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O homem mecânico(ptbr)

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James um homem depressivo e apático está cansado de sua rotina vazia, até que um dia ele conhece um homem que tem no lugar de sua cabeça uma lâmpada,ambos formam um laço,entretanto,James não esperava que isso iria devastar a sua vida



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as ações e opiniões do protagonista não refletem a minha pessoa,tratem o personagem principal como uma sátira (sátira doq? vai ler pra descobrir)
dito isso o personagem principal é alguém perturbado,vez ou outra ele vai dizer coisas absurdas que novamente, não refletem a mim

provavelmente os capítulos vão ter um formato episódico, porém,cada conto é importante para o desenvolvimento do protagonista

espero que se divirtam e se gostar comenta

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dark_luma

a historia ta legal,só precisa melhorar a qualidade da escrita fkrkfkekfkefkefpdksdkdksdpkdfkfspdkfksdkfpskdfkpskfpksdfkfpskdkpfkkfpwemfwkepmwldf,m,flkdelfwmefpwemfmwmfpmewfmefemmwfmwfmpw

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DaoistclkMnl

Os personagens e conceito parece muito legal só falta um pouco de background e os detalhezinhos a mais que dá pra melhorar Vou por vários números pra encher os caracteres 727727272727727272772727272733

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AGula
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tá uma ótima história,mas dá pra melhorar!!! ^-^

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