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Ok… first of all, nothing compares to this book. I catch myself comparing all other stories to this one and none ever come close. The only negative i can comment on is the fact that i now yearn for this level of obsession and unrelenting love. Im married so wish me luck in trying to make him obsessed with me and make him my Dominus. 😩🤩
THIS BOOK IS SO GOOOOD!!! THE CHAPTERS ARE ENGAGING, THE PACING OF NARRATION AND WORDS ARE JUST RIGHT— EVERYTHING WAS RIGHT AND I'M LOVING ALL OF IT!!! I AM A FAN NOOOOW. 🤩 This might be overreacting but this is one of the best books I've found here. This book deserves massive recognition!!! 💖💖💖
it's good but I can't see to find your other stories like book one of the male lead is obsessed with me i can't find it with bewitching illusion and would like to see more of your work
Viewing just the first chapter alone is enough to draw you in, Love the words used and your writing! Sorry I couldn't review this until now. I hope you and however else reads this comes to know/realize how lovely your writing is!
Wow! we have another beautiful one from our wonderful author mary, i really love this, the first chapter made me really made me want to be the queen, if i could get someone as tall as that i would use him as a three and sit on his back all day!!! i love this book already!! awesome work author mary. 😍😍😍😍🥰🥰❤❤❤❤🧡🧡
It started off with a great thesis that has blanketed throughout the story, the very first line has gotten readers curious of what would happen next. The diversity between the male lead and the female lead was impressive- one huge and scary looking, yet well-mannered, while the other was small and frail, yet firm. It was a good contrast among the main leads and it depicts an interesting pair; a tint of cliché and originality to create this masterpiece.
Intriguing beginning and in general the story itself is well-written. The characters are also interesting. Mary, your novels are always interesting! I will read further.
Such a dominant knight to go straight up to the Queen and say, “I’m your bodyguard now, deal with it!” I like that. Keep up the good work!! 👍
This story is wonderful, I hardly ever like romance but this book caught my attention really quickly and I'm really excited to see what would happen next ☺️❤️
Brilliant!! Loved the story so far. The character and background development is perfect. Definitely recommended! Keep up the great work. Cant wait to read more
Hello author just finished reading your masterpiece! love the content and the characters. It is easy to comprehend, i manage to understand the whole story its so good. Patiently waiting for the next chapters Have Great day Ahead!!
The book was well written, an aspect that could hook readers to read more. I also like the concept of the story, I hope to see more from the author! 🤗
The writing is really good and really brings out the ideass of the author, the lore might not be for everyone, but it’s something that i never saw in other novels, it might be a bit simple, but that doesn’t make it bad, instead it focuses the reader’s attention on the two main characters instead of on other details.
I like the writing style and the way you portrayed the characters. It will be interesting to read how the story will unfold. Good work author.
I know he seems to be in love, but I can't wait to uncover the truth behind why a rebel would betray his brothers and return to be a knight in the same kingdom. The suspense is enough to keep me going. Good job, author.
Everything is exquisite Nothing but exquisite The book's got me hooked already and it's just the beginning OMG ITS PRICELESS I TOTALLY RECOMMEND If you're looking out for an interesting FL book to keep you hooked then I highly recommend this one!! THANKS AUTHOR FOR BLESSING US ONCE AGAIN
I rarely read FL books. This one, though, yes, it has me hooked. What I like is the contrast depicted between the two lead characters. It is as if they are the Ying to each other's Yang.
I really loooooooooovvvvvveeeee the plot with interesting characters. Hope to read more of the chapters soon. The author never failed to impress me with her works and this was my second time reading a book from a same author😁Kudos to the author👏👏👏👏👏
the world is sometime unfair. it's the force of affection that makes us keep going. You have already taken a step and started the journey. Fighting! Good luck for WSA. .... Readers please show some love to this author.
