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So! Here's my review on what I think is a DC fanfic with a ton of potential and has my mind wanting more to read. Writing Quality: So, quality wise it's good. Only reason I'm giving 3 stars is because of the errors here and there scattered about that break my immersion at times. Also, because as far as I'm aware, the author is English speaking. Even if it is auto correct, I still give 3 stars for not going back to edit the obvious ones. Stability of Updates: This is a new fanfic so not really much to review on, but so far so good. Story Development: It's good. Not original at first, but then again nothing is in fanfics, but has it's own charm and is still in it's developing stages at the moment. There is no clear goal for the MC and I like that. Not saying the author doesn't know what he's doing, but that the story is naturally developing in a way that has me thinking of multiple possibilities that I don't know the end goal. Character Design: I like the MC. I've seen comments hating on him for being a "beta MC" but that's just them reading too many OP fanfics and Wuxia face slapping BS. The MC is no pushover, but he isn't an idiot either. He's a regular guy, in a f****ed up world and is suffering from a disconnection from reality and fiction in a realistic fashion that isn't presented as being a wimpy kid but isn't treated as a nonchalant passing of rushed character development that he gets over quickly and pursues strength. He's a guuy genuinely searching for some meaning in his existence and following the most convenient path for himself until he finds it. World Background: Not much going on, but that's because it's still new. For now, it's enough, but can probably be more descriptive in terms of his (MC) current setting in scenes. Right now, it's more like a description at the start and end of scenes with some breaks in the middle that describe a scene change before going back into dialogue. But still a 5 because the details mentioned in passing are enough for the imagination. Overall: Ton of potential with a unique MC and thought process that I can see him easily become insane or "real" in the eyes of the residents of DC. It's rare seeing this type of personality and thought process being explored in a way that doesn't make it feel like I'm reading a dictionary or scientific report. This feels like a nice, simple fanfic with some spice and not like the other existential crisis MC's in stories that take one chapter to write about nothing but filler, or some that are rushed so much that there is now flow. Short Version: I like it.
The mc doesn’t have the ability to see the future he is so weak This is joke im trying to get a laugh Out of author before he deletes it
Years of reading fanfic and all kinds of things, when I tell you that I am capable of reading cultivation novels, young master and the kid who thinks he is Mount Tai, it is not enough, the fanfic starts well, it has a panic attack that makes you conscious of the danger of the world and you have a homeless man who is the best martial artist in DC, with a good system... and with all that, you screw up in the most epic way possible, he is not a "normal guy" in DC, he is a retard who doesn't know how to do anything well, He does not understand his power, he is afraid of any criminal who appears, he always gets beaten up, he is a hypocrite who criticizes heroes and does the same From one brother to another, if you are not able to get through the tenth chapter without getting stressed, do not continue with this, it will only get much worse, for your health leave it there, you will only want to kill the protagonist yourself
I thought I recognized this writing style! I loved both this book and DC: System Shock. Im going to look through your other books here in a second to see if any catch my interest, but lovely work, nonetheless.
It's an interesting story concept. A hero story, but not your usual one while willing to help, the Mc doesn't believe he needs to be a "cape" to help. His progression from just concern for himself to concern for his city is amazing growth. And the dc comic knowledge is huge, and while certain characters fell like they were just thrown in, others were paramount to the story.
Legendary Fic ............................................................................................. That's really all that needs to be said
Just completed reading every single chapter. I must say it good read for someone who has basic knowledge of DC universe. It was a bit rushed, but it can pass. Didn't like the time skip and the ending, feels like the author wanted to finish it as quickly as possible.
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Man, I like stories with interesting MCs, no matter what, but this MC is like "NOTHING", the statistics are a lie and unbalanced, and the system forces the MC to do things hahaha, the worst type of system in general
Whiny, pushover mc, don't expect the mc to act like an adult or ever be not a pushover. . . . . .. . .. . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . .. . . .
