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I love this book and I can't wait for the updates. Author you have done a good job so far.
im in chapter 31 i just want to say it's fucking good but is this complete or hiatus or drop? because why there's no update for 3 months?
What a shame Depressing First it was smooth then came to NTR(even dough its was not her lover but his property got raped by a vampire prince and forgot about it ). Sadly the plot got worse as the chapters go by. Thanks author you got me temporarily happy i even enjoyed it for at least 30 chapter
Started strong, dropped of slowly, came back alright, and shot itself in the head
I abandoned this novel due to not having enough coins a few months ago, but they were restocked and ready to be happily used on this. Well... they're gonna already but you'd better believe I'll be using the daily login coins! I won't give up this time, it's time to save!
the start was a bit cringe but it got better when he become the demon. he was overpowered but not to the point of being the strongest. I've only red the 1st volume which were free but i plan to read the rest as it's very interesting concept of divine incubus and being the handyman of world. although there are some cringe times it come hands to Hands with harem and yandere.
So I've read till the latest chapter and after everything I've read so far I can say even after adding 100 sp to int and wis he's like a smart clown that only knows how to perform magic. You said I have mastered the eyes of truth where were those eyes when fighting that Huntress? Another thing how can something that has been given by the absolute being can be muted or whatever you call it. Is he so stupid to keep talking to the enemy while he's fighting. He's way arrogant for someone who's just a tool or slave of the world. I'll do this to humanity I'll do that to humanity so much for losing out of stupidity and getting sealed. Is he not an incubus can he not steal the life force of the enemy like how she's stealing his?
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I don't what happening but I like somehow...no, scratch that love it at the start it is mild cringe and irritating but after........yeah...............
So many unnecessary words. The grammar is terrible, the plot itself makes no sense, the main character is just extremely unlikeable, and the author can’t seem to stop saying things that don’t even need to be said. I mean, Jesus. If the main character makes toast, the author would give an extremely detailed explanation as if babies are reading this. The author is clearly trying to seem smart, wise, and philosophical, but it comes off as annoying, especially when it completely breaks the immersion. One second, the main character will be having a conversation, and in the next second, he’ll start talking to himself for half of the chapter just to come to a single conclusion.
my honest review of this novel is that it has a lot of potential i came in thinking it was just gonna be a novel with 18 plus scenes every chapter but it isnt the beginning was the best part so far it started out slow and got into the power levels and different abilities and how the stats work which is very unique but i feel like the quality dropped when he came out the dungeon the author throws new enemies at us outta nowhere the power system seems all messed up like he can freeze the concept of levels how is that even possible i understand freezing time or space but levels and stats is absurd i think his eye is very underused he it can literally allow him to read minds and view their people lives so he should know there weaknesses and their fighting patterns yet he dosent do that and 1 of his lovers gets a "weaker" version of his time stop that allows her to be immortal to anyone but him and i dont like how the author throws enemies that are continental and have conceptual abilities at the palm of their hand at the mc i think author should just rewrite the whole novel as it has alot of potential just go slower dont make him automatically planetary and have the ability to fight beings millions of years older than him in 2 days worth of time
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The only problems is u don’ t make ch Daily or nothing come 2 or 3 days like be more active son plz
This is pretty good no cap very interesting stuff should have a little more detailing on certain scenarios aside from that tho I’ really enjoying it
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ok so quick transition for MC is nice and while there's a fast growth for him it doesn't feel misplaced. incredibly excited to see how things go from here as I'm on chapter 38
it's interesting but I might likely die from cringe soon and it has a bit of grammatical errors, it's manageable though ....................
What can I say, I see Yandere I read, this was really interesting, so I won't say much but the MC is like Emiya Shirou if he went insane on his heroes' routes, but yeah this was fun, the system is also interesting as well too, the mc is also cruel, and a chapter a day so it's all good for me.
This book is amazing I enjoy reading it, the grammar is alright, and the updated stability is good, overall I enjoy Asmodeus's personality a lot, and can't wait for more, please don't stop writing this, as I see potential
Shameless author review, this is my first contract work, so of course, I'm going to support myself, however, I hope you all enjoy the story and as a fellow elder in the Yandere sect who studied the Yandere dao to the pinnacle, this work will have a ton of Yandere, who knows maybe I even make a new subspecies of Yandere Waifu, expect chad MC, with a ruthless behavior, but yeah enjoy the plot if you know what I mean, and a power fantasy that can scratch that op itch
Great job I’m really enjoying the story so far especially the un charisma stat that glows him up. Keep up the good work, nice job on the steady updates, would love more even more to read
I love this book and I can't wait for the updates. Author you have done a good job so far.
im in chapter 31 i just want to say it's fucking good but is this complete or hiatus or drop? because why there's no update for 3 months?
