/ Martial Arts / World conqueror system
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Daniel's life was filled with hardships—he watched his friends die in front of him, among other things—which made him crave vengeance, but Daniel is still a mortal who would perish if shot or suffered a significant injury.
When Daniel passed away, his plans for retribution failed and became useless; at that time, his heart was filled with remorse, hate, and fury. However, just as Daniel thought all was finished, he unexpectedly awoke in...
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Daniel is a human being who lived on Earth and was killed by a gunshot after experiencing the brutality of the truth.
When Daniel first awoke in the wilderness, he noticed a strange flying tablet that would enable him to fulfill all of his desires, but there were many unanswered concerns around this.
Who's controlling who? Is Daniel gonna transformation into something as a result of the system constantly assigning him a mission? Alternatively, does Daniel control the system? What was the system's starting point, and is this a coincidence? Or Daniel's destiny was already predetermined and was just waiting to come true.
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สถานะพลังงานรายสัปดาห์
-- การจัดอันดับด้วยพลัง 
-- หินพลัง คุณอาจชอบ
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- กาสร้างตัวละคร
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My friends if you want a good novel and a great writer just read this novel and help him. I have the feeling he will be better and this novel is just a start but it feels like he has already skipped a few steps (in a good way) This novel is great with great imagination and care, you can feel the warmth in every word and feel his hard work. Bro keep it up, I am a fan of your novel. Keep getting better and God will bless you with good luck.
The core of the novel is extremely solid, it is entertaining and immersive and it wants to be told. The characters seem lively and depicted well, it's a solid novel. Don't feel like you need to establish authors notes in the middle of a chapter though, as that breaks the immersion. Especially in something as important as a first paragraph which is huge for a novel. If a reader doesn't understand something, we'll ask. Then you can reply to a comment :) The other detractor that I see, which gets better over time in your chapters, is grammar and sentence structure. Every once in awhile it'll get away from you and pull the reader out of the story. I understand English isn't your first language, don't worry, it happens to those of us that have it as a first language all the time. but I do think it would be worth going back through and editing your early chapters (especially the first one as that's what is going to hook new readers) as your skill improves. You're definitely headed in the right direction! Keep up the good work.
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The plot thrills me, and the characters are well written. You also could see the author's improvement in every chapter. Really recommend this story for everyone 9/10, I love it..
excellent novel, waiting for more more more more. .. .. .. .. .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
There are grammatical mistakes here and there but its not something that you halt you from reading. From the first chapter, its intriguing and eye catching. There is a lot of mystery to uncover from the beginning that leaves you desperate to find out. I am very interested to see the growth of both the story and the author's writing ability!!!
It's great novel but I feel like it's same to a manga it's deference character and deference line but same location . I just support this novel 5 star because I can feel like I'm reading a manga🙂
Plot of the stories great. Specially the part when is describ inner thought of the goddess. I have to say it was a unique part. 'man it was creepy~ I still have a goosebumps'
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It's reincarnation similar to others but it has unique way of delivering it. It also has the same vibes of Moonlight Fantasy with a little (World's best assassin isekai) in terms of the Goddess.
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Great plot and world background. I love stories that are about conquering worlds and such..... but more so I like it when the mc chases godhood ....so I wanted to tell you that you have my support
The grammar and punctuation could use more work. I could feel the pain of Daniel. The gods in all worlds are like that; cold, observing and uncaring.
If you are a fan of descriptive stories then this story is for you. The author is praiseworthy when it comes to portraying imaginative details. The story also has a decent pacing although there are several grammatical corrections, all in all, the book is fun to read.
I really like the plot of the whole story. Makes one want to continue reading... The character development is fun to read as well... Overall a good book
the book has a great structure adding with the author's mind set I say I will recommend this book the author took time organizing he's imagination it's a super👍👍👍👍
Im readi this novel for the first time, it’s only a few chapters… rest have been taken down for updation. So far the writing is good and story is interesting..😍 I’ll be reading further to see how the story unfolds.. keep updating..
I really enjoyed the beginning chapters. i normally don’t enjoy systems but it definitely sounds good so far. I hope you focus more on the world building. And you did good at conveying emotions
Is very interesting, the story is amazing and I can not stop reading as I want to know what happens next. is very well detailed and lets you imagine and feel like you are in the story. keep up the good work, Author. I'm rooting for you.
Quite an interesting novel I recommend you to read, I hope there will be a thousand chapters, good luck to the author![изображение = опыт][изображение = опыт]
I was a little wrong earlier, but forget it. Well, I thought the story was interesting? I love it when he starts to look down on those gods. That is all from me! ha ha!
I mean if anyone told me that this novel wasn't interesting, I would slap that person cause look at how this book is unique, you can't get all this in just any other book, so the author did excellent work in writing this novel, Hats off to you Author and great job!! A little editing here and there but this book is a masterpiece, I highly recommend it to everyone, Guys!! Please read this book and Trust me you won't regret reading this book so go ahead and read the book!!
จำนวน 0 : Auxiliary Volume
จำนวน 1
- 1 Chapter 1 death 2 years ago
- 2 Chapter 2 Gods 2 years ago
- 3 Chapter 3 Gods II 2 years ago
- 4 chapter 4 the ancient one 2 years ago
- 5 Chapter 5 bullshit 2 years ago
- 6 Chapter 6 flashback 2 years ago
- 7 Chapter 7 flashback II 2 years ago
- 8 Chapter 8 end I 2 years ago
- 9 Chapter 9 end II 2 years ago
- 10 Chapter 10 new abilities 2 years ago
- 11 Chapter 11 knowledge 2 years ago
- 12 Chapter 12 strange 2 years ago
- 13 Chapter 13 new feature 2 years ago
- 14 Chapter 14 Shelter 2 years ago
Great novel with a good plotline having a unique direction, looking forward to further interesting chapters .Not your usual system dependent novel.