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9.09% Plot Manipulator / Chapter 1: Agar

บท 1: Agar

Agar is the place where hundreds of amount planets and thousands of amount moons are in harmony

In Agar, some places are out of the habitable zone, in summer and winter more places go out of the habitable zone. But life still finds a way to continue.

Agar wasn't always like that. Once upon a time, there was Pangea.

The size of this planet was big as Jupiter. This place has hundreds of moons. But same time there is so much war on this planet. And that caused a fight that should never have happened.

King of the dragons Falkor fight with the queen of elves Aer. This fight caused the Pangea's destruction.

But at that age average peoples were too much stronger than now. They overcame it and their kind survived but still had consicuanses: More than half of the kinds were extinct. And surviving kinds got weaker because of gravity. Gravity in the agar was far weaker than in Pangea. That caused people's body got weaker. But people still believe there are strong people who are stronger than the gods of Pangea are alive now.

When Xenobach landed on some planet in Agar his first thought was "What the f*ck"

Xenobach's mortal appearance was a bit unusual he was two meters (6.5 feet) tall and pure white. His eyes, hair, skin, armor, sword everything was pure white. His facial features were sharp and has thin white eyebrows. His armor fused with his skin. And he holding a long sword.

He slowly get up from the crater and immediately made his spell. A huge tent wrapped around the entire solar system. Xenobach sit down after making the spell and realized something the hourglass near him was cracked he couldn't use all of the purple liquid. When liquid reforms it is consumed by the hourglass.

He realized something else, he was weak. Even the tent probably only stays for one year.

He thought "So this is what mortality feels like" this is something new for him.

Xenobach felt something coming to him.

Twenty amount humans surrounded him. And three of them waiting at the back.

He waved his sword horizontally whit he easily cut half 5 of them and the pressure of air spread throughout the continent.

The three people at back are surprised by that and continue to watch. The other fifteen pul their weapons. The man across from him swung his sword vertically. He blocked with his sword and before other peoples catch him he jumped.

He started to fly and said "Why did you guys directly attack me I didn't do anything wrong"

One of the there people at the back talked "You are the one attacked first we just come to check what falls from the sky"

Xenobach said "Oh, sorry I thought you guys will attack me"

The man raised his eyebrow and said "What is your name"

Xenobach smiled "Oh my name is Xenobach"

The man said, "Well it's matching with your look."

Xenobach said "Then what is your name"

The man said"Oh, I forgot to say my name is Andre"

Xenobach said "Hello Andre"

Andre said "What are you Xenobach"

Xenobach said "I am just a traveler no more no less so who are you"

Andre said "One of the higher-ups of the revolution church" After a little bit of silence Andre continued, "Well we must take you to the prison would you come with us?"

"No,bec..." before he finished his word the man with the sword try to stab him in his back but the sword didn't penetrate his armor he slowly turned his head and said "I got you" before he could run he catches his head and crushed it.

The remaining ones and two people at back other than Andre attacked him he fly back and swing his sword horizontally and created air pressure. While air pressure directly comes to them one of them spits fire from his mouth air pressure and the fire extinguished each other. with two women able to catch him swinging their swords but they couldn't penetrate his neck (Armor doesn't wrap his neck and head) he swung his sword and kill one of them but before he kills the other one with a man with knuckleduster punched back of his head. He flies straight to them. One of them spit fire and one of them spit water on him. The water didn't boil but turned to literal plasma and Xenobach fell right into it. After he got out of that hell a sword vertically swing his neck. While the atmosphere cut half, his neck stay unharmed

Xenobach said "Oww, you guys can kill someone with that. You need to be more careful... So what is you three's name?"

The woman with the big sword said "Angela"

Xenobach said "Oh, that is a cool name can I call y.." before he finish his word he found a hot rapier immersed in his eye. But his eye stay unharmed "Well I thought this would melt down on that temperature" The man with a thin sword tilted his head and look in his shock all of them were shocked. Half a million degrees white Ferrum didn't even scratch his eye. One of them shouts out "HOLLY SH*T"

He slowly gets up and smiled and said "You guys pretty fast I didn't though it will last that long... I guess I should go all out"

He swung his sword with his everything and cut a piece from the planet. Attack's shock wave reached till the near planet. Angela, the dude with a thin sword, fire man and 3 other people died from that.

"Ten left"

He rushed right to the water man and chopped his head

"Nine left"

He rushed to the man's knuckleduster and swing his sword men dodged it at the last second and hit him nothing happened he continue to do that. He fights like a boxer but instead of punches, he dodges sword swings. A woman comes behind Xenobach and swings her sword at his Achilles tendon. And again nothing happened. He swing his sword at the woman but the man punched his ankle and with that, the woman escaped.

Xenobach said"What is your name old man"

The man said "Ivan"

Xenobach said "Hello Ivan, I am sorry but I have to kill you"

Ivan said "It doesn't matter even if you didn't exit I would die someday"

Xenobach said "I loved your idea so why are you in church"

While He continuously punches him said "Well I want to see how is immortality like"

Xenobach said, "The church owes you immortality?"

Ivan said"Yes," and he stopped talking.

Ivan and the woman continue to attack him but they still couldn't scratch him. With time their attack got slower and slower.

Xeno bach swing his sword 360 degrees and chopped them half

"Seven left"


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