Oh! A love story? Nah, not that simple. The author has me hooked, so update regularly and don't left us hanging here. Definitely recommended. peace;
What a great masterpiece..this is something readers want to read.. In simple words, everything written in here is great and the grammar is good..the plot is fantastic..overall this is a treat to read
I thought the story would go slowly but it pickles up from the second chapter itself. I couldn't drop till the last chapter.But unfortunately, this only has five chapters. We as readers need to give more attention and support to hidden gems like these. If you’re looking for a good novel to read, I’d definitely recommend this. Check it out and thank me later
Ok so for the author so far this is amazing and definitely hooks one in oj the romance and for the potential reader u should well do jist that and read! ! For anyone else... Still just read and support the author. Its simple
Fell in love with the book from the summary only, the plot is amazing, it still might be too early to tell as not a lot of chapters have been updated but I am willing to take a risk, if you like the royalty genre this book is probably for you. And I think the summary can explain this novel better then I will ever be able to.
Kudos to the author for this awesome book. The characters just bark at each other everytime they meet, I am so excited to see how this hate relationship turns into a steamy romantic story! Please upload more chapters , I can't wait anymore to read! ❤
Amazing start author, the first chapter was mind-blowing,I didn't even realize I was done with all the five chapters, it was well written and the characters are well designed too I already find myself rooting for Dominus, soon enough the queen will not be able to resist him, I'm rooting for you,keep updating author, I'm expecting more of this.
I love the words used in every conversation, the tune, and generally the way it was written. The first few chapters and it's already giving me shivers. How more the future chapters, I am expecting it to be more intense. I'm sure it will.
Woah, a story of a knight, sounds intriguing to me. I wonder who is the poor king here, lol. Anyways, I wish luck to Queen who has to deal with this night. Mary all the best for your new novel. Hope you will win this WSA. Best Wishes :-)
author did a good job building up the story and plot is very interesting and characters and writting style simply amazing, Mary San doing a good job good luck
The story of a man that had no problem leaving everything behind to go be with the object of his obsession. This wouldn't have made sense unless... He's a bit of a yandere of course, which he is, being a man that cares very little about anything else, and I think that's what I like about this story. It's self-aware and I think it's refreshing. I mean it has "yandere" int he title. I also do like that the reason he developed an interest in her was because she literally put herself in danger to save not only her men, but the enemy as well. The ML is not just obsessed with the FC because of her looks, which seems to be the reason in many stories like this I read before. Other than that, it's really been fun to read and evening. Highly recommend^^
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Ok… first of all, nothing compares to this book. I catch myself comparing all other stories to this one and none ever come close. The only negative i can comment on is the fact that i now yearn for this level of obsession and unrelenting love. Im married so wish me luck in trying to make him obsessed with me and make him my Dominus. 😩🤩
THIS BOOK IS SO GOOOOD!!! THE CHAPTERS ARE ENGAGING, THE PACING OF NARRATION AND WORDS ARE JUST RIGHT— EVERYTHING WAS RIGHT AND I'M LOVING ALL OF IT!!! I AM A FAN NOOOOW. 🤩 This might be overreacting but this is one of the best books I've found here. This book deserves massive recognition!!! 💖💖💖
it's good but I can't see to find your other stories like book one of the male lead is obsessed with me i can't find it with bewitching illusion and would like to see more of your work
Viewing just the first chapter alone is enough to draw you in, Love the words used and your writing! Sorry I couldn't review this until now. I hope you and however else reads this comes to know/realize how lovely your writing is!
Wow! we have another beautiful one from our wonderful author mary, i really love this, the first chapter made me really made me want to be the queen, if i could get someone as tall as that i would use him as a three and sit on his back all day!!! i love this book already!! awesome work author mary. 😍😍😍😍🥰🥰❤❤❤❤🧡🧡
It started off with a great thesis that has blanketed throughout the story, the very first line has gotten readers curious of what would happen next. The diversity between the male lead and the female lead was impressive- one huge and scary looking, yet well-mannered, while the other was small and frail, yet firm. It was a good contrast among the main leads and it depicts an interesting pair; a tint of cliché and originality to create this masterpiece.
Intriguing beginning and in general the story itself is well-written. The characters are also interesting. Mary, your novels are always interesting! I will read further.
Such a dominant knight to go straight up to the Queen and say, “I’m your bodyguard now, deal with it!” I like that. Keep up the good work!! 👍
This story is wonderful, I hardly ever like romance but this book caught my attention really quickly and I'm really excited to see what would happen next ☺️❤️
Brilliant!! Loved the story so far. The character and background development is perfect. Definitely recommended! Keep up the great work. Cant wait to read more
Hello author just finished reading your masterpiece! love the content and the characters. It is easy to comprehend, i manage to understand the whole story its so good. Patiently waiting for the next chapters Have Great day Ahead!!
