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The novel was pretty good afterall at first I thought it was a copy from TAP but then spent my time continuing reading the novel and found it interesting ......but......is it over or still ongoing? It has been a year already... It better not be over Author-nim.
Really good overall, just send like their are some inconsistencies with the mc. Only other complaint is the “Romance” tag, as there is none
Are you abandoning this novel? It was really good With amazing possibilities I waited eagerly for the first 3 months and now I come here every now and then to see if there is a new chapter.
Just read all the free chapters and this is a really good story and I'd like to see the but the last update was 1yr ago and it seems the story isn't over yet so am really hoping you continue
This is one of my favorite novels but when will it be updated? It's been 1 year and I haven't updated this, it's really frustrating, I only have 1 request, hopefully it'll be updated quickly, I'll be waiting!
please continue this story it's really awesome with a unique style to needs to continue
Please update bro, I will give 5 stars if you update it Please update bro, I will give 5 stars if you update it Please update bro, I will give 5 stars if you update it
when are you continue the novel?,pls release more do not drop it.[img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Update stability as u can see is 0character design is 0 too as have read till chapter 100 but still haven't truly loved any character so far ...Story is 8 but has too many mistakes like the fking book , babysitting protagonist even though he is weaker than him by a x to the power million world background and writing quality is nice which made me read it till chapter 100 Overall even though author is newbie he definitely has potential for top works but is too inconsistent heard he was sick hope he gets well soon and can continue with this story dropped it not cause it was that bad but it would mean the same if I read it til ch 240
after reading the synopsis and tags of the novel I thought it would have a crazy Mc who won't hesitate to kill for his need use people for his own good but it wasn't anything like that I read 51 chapter as of now and for only once I have seen him using his brain to do something interesting?? he even felt guilty of killing his own classmates who were corrupted by demon Overall if you want a novel with crazy anti-hero MC who isn't wagging his tail for the original hero of the novel don't read
The author just bites off way more than he can chew, and instead of fleshing out topics, he just adds more to the point where you forget the old ones. It's so infuriating when he talks about a cool mechanic like manipulating nether to create a core, a new energy, then 20 chapters later there's 20 new characters added, 20 new plotlines with the characters, 10 new potential abilities and now he's just playing with a cat that is definitely normal just trust me bro. a prime example is when he trys to recruit someone to a gang, and then before he goes back to finish it, nether manipulation is introduced, his past is exposed adding more characters and backstory to characters, Susan stalks him, conquers a dungeon with new abilities........... blegh just please finish what you start in a reasonable time, or at least don't clutter the story so much in the process.
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I really liked this novel. but sadly there is no more updates on this. Can author just give us rough knowledge about whether he will continue it or not and if he is gonna continue then when can we expect that
I advise you to read up to chapter 200, because longer and already stuffy work becomes many times worse when mc frees himself from the control of the system
When i first read this book, i had not read the Author's Pov. But now that i did skim through it a little, i can say that the first (40 chapters or more ?) are HEAVILY inspired of it.Only the Mc is different .But as more and more chapters pass , one can see for himself/herself that the story has its own path. I've already reviewed the book once. However now that I'm more experienced my mind has changed on quite a few points. Let's start with the pros : -The Mc is so fun ! Nathan, unlike Ren Dover, doesn't care so much about sticking to the original noveľs plot, which is a plus.Also , he is smart,has a mysterious back story, and is quite deranged . - The side characters are well done. - The plot is intriguing and promising. Every fight is epic , well depicted and well explained . - The Mc isn't OP but his wits and perseverance are just amazing. - The pace is nor quick nor slow . Then, the cons : - The updates are a too inconstant . It's been three months already that the book hasn't been updated and this is so disappointing. Sure the author has a life aside from writing. But everyone does. Yet here we are all to read and/or write. So i don't buy this excuse. Plus , the author has done the same with his other book so i'm really unhappy.(This inconsistency in the updates is in fact the main reason for my low rating.) - The inspiration of the Author's Pov is really strong in the first chapters. Honestly, i can now understand why some people stopped so early in their tracks . Still, it didn't last long(by the way , it's really relative) so i won't hold it against this book too much. Ah, there's still another flaw!The author's forcing is too evident when it comes to situations where he wants Mc to help the original book's Mc.And this excuse of " This character helped me face my depression" seems a bit too shabby. Apart from these points, i don't really have any complaints about this book. So what to say in the end ? It's a good book but Author's huge inspiration of the Author's Pov, the Mc's unconvicing reason for helping the original book's Mc, and the INCONSISTENT UPDATES convinced me to drop it.
