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haven't read the book yet but I read the older version and if this is anything like the other one then a five star review is the minimum that it deserves XD
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honestly the original was one of my all time favorite Rwby fanfics and I would constantly go back and reread it, I know this book isn't a continuation of it but if it doesn't deviate that much from the original I'll be happy. Then again if it somehow turns out better that would be awesome
I genuinely don't understand why authors but their mc through torture but when the torture finishes they acts like nothing happend when infact they just went through one of the most traumatic moment of their life, why do that it seems so redundant and just leaves a bad taste, Things like this changes a person completely but instead of that we get an Mc who is weirdly obsessed with Blake who indirectly caused the said torture, Yeah he shouldn't blame her but neither should he follow her like a puppy.After all that he should have a goal like taking revenge or something but no he wants to follow blake who doesn't even remembers what happens, like bro I want to feel bad for what happened to the mc but all I feel Is anger at the novel, Sorry for the rant I just got way too heated reading this and side note the writing quality is nice but like I said the plot and action of the makes me rage so hard.
man, this story might be cool, but what's the point of it if you're dropping it halfway like the others?
I read the other one an i hope this one is better. One thing to make sure on is that the relationships are not forced or easy. I think that was one drawback from the original is that girls would just fall for him with no real reason
Perfect, I had been waiting for updates on the last one and decided to take a quick look at the profile. Knowing that this'll be a rewrite of higher quality has me pumped
Cheeky Author self-review I wanted to rewrite my fanfic and change a few things. Mainly the beginning. So those of you who have read the original, you should notice a difference in how I write and the difference in dialogue. Those of you who haven’t read the original, I reccomend you stick with this one since I’m adding and removing various things, but if you want a glimps at what is to come you can check out the old one.
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haven't read the book yet but I read the older version and if this is anything like the other one then a five star review is the minimum that it deserves XD
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honestly the original was one of my all time favorite Rwby fanfics and I would constantly go back and reread it, I know this book isn't a continuation of it but if it doesn't deviate that much from the original I'll be happy. Then again if it somehow turns out better that would be awesome
I genuinely don't understand why authors but their mc through torture but when the torture finishes they acts like nothing happend when infact they just went through one of the most traumatic moment of their life, why do that it seems so redundant and just leaves a bad taste, Things like this changes a person completely but instead of that we get an Mc who is weirdly obsessed with Blake who indirectly caused the said torture, Yeah he shouldn't blame her but neither should he follow her like a puppy.After all that he should have a goal like taking revenge or something but no he wants to follow blake who doesn't even remembers what happens, like bro I want to feel bad for what happened to the mc but all I feel Is anger at the novel, Sorry for the rant I just got way too heated reading this and side note the writing quality is nice but like I said the plot and action of the makes me rage so hard.
man, this story might be cool, but what's the point of it if you're dropping it halfway like the others?
I read the other one an i hope this one is better. One thing to make sure on is that the relationships are not forced or easy. I think that was one drawback from the original is that girls would just fall for him with no real reason
Perfect, I had been waiting for updates on the last one and decided to take a quick look at the profile. Knowing that this'll be a rewrite of higher quality has me pumped
Cheeky Author self-review I wanted to rewrite my fanfic and change a few things. Mainly the beginning. So those of you who have read the original, you should notice a difference in how I write and the difference in dialogue. Those of you who haven’t read the original, I reccomend you stick with this one since I’m adding and removing various things, but if you want a glimps at what is to come you can check out the old one.
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