What a shame Depressing First it was smooth then came to NTR(even dough its was not her lover but his property got raped by a vampire prince and forgot about it ). Sadly the plot got worse as the chapters go by. Thanks author you got me temporarily happy i even enjoyed it for at least 30 chapter
Started strong, dropped of slowly, came back alright, and shot itself in the head
I abandoned this novel due to not having enough coins a few months ago, but they were restocked and ready to be happily used on this. Well... they're gonna already but you'd better believe I'll be using the daily login coins! I won't give up this time, it's time to save!
the start was a bit cringe but it got better when he become the demon. he was overpowered but not to the point of being the strongest. I've only red the 1st volume which were free but i plan to read the rest as it's very interesting concept of divine incubus and being the handyman of world. although there are some cringe times it come hands to Hands with harem and yandere.
So I've read till the latest chapter and after everything I've read so far I can say even after adding 100 sp to int and wis he's like a smart clown that only knows how to perform magic. You said I have mastered the eyes of truth where were those eyes when fighting that Huntress? Another thing how can something that has been given by the absolute being can be muted or whatever you call it. Is he so stupid to keep talking to the enemy while he's fighting. He's way arrogant for someone who's just a tool or slave of the world. I'll do this to humanity I'll do that to humanity so much for losing out of stupidity and getting sealed. Is he not an incubus can he not steal the life force of the enemy like how she's stealing his?
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I don't what happening but I like somehow...no, scratch that love it at the start it is mild cringe and irritating but after........yeah...............
So many unnecessary words. The grammar is terrible, the plot itself makes no sense, the main character is just extremely unlikeable, and the author can’t seem to stop saying things that don’t even need to be said. I mean, Jesus. If the main character makes toast, the author would give an extremely detailed explanation as if babies are reading this. The author is clearly trying to seem smart, wise, and philosophical, but it comes off as annoying, especially when it completely breaks the immersion. One second, the main character will be having a conversation, and in the next second, he’ll start talking to himself for half of the chapter just to come to a single conclusion.
my honest review of this novel is that it has a lot of potential i came in thinking it was just gonna be a novel with 18 plus scenes every chapter but it isnt the beginning was the best part so far it started out slow and got into the power levels and different abilities and how the stats work which is very unique but i feel like the quality dropped when he came out the dungeon the author throws new enemies at us outta nowhere the power system seems all messed up like he can freeze the concept of levels how is that even possible i understand freezing time or space but levels and stats is absurd i think his eye is very underused he it can literally allow him to read minds and view their people lives so he should know there weaknesses and their fighting patterns yet he dosent do that and 1 of his lovers gets a "weaker" version of his time stop that allows her to be immortal to anyone but him and i dont like how the author throws enemies that are continental and have conceptual abilities at the palm of their hand at the mc i think author should just rewrite the whole novel as it has alot of potential just go slower dont make him automatically planetary and have the ability to fight beings millions of years older than him in 2 days worth of time
HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
The only problems is u don’ t make ch Daily or nothing come 2 or 3 days like be more active son plz
This is pretty good no cap very interesting stuff should have a little more detailing on certain scenarios aside from that tho I’ really enjoying it
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ok so quick transition for MC is nice and while there's a fast growth for him it doesn't feel misplaced. incredibly excited to see how things go from here as I'm on chapter 38
it's interesting but I might likely die from cringe soon and it has a bit of grammatical errors, it's manageable though ....................
What can I say, I see Yandere I read, this was really interesting, so I won't say much but the MC is like Emiya Shirou if he went insane on his heroes' routes, but yeah this was fun, the system is also interesting as well too, the mc is also cruel, and a chapter a day so it's all good for me.
This book is amazing I enjoy reading it, the grammar is alright, and the updated stability is good, overall I enjoy Asmodeus's personality a lot, and can't wait for more, please don't stop writing this, as I see potential
Shameless author review, this is my first contract work, so of course, I'm going to support myself, however, I hope you all enjoy the story and as a fellow elder in the Yandere sect who studied the Yandere dao to the pinnacle, this work will have a ton of Yandere, who knows maybe I even make a new subspecies of Yandere Waifu, expect chad MC, with a ruthless behavior, but yeah enjoy the plot if you know what I mean, and a power fantasy that can scratch that op itch
Great job I’m really enjoying the story so far especially the un charisma stat that glows him up. Keep up the good work, nice job on the steady updates, would love more even more to read
author is this really dropped?if its really dropped then...