Reviews of Majesty's Journey 2: Natasha's Symbiote in Marvel by That_One_Dead_Ali - Webnovel

17รีวิว

4.71

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4thBlackGoblin

This story has a great idea going. The whole wishes thing and multiple yet same protagonists. And since its in the original marvel, it seems more interesting than most. But I do have some problem with It. 1st. The pace. yeah it's true it didn't happen instantly, but Natasha got too interested too fast. I mean she is a spy for goodness sake. She should have been skeptical for at least 30 chapters in my opinion. 2nd. I dont know if you just don't care, but when you are writing a story, you don't just change stuff out of nowhere. Once something is published, you stick with it. Even if it's trash. okay I guess i can understand that driving yourself further down a black hole is bad, but at least cover your tracks. Rewrite of as if the chapter you want changed. Then put a note to the original readers that there was change. This way, the new readers will have a smooth experience.

1yr
ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
i_dont_like_garems

I read several stories about ms symbiotes and I liked this one the most, looking forward to more chapters!! (Writing through google translator)

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Clockwork_055

man I love this story,but can anyone recommend some fanfiction where MC is symbiot .

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
masswolf

I love your story I just wish you would update more often.

1yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Davil_Hunter_1113

we need more chapters [img=angry] will you please upload

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
name1681

Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Davil_Hunter_1113

please upload more chapters. [img=update]

1yr
ดู 7 การตอบกลับ
Wolf_Savage_9952

hi authors I really like the concept of scattering his soul across the multiverse but i sincerely hope that iI will not see all the soul peaces( main characters of the the different stories) battling among themselves to see who is going to be the main conscience at the end please 🥺 🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Alamsone445

J'ai adoré cette fanfiction, sûrement une des meilleures que j'ai lues🤩. J'attends et j'espère la suite avec impatience. Bon travail a vous, vous avez une inspiration qui me convient bien.😉

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
lolipopp69

Hmm~ Nice another symbiote mc~~~~~~~~~~~

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Mandarin_PAPA_754

interesting .............................

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
xNoReadNoLifex

Could you add the non-human tag please. I dont like this one bit but since i did not read it i will rate it from that. I just dont understand why a human would give up havIng a human body to gaing a body that requires a host to thrive.

2yr
ดู 12 การตอบกลับ
Lynch_Kairie

It is very good, the bad thing would be is that it says it is from another reality. Even so I kept reading and forgetting that, if you forget the beginning everything is good. This trilogy if you can say, is interesting Like the soul lad that is good.

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Unsightly

I really liked marvel: Sudoper venom, I hope this can be better than it. I do love the concept of symbiotes but I have never seen a good fanfics with them.

2yr
ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
EC_Wolf
LV 13 Badge

I so wanted to read it, but then you had to go and add that he tells him that he is from another reality/dimension. Rule number one of doing SI's, the SI never tells he or she who they were in their last life and never tells that it's from another dimension, you just don't do that. Story not for me, Good day.

2yr
ดู 25 การตอบกลับ
TyrantTron335

Isn't there a Chinese novel called Marvel: Super Venom. is it rewrited or copied or your novel. 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
khazar

I always wanted a fanfiction like this I always wanted a fanfiction like this I always wanted a fanfiction like this I always wanted a fanfiction like this please don't drop 🙏

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
4thBlackGoblin

This story has a great idea going. The whole wishes thing and multiple yet same protagonists. And since its in the original marvel, it seems more interesting than most. But I do have some problem with It. 1st. The pace. yeah it's true it didn't happen instantly, but Natasha got too interested too fast. I mean she is a spy for goodness sake. She should have been skeptical for at least 30 chapters in my opinion. 2nd. I dont know if you just don't care, but when you are writing a story, you don't just change stuff out of nowhere. Once something is published, you stick with it. Even if it's trash. okay I guess i can understand that driving yourself further down a black hole is bad, but at least cover your tracks. Rewrite of as if the chapter you want changed. Then put a note to the original readers that there was change. This way, the new readers will have a smooth experience.

1yr
ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
i_dont_like_garems

I read several stories about ms symbiotes and I liked this one the most, looking forward to more chapters!! (Writing through google translator)

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Clockwork_055

man I love this story,but can anyone recommend some fanfiction where MC is symbiot .

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
masswolf

I love your story I just wish you would update more often.

1yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Davil_Hunter_1113

we need more chapters [img=angry] will you please upload

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
name1681

Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Davil_Hunter_1113

please upload more chapters. [img=update]

1yr
ดู 7 การตอบกลับ
Wolf_Savage_9952

hi authors I really like the concept of scattering his soul across the multiverse but i sincerely hope that iI will not see all the soul peaces( main characters of the the different stories) battling among themselves to see who is going to be the main conscience at the end please 🥺 🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Alamsone445

J'ai adoré cette fanfiction, sûrement une des meilleures que j'ai lues🤩. J'attends et j'espère la suite avec impatience. Bon travail a vous, vous avez une inspiration qui me convient bien.😉

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
lolipopp69

Hmm~ Nice another symbiote mc~~~~~~~~~~~

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Mandarin_PAPA_754

interesting .............................

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
xNoReadNoLifex

Could you add the non-human tag please. I dont like this one bit but since i did not read it i will rate it from that. I just dont understand why a human would give up havIng a human body to gaing a body that requires a host to thrive.

2yr
ดู 12 การตอบกลับ
Lynch_Kairie

It is very good, the bad thing would be is that it says it is from another reality. Even so I kept reading and forgetting that, if you forget the beginning everything is good. This trilogy if you can say, is interesting Like the soul lad that is good.

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Unsightly

I really liked marvel: Sudoper venom, I hope this can be better than it. I do love the concept of symbiotes but I have never seen a good fanfics with them.

2yr
ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
EC_Wolf
LV 13 Badge

I so wanted to read it, but then you had to go and add that he tells him that he is from another reality/dimension. Rule number one of doing SI's, the SI never tells he or she who they were in their last life and never tells that it's from another dimension, you just don't do that. Story not for me, Good day.

2yr
ดู 25 การตอบกลับ
TyrantTron335

Isn't there a Chinese novel called Marvel: Super Venom. is it rewrited or copied or your novel. 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
khazar

I always wanted a fanfiction like this I always wanted a fanfiction like this I always wanted a fanfiction like this I always wanted a fanfiction like this please don't drop 🙏

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