Primogenitor in Marvel อ่านออนไลน์ฟรี

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Dont know if the author deletes bad reviews or... Writing quality is good and updates are consistent so far. story development was interesting until shortly after meeting carol. The whole hypocrisy play with getting her kidnapped and then going "woo me... i could have prevented that. Poor carol feel bad and i have to suffer living with that but all for the greater good" would make dumbledore fans proud. Add to that a rather random Adoption and spoiling said daughter with mostly slice of live elements derailed it a lot. Dunno if it will get better again but currently at chapter 24 i guess i will have to drop it. characters seem rather linear and simple with rather rushed character interactions and the relationshipdynamic. No problem if relationships may develop fast and you dont have to wait 100k words for some romance or friendship bit currently the character development is at most slightly above the love at first sight lets marry trope. Might work with mind control ina slightly darker work but here its just random

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1yr 102

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LV 12

Dragonblaze

A MCU x Strike the Blood fic. A never been done before concept, at least as far as I'm concerned. Moreover, the writing style is good and not in script style, which automatically makes this better than 95% of fics in Webnovel. Keep up the good work, Author, and keep the chapters coming.👍

2yr 48

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LV 14

DaddyDavo

dialogue looks like it was created by an anti social teenager who has never had a real conversation.

1yr 41

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LV 12

Klillo

It's my personal opinion so don't take any offense. The novel is very well written and close to zero grammar mistakes. The world background didn't change much from original marvel or at least not yet so I will only give one star as I think the there should be a butterfly effect considering that the Mc is from a fairly wealthy family that should have quite some influence on the world with every action it does. Mc is typical "I just got my powers but at least I know what they do" - guy. He trains them but seldomly uses them which is quite sad considering the power he has. It's also quite a shame that he didn't came into contact with the marvel vampires. About the story. The only thing he does is going around and f**k his women. There's also a little bit about the world but not really much. His family affection is a nuisance after some time as I think that it is too much and the story doesn't progress. About giving the characters a background. It's a nice idea and I don't really mind but it's unreasonable after some time. Just do it in 20 chapters and that's it. There's no need to span the entire beginning in 100+ chapters. If you wanted to give them a background do it somehow in moderation. I also don't get it why he doesn't create more vampires but instead creates super soldiers. Now the only important information is, that he has three wives (maybe 4 if you count ophelia), has three children (for which I personally hoped that there would finally be a male as the sole male character seems to be the mc). He is a king of a country and subdued some kree people. He does almost nothing except for getting women and doing them and also playing with his daughters. It's the first time I saw such a mix stb+marvel but somehow the implementation could've been far better and it's too slow paced.

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1yr 29

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LV 4

Absolute_Qlipoth

Im the first review................. ....

2yr 12

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LV 13

Diluc_Gunnhildr

The story more slice of life than action, too bad for fanfic marvel Thumbs down ,👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

1yr 11

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LV 3

_Alenkar

an ff of the strongest progenitor, I can not wait to read about this new adventure, and it would be nice to see growth on the part of his side "vampire" I see a lot of ff with vampire, but soon a suruba of powers enter and is very confusing its power level, would be interesting to get these powers outside the bloodline, and transform into other avatars or strengthen what you already have, one day realize my dream of seeing a mixture of alucard with Raizel and in the end awakening or creating some deity over "monsters" anyway it was just a tip thank you for your attention.

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2yr 10

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LV 4

LastGod

Why does every op mc want to be a evil or anti hero in fanfic. You dont got to be a golden hero. But there ain't no reason to become a criminal kingpin. That kind of thing just gets super annoying after awhile the grey anti hero, evil, my justice is justice character is so played out.

1yr 9

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LV 4

Brent_6064

I'm but the harem tag is stopping me from reading your story. harem is a concept which is both unethical and barbaric type of romance. stop with these kinds of Chinese wuxia bs.

1yr 8

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LV 3

George_Vasiliu

MC gets OP as fk power then does nothing except play house in Marvel... MC gets OP as fk power then does nothing except play house in Marvel...

1yr 7

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LV 1

WintyLP

nice

2yr 5

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Tim_Entler

The story is too rushed. Everything seems forced, and the interactions between characters is as unrealistic as it ever could be. The author is not very knowledgeable about strike the blood or just vampires in general to even try to write this story. This is just ignorant teenage wish fulfillment garbage.

1yr 4

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LV 4

TharinduIndunil

I am at Chapter 10!!Is Harem/Wives has Only 5 Candidates!Will There be Concubine (More than 5)

1yr 4

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LV 1

Maycon_Henrique_10

História é muito boa escrito ignora essas pessoas que falam mal da sua história ela realmente boa uma das poucas histórias de um vampiro que fica boa 🤔🤔😄😄😄

6mth 3

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LV 13

Daenerys_Targarye

My favourite fanfic on here been gone for a bit so miss some chapters so going to have a re read

8mth 3

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LV 14

Drakeayr

Honestly, it’s a master peice. I was a bit hesitant in the middle sections with the big plan, but it turned out better than I could have imagined. Btw I suggest you keep reading for this one cuz it just gets better, in writing quality, story, etc.

8mth 3

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Siegfrized

It's good but last few chap mid 40 to 50ish getting worse imo, Natasha arc taking to long and in last chapter 54/52 i think, it using relative while before use familiar

1yr 3

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LV 4

sage5156

it's hard to find a strike the blood fan-fic, and this is one is just great 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖

1yr 3

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LV 11

Arnab_Saha_8005

Good fic so far but wander if Damian will ever learn any magic or mistic arts? or can he absorb powers from infinity stones? It will be really interesting if he learns blood magic/manipulation/arts and proper martial arts and techniques instead of brute forcing his way through. Like seriously his huge magic power reserves are a waste if he does not learn magic and a vamp needs his blood and shadow/dark magic especially a progenator. ****Humble sugestions to make this story even better,,,*** **Mc turns Black widow into an elder vamp and add to his harem? Natasha will be op with vamp powers though and become a deadly spy and asassin...** **Mc needs to learn Blood magic and every elemental magic due to his affinity with them cuz of his fameliars** **Mc learns proper refined fighting techniques and magics instead of brute forcing through everything cuz later his enemies will always ne more powerful than the previous** **Hera, Thor's sister joins the harem**