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Folker embarks on a Pokemon Journey as he slowly uncovers the mystery behind sudden disappearance of his parents.
MC is not a reincarnator
I do not own Pokemon Franchise
Cover Photo not mine
Do check out my other work if you're interested.
The Rift: Masked Phantom
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เขียนรีวิวIt's a good story and easily readable, there's the modern memes too. I just can't imagine the characters since I'm not a Pokémon fan but it's a pretty good delivered story.
Pretty meh story. the fact that author add another protagonist and that protagonist is a reincanator killed pretty much all my interest of this fic. after all mc is extremely stupid kid that in 5 chapter of the fic escape 2 times of his fight,the fact that a stupid trainer like that can even compete against a reincanator should tell you how much plot armor he have. so my suggestion is read not expecting anything from this or simple dont read
Lets begin with world background.....its pokemon, 5 Stars, next. The updatestability is also good. Mc.....we have an mc going on his journey, nothing special, but his background is interesting and we have to few mono type pokemon fanfics (and good ones). The Rival/Best friend is really unique and is a good idea. The story develpment is good so far (chap 38) and it Shows noticable progress wothout rushing too much (though there was one timeskip, which was fitting, but I haven't really seen much pokemon-development so far without evolution, but the training-excerpts were interesting. The writing quality is repetitive at the beginning, most obvious in battles, but the author quickly gets better and it is already much better now (chap 38). Here and there are some missing words or wrong pronouns, but everything else is a good read. So all in all it is a solid fanfiction and a good read, I can only recommend pokemon-ff Fans to read this!
Here's an honest but somewhat biased review as the author. The story is readable but can still be improved. Updates are daily and stable. Story development is going well I suppose but a bit slow-paced. Character design is also going well. Idk tho, you judge that. The world background is solid and well explained, since it's riding on an already solid background as a fanfic, it makes it easier.
Writing quality is decent and understandable. Updates are stable with a daily update schedule. The MC is not OP and will sometimes lose so it gives out a competitive feeling. The MC is also interesting. Overall, I recommend reading this!
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So far its good and having a reincarnated person as one of the mc friend is not bad but overall I am quite liking it and I havent had a moment to think that i would drop this fic so check it out
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์My childhood and my love for Pokemon is screaming, aside from that, love the story and the writing quality. As a fanfic reader as well myself, I don't usually see a lot of Pokemon fanfic with this kind of different perspective, atleast during this time and it feels refreshing to read one!
I like the way you bright everything to life, I have not seen the real movie, of pokemon but I already love it I love the way you put everything altogether and made it look so real, great job.
Author did a good job, rewriting the pokemon world, very nice. The story is well written, and the progression is smooth and clear. I would recommend to any pokemon fan.
This story is very well developed and has a really interesting plot. The writing style is very good especially the detail in description. It’s a very cool way how the author describes the pokemon. Its also very realistic how the MC makes mistakes and is not OP but Intelligent and determined. The character design is very good and it’s interesting how the MCs life and parents are involved in the plot. Overall this is a very good book indeed. it deserves the five stars, this author will get somewhere in the future 😊
What a nice story l must say...l am a very big Pokémon fan but for some years l couldn't get to watch it maybe bcz of the age development in me😅.. But reading this story again awake the feelings that l used to have in my childhood.... Wow really cool and very realistic... I loved reading it... Thank u author for choosing such a great concept...
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As the author, I shamelessly exercise my right to rate my fanfic with a perfect score. Here's what to expect with this fanfic: 1. The MC would not be OP. I don't plan for him to have an undefeated streak and singlehandedly annihilate criminal organizations like xianxia MCs would do. He would have defeats as well as victories. 2. There would be no potential mysterious system, at least a system unique to the MC only. 3. The MC is just a 10 year old kid. While he's smart for his age, let's keep it realistic and allow him to make mistakes as long as he doesn't keep repeating the same mistake over and over again. I'll pay attention to his character development. 4. There's a Reincarnator tag but the MC is not a reincarnator. Again, the MC is not a reincarnator.