This novel is great because of the writing quality,story development world background is (very)good and i like it
So I like the plotline even if the theme "extra" is overused in novels. The writing quality is good. I kinda like the story development (but why did you kill Ethan 😭). The updating stability is kinda unstable.(note: I was bored so I write a review for this novel and this review is based on my opinion so don't critize me if there's something you don't like about my review)
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This is my 2nd review. I have been reading this novel from the get go since the 1st chapter. The start is very interesting but right after that it might not suite everyone's taste. As some of the things he does may not make any sense at first I guarantee it will later on. There might be an arc in the novel i.e. 'The Underworld Arc' that mostly contains only fights and that also against stronger enemies most of the time, so you might see the MC get thrashed once in a while. This part may feel bland for some readers (I myself somewhat thought the fights were repetitive) and they may drop it but I do hope they continue reading it and give it another chance as you will not regret it, the final fight of this arc literally gave me chills it was beautifully written and well-described. At around Ch.70 it might feel as if the story has lost direction or that its quality has fallen, however it's not what you think, everything will be explained and the plot only gets better. The only reason its written like that is for the future story line and its necessary in paving way for the later chapters. Also it might seem as if the MC is very weak or doesn't seem strong at all even though it is mentioned that he is strong, the reason for that is as I mentioned earlier due to the fact that most of the fights in the beginning stages are against stronger opponents. But you don't have to worry about that at all as he receives a big power-up later on in the story. The MC is not naive or anything so you don't have to worry about that. I hope you guys enjoy this novel as much as I did. -HL
Dropping it. No idea where the author is trying to take the story past around chapter 70 and quite frankly it was better before 70. Also wheres the romance, I'm halfway through the novel and dropping it but haven't come across even the inclination of it. Maybe it's very late not sure.
I'm obssesed with this novel now. Here I am checking every week for the author to return. There are lots of exiting moments there and It is so good that It made me cry so much, I kept sobing and sobing. I hope you'll like It too. AUTHOR PLS COME BACK AND GIMME MOREEE!!!
it started out pretty decent but it fell apart at chapter 70 it was so confusing and weird to me so i dropped it immediately after that it couldve went a better way tbh
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This book’s awesome. Mr Author, I’m not sure what your future plans are with the novel, but I just want to thank you for the read so far. the climax of the first arc gave me goosebumps throughout. It was just really nicely done. Thanks for writing this. I hope it continues soon.
Shameless 5-star review from the author :) This is my first novel, so I hope you guys will give feedback and constructive criticisms that can help me improve. Don't hesitate to add your experience and reviews of the novel! Also, treat this review as a Q and A section.
The novel was pretty good afterall at first I thought it was a copy from TAP but then spent my time continuing reading the novel and found it interesting ......but......is it over or still ongoing? It has been a year already... It better not be over Author-nim.
Really good overall, just send like their are some inconsistencies with the mc. Only other complaint is the “Romance” tag, as there is none
Are you abandoning this novel? It was really good With amazing possibilities I waited eagerly for the first 3 months and now I come here every now and then to see if there is a new chapter.
Just read all the free chapters and this is a really good story and I'd like to see the but the last update was 1yr ago and it seems the story isn't over yet so am really hoping you continue
This is one of my favorite novels but when will it be updated? It's been 1 year and I haven't updated this, it's really frustrating, I only have 1 request, hopefully it'll be updated quickly, I'll be waiting!
please continue this story it's really awesome with a unique style to needs to continue
Please update bro, I will give 5 stars if you update it Please update bro, I will give 5 stars if you update it Please update bro, I will give 5 stars if you update it
when are you continue the novel?,pls release more do not drop it.[img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Update stability as u can see is 0character design is 0 too as have read till chapter 100 but still haven't truly loved any character so far ...Story is 8 but has too many mistakes like the fking book , babysitting protagonist even though he is weaker than him by a x to the power million world background and writing quality is nice which made me read it till chapter 100 Overall even though author is newbie he definitely has potential for top works but is too inconsistent heard he was sick hope he gets well soon and can continue with this story dropped it not cause it was that bad but it would mean the same if I read it til ch 240
after reading the synopsis and tags of the novel I thought it would have a crazy Mc who won't hesitate to kill for his need use people for his own good but it wasn't anything like that I read 51 chapter as of now and for only once I have seen him using his brain to do something interesting?? he even felt guilty of killing his own classmates who were corrupted by demon Overall if you want a novel with crazy anti-hero MC who isn't wagging his tail for the original hero of the novel don't read
