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I love it, but is it on hold or dropped? Because there haven't been any new chapters recently. And if it is not dropped i hope a new chapter can come out soon because when i said i love it, i meant it because it was a good read both in grammar and story development. And don't feel pressured by this comment, because i am just asking for info and i hope you are all well and can keep living your best life.
An interesting combination of a game and comic story. Pretty raw storytelling with a need to streamline the transitions in mood and locations, but filled with imaginative leaps in directions. Hopefully this remains a source of joy to the author as they improve. Thank you.
Really enjoyed this stroy, loved the world building and although i couldnt read it completely since its paid i fully made use of the free period to read as much as i can. The characters are interesting and its a relly unique premise in the way that the MC eventually becomes super OP but faces heavy limitations and lots of tribulations.
It’s an amazing book. The only thing that needs to happen now is for the Author to wright us more chapters so we can marvel more of his excellence.
an actually good titanfall novel I thought it was but a myth. bit slow on the updates but other than that doing great. 👍 👌 .
This is my actual review. Writing Quality: 5 stars The Writing Quality is much better than a lot of stuff on this site. Stability of Updates: It's fine Story Development: I'm not a big fan of marvel. Also their are other reincarnators and they also know about the system. Character Design: It's Fine World background: It's Marvel
Slight spoiler While i love the story and especially the fact titans are in it the start when he becomes the captain feels too smooth Unless that was in the training and was not mentioned Otherwise perfect
I liked the story for three reasons first and the development of the story second the main character and third how strong he is I am a big fan of the Marvel franchise and TitanFall
Please continue the story, I really want to see how you integrate the MC and his Army into the Marvel Universe. Its a really interesting read.
The story is a bit confusing, things just don't seem to fit together and the war in the simulation was too forced. The fanfic idea is not bad, but I think the author's choice to give everything to the MC right away was not good. If it had started slowly, with the MC needing to develop from soldier to pilot and finally captain of a starfleet it might have been interesting, but as it stands the fanfic is simply not interesting.
Titanfall! Titanfall! Titanfall! Titanfall! Titanfall! Titanfall! Titanfall! Titanfall! Titanfall! Titanfall! Titanfall! Titanfall!
I hate the 140 word restriction. can't my stars prove how I feel about novels. I doubt people review novels unless there either trash or well made. so, yeah. good novel
HUH?!?!?!? !? TITANFALLLL?!?!?? HUUUUHH?!?!?! LESSSSS GOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! F#&$ YEAH BABY, THATS WAHT IVE BEEN WAITING FOR, THATS WHAT IS ALL ABOUT!! WOOOOO
I say this is really good, I dipped for a few days because the MC got a crew and I like solo guys more, but I got over it. And Author, I recommend using Grammarly for the writing quality, there are some mistakes that are more than noticeable.
nice............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I can't wait for the line prepare for Titanfall. ................................................................................................................
I love this fanfiction of Titanfall. I hope you don't drop this beautiful story. ___________________________________________________________
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Hey...I feel like I know you, like I've met you before at a different time and maybe I didn't really take quite a liking to you, but we were different then, I've changed, you've changed. I feel like we're finally ready for each other, and I'm sorry if I've slighted you in the past but I promise as long as you promise to give me your 100%, I'm gonna give you all my power stones. In conclusion, I wanna give this another go. I'm ready for this, are you? Yours faithfully A satisfied reader
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I Love this but to me this would ve in game category no film...[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Honestly this story till now is amazing the interactions and how they talk are natural while till now it building up the character to be able to survive and possibly dominate marvel so I agree with how author us doing the building of character rn also as a titanfall lover it's a dream come true. the character building is amazing and we can see how the personality of the character is. I can talk all day about the positives only thing I hope author adds is buffing up the mc or his tech because he will be in marvel
Intresting idea and so far well written, yet to see any marvel characters or places. Personally I would have preferred Mc in marvel with Titanfall and similar game unlockables, I think it would have been more fun. But you know authors choice
I love it, but is it on hold or dropped? Because there haven't been any new chapters recently. And if it is not dropped i hope a new chapter can come out soon because when i said i love it, i meant it because it was a good read both in grammar and story development. And don't feel pressured by this comment, because i am just asking for info and i hope you are all well and can keep living your best life.
