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man, it was fine ngl.with the girls... I would have made them maid/slaves and the good ones and capable something more serious. kinda bad that you didn't upload more and can't give a higher review. overall nice quick read
Hey author, is this ff dropped?? If not when will you start uploading chapters on it..
Bro's been real quiet since he got 1.3m views on his novel. I gotta say, when you add #overpowered to your tags it gets boring real quick. Unless you're the author of One Punch Man. Why are you not uploading . I look forward to seeing you fail.
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"No Yuri" in the synopsis, doesn't matter if the novel is good or bad you deserve 5 stars. it's crazy how many harem novels feel the need to make the protsg some third party c*ckold. thank you author.
I'm not reading it yet. But the story seems good from the synopsis, note for author: can you add the Fem-Rimuru in the Tensura verse? Please? I mean, why not?
Hmmm, let's start with this At the start it was showing the qualities of a good novel when all of sudden it rushed towards its end the reason maybe that the author made the mc too overpowered that no one can match him except all for one
Okay me puse el día con este fanfic que me dejó bien intrigado, me encantó el desenlace del mundo en el que desarrollaste la historia, el protagonista tiene muchos defectos como cualquier humano pero eso lo hace bueno, me molesta que ahora que tiene suficientes puntos del sistema no haya conseguido el quirk de "new Order" por quién sabe quizás es el que va a conseguir después de todo este debacle de fusionar dos habilidades en su cuerpo ellas para que derrote y eliminé de una forma abrumadora a AFO y pasar a un nuevo mundo.... Estoy emocionado por lo que se viene jajaja 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
When I said not to drop your fanfic. I did not mean fudging up the story. I just read the new chapter and i was disappointed. This book has no sense of style at all. It's the usual world domination and girl stealing on these types of books. I thought this would satisfy me to some degree but it made a fellow author disappointed and confused. Sure i know you're writing for fun, but at least put effort into this so that fans actually like what you're writing. That's what some of the fans of this book want, an actual good book with some degree of logic in it.
Me gustó ojalá no la deje abandonada Me gustó ojalá no la deje abandonada Me gustó ojalá no la deje abandonada Me gustó ojalá no la deje abandonada
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
It is with great solemnity and seriousness and other words that start with s which I do not know the meaning of. I cringelord9000 with a heavy heart and ton of grammar mistake that I declare your fic to be the best
MORE!! I NEED MORE CHAPTERS!! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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its chunni wish fulfillment story pretty much says it all no real thought process with barely there logic and in most cases not there at all started out alrightish then just got to where mc has an ego the size of a country and the brains of a chihuahua hes not even at an untouchable level of strength in mha and shouldnt even have made it as far as he did with stealing bodies from hospitals to steal and sell quirks overall it readable if you just turn off your brain since most logic isnt there writing quality is low since most reasoning is non existent and plot is the only reason and alot of actions are written like bullet point presentation mc did this then he took a shower mc got ready for his date mc went to the park for his date it's very non descriptive story development is low since the story doesnt flow and the bullet point style is jarring character design mc is like a god complex chihuahua with actual strength but isnt invincible or unbeatable world background its fanfiction so anyone who has watched or read mha should have a good idea of it sadly even with how anime logic filled mha world is this cranks it up to chunni wishfulfillment levels of world logic he turns dead bodies to dust and can absorb the quirk sell it to his system or discard it and decides to steal from hospital morgues yet only action taken is the foreshadowing of a female pro hero seeing him do so yet nothing has happened yet forgetting the fact that he does this to many bodies no loved ones have an outcry about not being able to cremate or bury loved ones no police stings or heroes on all the hospitals no news reports or general social outcry over it in the latest chapter he pretty much killed several cannon fodder and severally injured several others called his pro heroes weak and unable to do anything to him and straight up threatened them to arrest him if they wanted to try midnight could have incapacitated him he still breathes and sleeps and his super regeneration wouldnt work against it since it mimics the bodies reaction to sleep and isn't a poison to fight against but overall they just cowed and let him go considering almight spent his life preparing to fight an egotistical tyrant the similarities with all for one should have been jarring enough he would give his life to stop him but instead didn't just overall world plot just seems to conform so the egotistical wish fulfillment can continue
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All the best for me..so please moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update..