The author just bites off way more than he can chew, and instead of fleshing out topics, he just adds more to the point where you forget the old ones. It's so infuriating when he talks about a cool mechanic like manipulating nether to create a core, a new energy, then 20 chapters later there's 20 new characters added, 20 new plotlines with the characters, 10 new potential abilities and now he's just playing with a cat that is definitely normal just trust me bro. a prime example is when he trys to recruit someone to a gang, and then before he goes back to finish it, nether manipulation is introduced, his past is exposed adding more characters and backstory to characters, Susan stalks him, conquers a dungeon with new abilities........... blegh just please finish what you start in a reasonable time, or at least don't clutter the story so much in the process.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I really liked this novel. but sadly there is no more updates on this. Can author just give us rough knowledge about whether he will continue it or not and if he is gonna continue then when can we expect that
I advise you to read up to chapter 200, because longer and already stuffy work becomes many times worse when mc frees himself from the control of the system
When i first read this book, i had not read the Author's Pov. But now that i did skim through it a little, i can say that the first (40 chapters or more ?) are HEAVILY inspired of it.Only the Mc is different .But as more and more chapters pass , one can see for himself/herself that the story has its own path. I've already reviewed the book once. However now that I'm more experienced my mind has changed on quite a few points. Let's start with the pros : -The Mc is so fun ! Nathan, unlike Ren Dover, doesn't care so much about sticking to the original noveľs plot, which is a plus.Also , he is smart,has a mysterious back story, and is quite deranged . - The side characters are well done. - The plot is intriguing and promising. Every fight is epic , well depicted and well explained . - The Mc isn't OP but his wits and perseverance are just amazing. - The pace is nor quick nor slow . Then, the cons : - The updates are a too inconstant . It's been three months already that the book hasn't been updated and this is so disappointing. Sure the author has a life aside from writing. But everyone does. Yet here we are all to read and/or write. So i don't buy this excuse. Plus , the author has done the same with his other book so i'm really unhappy.(This inconsistency in the updates is in fact the main reason for my low rating.) - The inspiration of the Author's Pov is really strong in the first chapters. Honestly, i can now understand why some people stopped so early in their tracks . Still, it didn't last long(by the way , it's really relative) so i won't hold it against this book too much. Ah, there's still another flaw!The author's forcing is too evident when it comes to situations where he wants Mc to help the original book's Mc.And this excuse of " This character helped me face my depression" seems a bit too shabby. Apart from these points, i don't really have any complaints about this book. So what to say in the end ? It's a good book but Author's huge inspiration of the Author's Pov, the Mc's unconvicing reason for helping the original book's Mc, and the INCONSISTENT UPDATES convinced me to drop it.
This novel is great because of the writing quality,story development world background is (very)good and i like it
So I like the plotline even if the theme "extra" is overused in novels. The writing quality is good. I kinda like the story development (but why did you kill Ethan 😭). The updating stability is kinda unstable.(note: I was bored so I write a review for this novel and this review is based on my opinion so don't critize me if there's something you don't like about my review)
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ This is my 2nd review. I have been reading this novel from the get go since the 1st chapter. The start is very interesting but right after that it might not suite everyone's taste. As some of the things he does may not make any sense at first I guarantee it will later on. There might be an arc in the novel i.e. 'The Underworld Arc' that mostly contains only fights and that also against stronger enemies most of the time, so you might see the MC get thrashed once in a while. This part may feel bland for some readers (I myself somewhat thought the fights were repetitive) and they may drop it but I do hope they continue reading it and give it another chance as you will not regret it, the final fight of this arc literally gave me chills it was beautifully written and well-described. At around Ch.70 it might feel as if the story has lost direction or that its quality has fallen, however it's not what you think, everything will be explained and the plot only gets better. The only reason its written like that is for the future story line and its necessary in paving way for the later chapters. Also it might seem as if the MC is very weak or doesn't seem strong at all even though it is mentioned that he is strong, the reason for that is as I mentioned earlier due to the fact that most of the fights in the beginning stages are against stronger opponents. But you don't have to worry about that at all as he receives a big power-up later on in the story. The MC is not naive or anything so you don't have to worry about that. I hope you guys enjoy this novel as much as I did. -HL
Dropping it. No idea where the author is trying to take the story past around chapter 70 and quite frankly it was better before 70. Also wheres the romance, I'm halfway through the novel and dropping it but haven't come across even the inclination of it. Maybe it's very late not sure.
I'm obssesed with this novel now. Here I am checking every week for the author to return. There are lots of exiting moments there and It is so good that It made me cry so much, I kept sobing and sobing. I hope you'll like It too. AUTHOR PLS COME BACK AND GIMME MOREEE!!!
it started out pretty decent but it fell apart at chapter 70 it was so confusing and weird to me so i dropped it immediately after that it couldve went a better way tbh
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ This book’s awesome. Mr Author, I’m not sure what your future plans are with the novel, but I just want to thank you for the read so far. the climax of the first arc gave me goosebumps throughout. It was just really nicely done. Thanks for writing this. I hope it continues soon.
Shameless 5-star review from the author :) This is my first novel, so I hope you guys will give feedback and constructive criticisms that can help me improve. Don't hesitate to add your experience and reviews of the novel! Also, treat this review as a Q and A section.