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2.5
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
แบ่งปันความคิดของคุณกับผู้อื่น
เขียนรีวิว
レビューを入力してください。可能な限り詳しくご感想をお書きください。あなたのレビューは物語にとって非常に重要です (140文字以上推奨)。............................................................................................
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your clearly not going to listen to any advice of getting help so just leave webnovel already if thats the case, if a guy doesnt want to get cured then just get him out so no one has to get infected or worse. go back to wattpad or something just leave
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If the author writes as a troll, it's fine, but if he really enjoys this kind of thing, I pity him............................................................................................................................................................. 5 stars for daring to write this
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レビューを入力してください。可能な限り詳しくご感想をお書きください。あなたのレビューは物語にとって非常に重要です (140文字以上推奨)。............................................................................................
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I HATE NTR.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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get a therapy author ....................................................................................................................
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If the author writes as a troll, it's fine, but if he really enjoys this kind of thing, I pity him............................................................................................................................................................. 5 stars for daring to write this
you disgusting human being get therapy and delete this ................................................................................................................................................................................. - - - - - -
Continue please …………..…………..…………..…………..…………..…………..…………..…………..…………..…………..…………..…………..…………..…………..…………..…………..…………..…………..…………..………………………..
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This is what 0 p**sy does to a mthrfckr.... .............. ...........................................................................................
im concerned for you author, are you going through something, do you need help, if you can contact me and delete this fanfic as soon as possible🙏
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