No eh leído aún la novela pero, autor quiero preguntar si el MC tiene un objetivo que alcanzar o algo así o el MC solo avanzará porque si... Digo ya que si le das un objetivo con el que seguir adelante tendrás una dirección con la que el MC se pueda apoyar para avanzar y no llegar a un punto en dónde no sabes que escribir después... Solo una opinión de parte mía no sé si te servirá... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The fanfic is good and the character is Overpowered. I am enjoying the story so please don't drop the fanfic like many other webnovel fanfic authors usually do. I just wish if the story had more characters development and romance. I can understand since the author is new so it's hard for him to write that part.
Another DxD cliche 'take all women and make them virgins for the insecure and hormonal boy writing the book' scenario...Absolute trash, i'm convinced he deletes his bad reviews and/or pays for 5 stars otherwise there's no way it would be anywhere near 5 star rating. Welp he'll likely delete this one too.
good novel, don't let it fall -_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-__-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-
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Great fafnik, I love this fafnik. The best fafnik in the world. There may not be much of a chapter, but this is just the beginning. Everything will be super if you read this masterpiece.
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I am a new author so If you guys came here expecting some professional level work then I will suggest you to drop this novel. I am writing this for novel for fun. It will be good if you guys can try to enjoy my story rather than forcefully finding mistakes in everything. 1. MC will be overpowered and sometimes even arrogant. 2. I will also change the Canon. 3. The Harem will be large so of course I can't develop the relationship between the characters properly in few chapters. 4. MC will travel to worlds like MHA, Dxd, Naruto, Arifureta, Tensura. 5. I am not a native English speaker, so there might be some grammatical errors. Though I will try to fix all errors and plot holes. If you guys don't like any of the above point then please you can drop the Novel instead of spreading hate. Thanks for reading ❤❤
man, it was fine ngl.with the girls... I would have made them maid/slaves and the good ones and capable something more serious. kinda bad that you didn't upload more and can't give a higher review. overall nice quick read
Hey author, is this ff dropped?? If not when will you start uploading chapters on it..
Bro's been real quiet since he got 1.3m views on his novel. I gotta say, when you add #overpowered to your tags it gets boring real quick. Unless you're the author of One Punch Man. Why are you not uploading . I look forward to seeing you fail.
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"No Yuri" in the synopsis, doesn't matter if the novel is good or bad you deserve 5 stars. it's crazy how many harem novels feel the need to make the protsg some third party c*ckold. thank you author.
I'm not reading it yet. But the story seems good from the synopsis, note for author: can you add the Fem-Rimuru in the Tensura verse? Please? I mean, why not?
Hmmm, let's start with this At the start it was showing the qualities of a good novel when all of sudden it rushed towards its end the reason maybe that the author made the mc too overpowered that no one can match him except all for one
Okay me puse el día con este fanfic que me dejó bien intrigado, me encantó el desenlace del mundo en el que desarrollaste la historia, el protagonista tiene muchos defectos como cualquier humano pero eso lo hace bueno, me molesta que ahora que tiene suficientes puntos del sistema no haya conseguido el quirk de "new Order" por quién sabe quizás es el que va a conseguir después de todo este debacle de fusionar dos habilidades en su cuerpo ellas para que derrote y eliminé de una forma abrumadora a AFO y pasar a un nuevo mundo.... Estoy emocionado por lo que se viene jajaja 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
When I said not to drop your fanfic. I did not mean fudging up the story. I just read the new chapter and i was disappointed. This book has no sense of style at all. It's the usual world domination and girl stealing on these types of books. I thought this would satisfy me to some degree but it made a fellow author disappointed and confused. Sure i know you're writing for fun, but at least put effort into this so that fans actually like what you're writing. That's what some of the fans of this book want, an actual good book with some degree of logic in it.
