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You went away waaaaay to much. That is to much power and to many powers. he may as well be a god of the omniverse with the first few physical, mental and spiritual abilities and after getting to be as infinity strong as posible he decides that is not enough so lets get the WHOLE throne of heroes! If that is the first chapter maybe in the second he creates an infinite number of clones and controls every women in every multiverse to be in love with him at the same time
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WE NEED MORE CHAPTERS. WE NEED MORE CHAPTERS. WE NEED MORE CHAPTERS. WE NEED MORE CHAPTERS. WE NEED MORE CHAPTERS. WE NEED MORE CHAPTERS. WE NEED MORE CHAPTERS.
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Very Good :) Can you add chapter with all characters please. ===================== ================================= ================== ========================
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Only read the description and all I have to say is that this FF is creative and lowkey hilarious before I even started reading. Like come on, the author's name, the book's title and the description? All 5 star material, great and hilarious. I'm truly looking forward to reading this FF.
first of all, I like to say that this ain't a serious novel by any means. This is a fic for all the degenerates out there. its a fun novel and I like to see more of it
please keep going ..?.....????????yybtbybgftvtvvtvtbtbbybynhngbbtvt rgtujgsxvghfjjbfdfghhhh. ngtdgsnsngjgsnsvkkgegekkvkggskkgsmgksksskgmdgdhdldd
I like the story author san, and I hope you don't drop it. I just hope you keep the worlds anime only, other than that nice work and please update more, I can't wait!!! 👍👍👍
I got to chapter 06, and I can say that if you are a sadist and love to see the protagonist take all the women on the way without scruples, then you have found a treasure of the millennium my friend hahaha
this is good and I hope you continue and don't drop it. don't listen to the haters and can't wait for more chapters. .
varah reethi adhi varah loabi vey. kiyan faseyhav vefa vaguthu beykaru kuran ragalhu vahaka eh. ekamaku adhi ragalhah vaahaka flesh out eh nuvey
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GRAN LIBRO, ME DA MIEDO LO SORPRENDENTEMENTE EL POTENCIAL QUE ESTE LIBRO TIENE, DESDE AHORA TIENES UN NUEVO FAN, ¿POR QUE NO HABRÁ MAS LIBROS COMO ESTE?, ES DECEPCIONANTE
Good work author-san...the chapter is long enough for us degen fellow...i hope you can update more author[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Well, good job Author. Continue this good story, This is what I've been looking for. And as for grammar, you can improve on that, learn slowly.
best, This is indeed a story of wish fulfillment that is suitable for a cultured man like me hahahahaha.................................mmm.
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You went away waaaaay to much. That is to much power and to many powers. he may as well be a god of the omniverse with the first few physical, mental and spiritual abilities and after getting to be as infinity strong as posible he decides that is not enough so lets get the WHOLE throne of heroes! If that is the first chapter maybe in the second he creates an infinite number of clones and controls every women in every multiverse to be in love with him at the same time
Good work Good work Good work Good work Good work Good work Good work Good work Good work Good work Good work Good work Good work Good work Good work
WE NEED MORE CHAPTERS. WE NEED MORE CHAPTERS. WE NEED MORE CHAPTERS. WE NEED MORE CHAPTERS. WE NEED MORE CHAPTERS. WE NEED MORE CHAPTERS. WE NEED MORE CHAPTERS.
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Very Good :) Can you add chapter with all characters please. ===================== ================================= ================== ========================
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Only read the description and all I have to say is that this FF is creative and lowkey hilarious before I even started reading. Like come on, the author's name, the book's title and the description? All 5 star material, great and hilarious. I'm truly looking forward to reading this FF.
first of all, I like to say that this ain't a serious novel by any means. This is a fic for all the degenerates out there. its a fun novel and I like to see more of it
please keep going ..?.....????????yybtbybgftvtvvtvtbtbbybynhngbbtvt rgtujgsxvghfjjbfdfghhhh. ngtdgsnsngjgsnsvkkgegekkvkggskkgsmgksksskgmdgdhdldd
I like the story author san, and I hope you don't drop it. I just hope you keep the worlds anime only, other than that nice work and please update more, I can't wait!!! 👍👍👍
I got to chapter 06, and I can say that if you are a sadist and love to see the protagonist take all the women on the way without scruples, then you have found a treasure of the millennium my friend hahaha
this is good and I hope you continue and don't drop it. don't listen to the haters and can't wait for more chapters. .
varah reethi adhi varah loabi vey. kiyan faseyhav vefa vaguthu beykaru kuran ragalhu vahaka eh. ekamaku adhi ragalhah vaahaka flesh out eh nuvey
moreeeemee.ememememememememememermrkmeretrrrrrewrrerrreerererrreererererrrreeerrrerreerrrheheheenemmememememememeeeteerreerrreeereeerrerrerrre
GRAN LIBRO, ME DA MIEDO LO SORPRENDENTEMENTE EL POTENCIAL QUE ESTE LIBRO TIENE, DESDE AHORA TIENES UN NUEVO FAN, ¿POR QUE NO HABRÁ MAS LIBROS COMO ESTE?, ES DECEPCIONANTE
Good work author-san...the chapter is long enough for us degen fellow...i hope you can update more author[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
I like the story ......................................................................................................................................
Well, good job Author. Continue this good story, This is what I've been looking for. And as for grammar, you can improve on that, learn slowly.
best, This is indeed a story of wish fulfillment that is suitable for a cultured man like me hahahahaha.................................mmm.