An interesting combination of a game and comic story. Pretty raw storytelling with a need to streamline the transitions in mood and locations, but filled with imaginative leaps in directions. Hopefully this remains a source of joy to the author as they improve. Thank you.
Really enjoyed this stroy, loved the world building and although i couldnt read it completely since its paid i fully made use of the free period to read as much as i can. The characters are interesting and its a relly unique premise in the way that the MC eventually becomes super OP but faces heavy limitations and lots of tribulations.
It’s an amazing book. The only thing that needs to happen now is for the Author to wright us more chapters so we can marvel more of his excellence.
an actually good titanfall novel I thought it was but a myth. bit slow on the updates but other than that doing great. 👍 👌 .
This is my actual review. Writing Quality: 5 stars The Writing Quality is much better than a lot of stuff on this site. Stability of Updates: It's fine Story Development: I'm not a big fan of marvel. Also their are other reincarnators and they also know about the system. Character Design: It's Fine World background: It's Marvel
Slight spoiler While i love the story and especially the fact titans are in it the start when he becomes the captain feels too smooth Unless that was in the training and was not mentioned Otherwise perfect
I liked the story for three reasons first and the development of the story second the main character and third how strong he is I am a big fan of the Marvel franchise and TitanFall
Please continue the story, I really want to see how you integrate the MC and his Army into the Marvel Universe. Its a really interesting read.
The story is a bit confusing, things just don't seem to fit together and the war in the simulation was too forced. The fanfic idea is not bad, but I think the author's choice to give everything to the MC right away was not good. If it had started slowly, with the MC needing to develop from soldier to pilot and finally captain of a starfleet it might have been interesting, but as it stands the fanfic is simply not interesting.
Titanfall! Titanfall! Titanfall! Titanfall! Titanfall! Titanfall! Titanfall! Titanfall! Titanfall! Titanfall! Titanfall! Titanfall!
I hate the 140 word restriction. can't my stars prove how I feel about novels. I doubt people review novels unless there either trash or well made. so, yeah. good novel
HUH?!?!?!? !? TITANFALLLL?!?!?? HUUUUHH?!?!?! LESSSSS GOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! F#&$ YEAH BABY, THATS WAHT IVE BEEN WAITING FOR, THATS WHAT IS ALL ABOUT!! WOOOOO
I say this is really good, I dipped for a few days because the MC got a crew and I like solo guys more, but I got over it. And Author, I recommend using Grammarly for the writing quality, there are some mistakes that are more than noticeable.
nice............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I can't wait for the line prepare for Titanfall. ................................................................................................................
I love this fanfiction of Titanfall. I hope you don't drop this beautiful story. ___________________________________________________________
Very good. Read it. Now. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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uwu thanks for the fanfic[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Hey...I feel like I know you, like I've met you before at a different time and maybe I didn't really take quite a liking to you, but we were different then, I've changed, you've changed. I feel like we're finally ready for each other, and I'm sorry if I've slighted you in the past but I promise as long as you promise to give me your 100%, I'm gonna give you all my power stones. In conclusion, I wanna give this another go. I'm ready for this, are you? Yours faithfully A satisfied reader
Y a du bon mais l'écriture me fait grincer des dents. On a l'impression que les dialogues don forcé mais sinon bonne histoire [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
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I Love this but to me this would ve in game category no film...[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Honestly this story till now is amazing the interactions and how they talk are natural while till now it building up the character to be able to survive and possibly dominate marvel so I agree with how author us doing the building of character rn also as a titanfall lover it's a dream come true. the character building is amazing and we can see how the personality of the character is. I can talk all day about the positives only thing I hope author adds is buffing up the mc or his tech because he will be in marvel
Intresting idea and so far well written, yet to see any marvel characters or places. Personally I would have preferred Mc in marvel with Titanfall and similar game unlockables, I think it would have been more fun. But you know authors choice
I give this a one star because I feel like it