save anyone, he doesn't receive anything for it either… I've only got through the first 20 or so chapters. So determine if you want to read it on your own based on that. Hopefully you find it useful.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ No Synopsis Hardly any tags No Info Chapter Chapters without title Sorry but those are big red flags
When there are chapters missing . .. … …. ….. …… ……. …….. ……… ………. ……….. ………… …………. ………….. …………… ……………. …………….. ……………… ………………. ……………….. …………………
story has grammar errors and calls Ki the source of power in dragon Ball chi. which technically it is the same thing but it makes the story feel like a cringe cultivation novel. I found the whole system an interesting idea but giving him super Saiyan 4 right off the bat just feels like it makes the story a bad power fantasy. as come on make some context for him work for it like a training Arc or something.
The real name is “Dragon Ball: God-level Choice” you can read it on mtlnation My biggest peeve though is that they introduced techniques from other cultivation novels… so now ki has “attributes” etc etc Also he takes out freeze, but what is the point if he doesn't end up saving nor caring to save anyone, he doesn't receive anything for it either… I've only got through the first 20 or so chapters. So determine if you want to read it on your own based on that. Hopefully you find it useful.
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