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It is in need of a lot of work with grammar and punctuation. Some issues can be solved easily such as the System Speech and Names. Just throw the System speech into brackets [..] and just don't cap the entire speech. The genders also need to be sorted out as does some of the names. -- So overall it is worse than MTL.
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raw. ... . . . .. .. .... . . .. .... . .... .. .... . .... .. ... ... .. . shensusbusbshsbzushsissosnsisuhshsjjsisiwkwoapelekeleps
It is in need of a lot of work with grammar and punctuation. Some issues can be solved easily such as the System Speech and Names. Just throw the System speech into brackets [..] and just don't cap the entire speech. The genders also need to be sorted out as does some of the names. -- So overall it is worse than MTL.
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Bad traduction but good history the Naruto, this is 4,2 points the stars in the platform webnovel site jejejejejejejejejejejejejjejeejej ok, please edit men........