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There are 2 things I have learnt about mtl novels. 1 - It is nearly impossible to read normally 2 - Despite that, they usually all have good story concepts
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writer don't drop this ok .I welll support youuuuuuu forever and I will recommend this book to my friends so keep the good work author you did Great
A typical work from MTL. The idea is good, even amasing, but the execution, as always, is lame. I am always amazed at the inspiration of the Chinese. I am 1000% sure that the chapters of this work will reach 1000 in a short time
The author probably just used Google's translation feature since he released chapters way too fast for it to be manually translated. This could also explain why the translation just sucks, I would give it a 3 for writing quality. I would give the stability of updates a 5 since the author did released 53 chapters and he only started about 6 days ago. This could change though. The story development is a 3 since I've seen multiple fanfics like this before. Character design, 3. World Background, 3. So in conclusion, a badly translated Chinese fanfic can make you lose braincells. Also, is the author botting? He started 6 days ago and he has 500k views, 9 reviews, and he's in the top 20 for power stones? Sorry for accusing you author if you're not actually botting but I find that hella sus.
After that, you can bring this faloo fanfic : 次元:开局解锁鬼舞辻无惨模板 (Dimension: Unlock Ghost Dance Tsuji No Miserable Template at the beginning). Pls
I get the premise, but it’s horribly executed. For example, in a fight being played by the “curtain,” there will be a huge block of reactions after every move. Furthermore, it’s all the same reaction. It’s incredibly boring as it takes 10 chapters for one section of a fight to occur. It’s basically Dragon Ball where Goku screams for power, only stretched to 30 episodes with flashbacks and filler.
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ There are 2 things I have learnt about mtl novels. 1 - It is nearly impossible to read normally 2 - Despite that, they usually all have good story concepts
Esta demasiado bueno lo malo es que no se actualiza seguido pero el reto es bueno Psd pongo esto para llenar Hdkwjwiwjwjwiwjeoeejiwjwkdjrueiehdksjeufvidheievsowhwive8whe8ekwjwiwbuekwveidjehihfohdjgdgkdihfoydlhfljfljfohfoyfoycoucoufpufpuc
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ writer don't drop this ok .I welll support youuuuuuu forever and I will recommend this book to my friends so keep the good work author you did Great
A typical work from MTL. The idea is good, even amasing, but the execution, as always, is lame. I am always amazed at the inspiration of the Chinese. I am 1000% sure that the chapters of this work will reach 1000 in a short time
The author probably just used Google's translation feature since he released chapters way too fast for it to be manually translated. This could also explain why the translation just sucks, I would give it a 3 for writing quality. I would give the stability of updates a 5 since the author did released 53 chapters and he only started about 6 days ago. This could change though. The story development is a 3 since I've seen multiple fanfics like this before. Character design, 3. World Background, 3. So in conclusion, a badly translated Chinese fanfic can make you lose braincells. Also, is the author botting? He started 6 days ago and he has 500k views, 9 reviews, and he's in the top 20 for power stones? Sorry for accusing you author if you're not actually botting but I find that hella sus.
After that, you can bring this faloo fanfic : 次元:开局解锁鬼舞辻无惨模板 (Dimension: Unlock Ghost Dance Tsuji No Miserable Template at the beginning). Pls
I get the premise, but it’s horribly executed. For example, in a fight being played by the “curtain,” there will be a huge block of reactions after every move. Furthermore, it’s all the same reaction. It’s incredibly boring as it takes 10 chapters for one section of a fight to occur. It’s basically Dragon Ball where Goku screams for power, only stretched to 30 episodes with flashbacks and filler.
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