HP: The Book of the Wise

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ZappingCobra

I hope you don't drop the book. The concept is nice so is the environment setting.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Aphrodite_123_Ares

It's a good start and the writing structure is good too. I'm looking forward to more adventure and excitement coming from this book. I hope you do good in the coming chapters .I cannot wait for the next one✨ keep up the good work ☺️

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Daoistofcancer

Exp is my blood, exp is my sword, for I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Amen[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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Harmlessbody_302

I have greatly enjoyed reading this story so far and look forward to more chapters in the future. As it is now I believe that this story is probably one of the better written stories on this site and will continue to be so in the future. I have great hopes for this story and will continue to follow its development.

It's my first time seeing a fan fic for the Ollivanders. I have read many Fan fictions yet never came across one where it's about the Ollivanders. well I am looking forward to the upcoming chapters. good luck

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streiz

Excellent plotline and very unique. It really give you a fresh and unique plot about HP. Probably my only problem is having few chapters and update stability, but overall excellent novel and I really recommend this.

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Xavier_Kaito

t's a good start and the writing structure is good too. I'm looking forward to more adventure and excitement coming from this book. It's a shame you didn't continue this story because it had great potential.

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DaoistZlQoLq

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Gotha

until now it's really interesting. Keep going [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Pretty good fic after a long amount of time.....not that great fan of a harry potter fanfics but this one is different, I can bet.I will definitely reccomend you this one.

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Monsterkind01

quite the good story about an OC without Reinkarnation i hope this will not be an oneshot and this story will be continued, it would be quite the shame if such a good start will not get an equally good ending.

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Goat13

This is truly one of the best harry potter fanfics I've read. 100% READ!!! the MC is not reincarnated but is given a book that was written by merlin and is Smart, Hardworking, and is ambitious and want to be the greatest wizard in the warldo!!! It has great potential, NEEDS MORE CHAPTERS!!!!

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Arka_Bhattacharjee

Great Concept and World Building... This Unique way of Pushing System into the storyline is quite intriguing ... I wish you would continue this story..

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TonyOrochi

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