The book was well written, an aspect that could hook readers to read more. I also like the concept of the story, I hope to see more from the author! 🤗
The writing is really good and really brings out the ideass of the author, the lore might not be for everyone, but it’s something that i never saw in other novels, it might be a bit simple, but that doesn’t make it bad, instead it focuses the reader’s attention on the two main characters instead of on other details.
I like the writing style and the way you portrayed the characters. It will be interesting to read how the story will unfold. Good work author.
I know he seems to be in love, but I can't wait to uncover the truth behind why a rebel would betray his brothers and return to be a knight in the same kingdom. The suspense is enough to keep me going. Good job, author.
Everything is exquisite Nothing but exquisite The book's got me hooked already and it's just the beginning OMG ITS PRICELESS I TOTALLY RECOMMEND If you're looking out for an interesting FL book to keep you hooked then I highly recommend this one!! THANKS AUTHOR FOR BLESSING US ONCE AGAIN
I rarely read FL books. This one, though, yes, it has me hooked. What I like is the contrast depicted between the two lead characters. It is as if they are the Ying to each other's Yang.
I really loooooooooovvvvvveeeee the plot with interesting characters. Hope to read more of the chapters soon. The author never failed to impress me with her works and this was my second time reading a book from a same author😁Kudos to the author👏👏👏👏👏
the world is sometime unfair. it's the force of affection that makes us keep going. You have already taken a step and started the journey. Fighting! Good luck for WSA. .... Readers please show some love to this author.
Oh! A love story? Nah, not that simple. The author has me hooked, so update regularly and don't left us hanging here. Definitely recommended. peace;
What a great masterpiece..this is something readers want to read.. In simple words, everything written in here is great and the grammar is good..the plot is fantastic..overall this is a treat to read
I thought the story would go slowly but it pickles up from the second chapter itself. I couldn't drop till the last chapter.But unfortunately, this only has five chapters. We as readers need to give more attention and support to hidden gems like these. If you’re looking for a good novel to read, I’d definitely recommend this. Check it out and thank me later
Ok so for the author so far this is amazing and definitely hooks one in oj the romance and for the potential reader u should well do jist that and read! ! For anyone else... Still just read and support the author. Its simple
Fell in love with the book from the summary only, the plot is amazing, it still might be too early to tell as not a lot of chapters have been updated but I am willing to take a risk, if you like the royalty genre this book is probably for you. And I think the summary can explain this novel better then I will ever be able to.
Kudos to the author for this awesome book. The characters just bark at each other everytime they meet, I am so excited to see how this hate relationship turns into a steamy romantic story! Please upload more chapters , I can't wait anymore to read! ❤
Amazing start author, the first chapter was mind-blowing,I didn't even realize I was done with all the five chapters, it was well written and the characters are well designed too I already find myself rooting for Dominus, soon enough the queen will not be able to resist him, I'm rooting for you,keep updating author, I'm expecting more of this.
I love the words used in every conversation, the tune, and generally the way it was written. The first few chapters and it's already giving me shivers. How more the future chapters, I am expecting it to be more intense. I'm sure it will.
Woah, a story of a knight, sounds intriguing to me. I wonder who is the poor king here, lol. Anyways, I wish luck to Queen who has to deal with this night. Mary all the best for your new novel. Hope you will win this WSA. Best Wishes :-)
author did a good job building up the story and plot is very interesting and characters and writting style simply amazing, Mary San doing a good job good luck
The story of a man that had no problem leaving everything behind to go be with the object of his obsession. This wouldn't have made sense unless... He's a bit of a yandere of course, which he is, being a man that cares very little about anything else, and I think that's what I like about this story. It's self-aware and I think it's refreshing. I mean it has "yandere" int he title. I also do like that the reason he developed an interest in her was because she literally put herself in danger to save not only her men, but the enemy as well. The ML is not just obsessed with the FC because of her looks, which seems to be the reason in many stories like this I read before. Other than that, it's really been fun to read and evening. Highly recommend^^
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