Me gustó ojalá no la deje abandonada Me gustó ojalá no la deje abandonada Me gustó ojalá no la deje abandonada Me gustó ojalá no la deje abandonada
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ It is with great solemnity and seriousness and other words that start with s which I do not know the meaning of. I cringelord9000 with a heavy heart and ton of grammar mistake that I declare your fic to be the best
MORE!! I NEED MORE CHAPTERS!! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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its chunni wish fulfillment story pretty much says it all no real thought process with barely there logic and in most cases not there at all started out alrightish then just got to where mc has an ego the size of a country and the brains of a chihuahua hes not even at an untouchable level of strength in mha and shouldnt even have made it as far as he did with stealing bodies from hospitals to steal and sell quirks overall it readable if you just turn off your brain since most logic isnt there writing quality is low since most reasoning is non existent and plot is the only reason and alot of actions are written like bullet point presentation mc did this then he took a shower mc got ready for his date mc went to the park for his date it's very non descriptive story development is low since the story doesnt flow and the bullet point style is jarring character design mc is like a god complex chihuahua with actual strength but isnt invincible or unbeatable world background its fanfiction so anyone who has watched or read mha should have a good idea of it sadly even with how anime logic filled mha world is this cranks it up to chunni wishfulfillment levels of world logic he turns dead bodies to dust and can absorb the quirk sell it to his system or discard it and decides to steal from hospital morgues yet only action taken is the foreshadowing of a female pro hero seeing him do so yet nothing has happened yet forgetting the fact that he does this to many bodies no loved ones have an outcry about not being able to cremate or bury loved ones no police stings or heroes on all the hospitals no news reports or general social outcry over it in the latest chapter he pretty much killed several cannon fodder and severally injured several others called his pro heroes weak and unable to do anything to him and straight up threatened them to arrest him if they wanted to try midnight could have incapacitated him he still breathes and sleeps and his super regeneration wouldnt work against it since it mimics the bodies reaction to sleep and isn't a poison to fight against but overall they just cowed and let him go considering almight spent his life preparing to fight an egotistical tyrant the similarities with all for one should have been jarring enough he would give his life to stop him but instead didn't just overall world plot just seems to conform so the egotistical wish fulfillment can continue
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All the best for me..so please moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update..
No eh leído aún la novela pero, autor quiero preguntar si el MC tiene un objetivo que alcanzar o algo así o el MC solo avanzará porque si... Digo ya que si le das un objetivo con el que seguir adelante tendrás una dirección con la que el MC se pueda apoyar para avanzar y no llegar a un punto en dónde no sabes que escribir después... Solo una opinión de parte mía no sé si te servirá... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The fanfic is good and the character is Overpowered. I am enjoying the story so please don't drop the fanfic like many other webnovel fanfic authors usually do. I just wish if the story had more characters development and romance. I can understand since the author is new so it's hard for him to write that part.
Another DxD cliche 'take all women and make them virgins for the insecure and hormonal boy writing the book' scenario...Absolute trash, i'm convinced he deletes his bad reviews and/or pays for 5 stars otherwise there's no way it would be anywhere near 5 star rating. Welp he'll likely delete this one too.
good novel, don't let it fall -_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-__-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-
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Great fafnik, I love this fafnik. The best fafnik in the world. There may not be much of a chapter, but this is just the beginning. Everything will be super if you read this masterpiece.
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I am a new author so If you guys came here expecting some professional level work then I will suggest you to drop this novel. I am writing this for novel for fun. It will be good if you guys can try to enjoy my story rather than forcefully finding mistakes in everything. 1. MC will be overpowered and sometimes even arrogant. 2. I will also change the Canon. 3. The Harem will be large so of course I can't develop the relationship between the characters properly in few chapters. 4. MC will travel to worlds like MHA, Dxd, Naruto, Arifureta, Tensura. 5. I am not a native English speaker, so there might be some grammatical errors. Though I will try to fix all errors and plot holes. If you guys don't like any of the above point then please you can drop the Novel instead of spreading hate. Thanks for reading ❤❤