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Rebirth in Yasuke Matsuda. In a world where there are supernatural abilities, and people who are called "Ultimate".
And hell, why my classmate is the main villain of this world, who is "Ultimate Despair.", the person who destroyed the whole world.
PS: I own nothing except my Mc (And not completely). All images that will be used here are also not mine.
PPS: My English is still bad. But this time I check the written text three times in special programs
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เขียนรีวิวHonestly I’ve been looking for a danganronpa fanfiction like this for a hella long time, this is easily in the top ten danganronpa fanfiction I’ve read the first one going to “The Luckster and his luck” by the “Jibster”. I eagerly await your next update Author-sama
It's actually a good fanfic. Love the idea of reborn as a character out of the main cast. This character have an story with Junko in the Canon so it's going to be interesting to see how he will develop that here.
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์The story is good but the writing style is abhorrent. I suggest reading some writing tips in Google, or copying the writing style of other famous works to improve. I had problems reading because there is too many unnecessary details such as what the MC is looking at or other rephrased words in the same paragraph. If you could condense the message and get straight to the point for example: 'I opened the door and went out.' Not: 'I turned the doorknob and pulled the door open, then, looking at the apartment one last time, I closed it.' Your writing isn't even that immersive so there is no point in adding pointless details. Overall, it's good. Just fix the writing style and grammar and your set.
I love danganronpa and this fanfic is really good though it is a bit of a slow read but if you have the time I would give it a chance. I give it 3.5 mukuro’s out of 5.
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WARNING THERE IS SLIGHT VIOLATION (the author gave a vague warning see this story with this warning) So much potential thrown away and all for not putting at least a warning that there will be a slight violation (groping and that kind of thing I don't know if there was insertion but I got so sick that I didn't want to finish reading the chapter my stomach turned from how disgusting that was felt) and honestly it was unnecessary but what disappointed me most was that "warning" that honestly is very vague and the disgusting thing about the scene by God is a minor is very sick (although everything they have to do with it is sick) I honestly put this comment due to lack of communication, because of the horrible scene and to give a better warning and not something And surely I will leave this account so as not to have anything to do with this story I seriously got sick with this (you were doing so well what a disappointment)
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I give it 5 stars just for the unique story I'm tired of one piece and Naruto ff. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=update][img=recommend][img=exp]
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Really good fanfic, hands down my favorite danganronpa fanfic. It's a well drawn out story with a lot of thought put to it, also junko is best girl. Really wish the author continues this.
Loved the book. Though I suppose the development of the story took very long to reach the cannon of Danganronpa 1. {Text to fill the quota}
Muy buena la historia sigue así mejor crea una parte en la historia que piensa del mc o del compañero pero de rsto me gusta la historia sigue asi
liked the story in general and I think it's pretty good, one question came to my mind, although not the most striking of the characters, Celestia ludenberg is also a very special one. and I think she is a person who can follow his young master unconditionally in any situation, to be frank Junco is a very dodominant individual and I don't want mc to be crushed under her wishes and so I would like mc to have at least some of the power. (let's be clear, I would like to see a maid who follows mc like a tail and slowly opens her heart to him in this story.) I hope you success in your story, there will be no situations that require you to leave this story, take care dear author
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there's so much overthinking and unnecessary information that it's unbearable the text seems too heavy in the sense that you look at it and immediately realize how watered down the story is how little interesting information actually appears like chapter 9 onwards I had to struggle to read and that means the story has some serious problem because I've read hundreds of books and that's a rare thing
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