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An enjoyable story to read in your free time with good characters and different directions from the normal cliches. My main gripe with this story is the actions of some of the characters and mc, as well as the end of the story being extremely rushed which leaves a bad aftertaste.
the author said the mc wouldn't be like batman, but I clearly see the mc act a bit like batman, he's emo, doesn't kill, slightly paranoid.
Bom no geral final meio apressado e no início o mc é um pouco chato com o sistema más tirando isso é uma boa história..............................................................................................................................................................
It’s so sad that cheating has become common nowadays which made me draw the conclusion that no one is to be trusted. In my own case, my ex-boyfriend cheated on me with a coworker which I actually noticed but I couldn’t get any evidence until I got in contact with a professional IT guy who helped me out. Then I got access to his call logs and text messages then I realized he had been cheating on me all along, if you really need his services you can reach him on hacksecrete@ gmail. com or call/text or whatsapp on +1 7 7 4 2 0 2 9 4 4 5 I’m sure he’d help you in just one swipe. you can also reach him if you're not able to withdraw your funds from any online trading platform like expert-option ,cal financial, Analyst , coinspot, Ctxprime and many more .
you write synopsys as though you try to create proper quality novel fic but turend out another system power fantasy garbage
Started great, Ended bad. Shouldv've ended the story when learned how he ended up in DC and how he got the system.
author writes this in the synopsis ' Are you sick of the usual power-wank, wish-fulfillment garbage? Are you tired of one-dimensional fanfiction protagonists? Have you had your fill of monotonous monologues and forced dialogues? Do you want to see steady, slow character development and power level growth?' then goes ahead and give mc a system that makes him overpowered in the less than 100 chapter and then has to comeup with bs negative psychological traits for balance. there is no struggle, no hardwork, almost everything is given by system. story goes bland fast and just another fanfic of many.
slow paced and i like it, i ship with Harley Quinn. i didn't read DC comic but even so i didn't see anything wrong why The history
me a encantado la historia, el final es un poco amargo. pero por el resto me a encantado, se nota el gusto por los personajes al no corromperlos para adaptarlos a la historia.
Best DC book I Have read so far and i am still 100 chapters from finishing.
poor character in a bs story written by a bs poor author who refuses to admit his mistakes
This is one of those fanfics you start reading and immediately get an headache. The MC apparently get an existential crisis and have a mental breakdown a few days after reincarnating, he doesn't want to be a "fictional character in DC" and doesn't believe anyone around him is actually "alive" as they are only figures preprogrammed to act as they are acting by script. That leads to him not wanting to use the points he gets from the system to get stronger, even after almost getting killed twice in one week he still doesn't use the points to get stronger. Eventually he gets over his fear and starts using the system points to get stronger, but yet he is still not killing anyone for some reason. That leads to the exact situation of all DC heroes, defeating a villain just to fight the same villain again a week later after he recovers... So he become just what he feared and criticized, a hero who is always taking out his enemies but never killing them, just like Superman and Batman... (I know the author said that the MC doesn't kill cuz he doesn't want the Justice League to be on his tail and arrest him, however that is stupid cuz even if they arrest him, he can just escape from prison just like every other villain does every week... and even after he gets stronger so he doesn't fear the Justice League he still didn't kill anyone... So in general the Anti-Hero tag is just there to pull readers...) Now, how to describe the story as a all? Predictable... Just as every DC comic, the author points out how stupidly and predictable the heroes act in those comics, and yet the MC acts exactly the same... I've never seen such an hypocrite author. On the one hand he makes the MC complain about how unfair it is that the civilians are getting killed constantly by villains who escape prison, and yet the MC too doesn't kill anyone and simply send them to prison to escape again...
Weak MC with the mentality of a spoiled 13y/o for the first 20 chapters or so, after that he becomes stronger, but still keeps on complaining and moaning, even when he gets system rewards. Then somewhere around ch50 or so Batman shows up, tells him to jump and he says ''how high?'' That's where I dropped it and the reason for the low score.
The story was very good, but the ending was very boring and poorly told, but the story is very good, the beginning is great, the protagonist is not a door that you lose interest after two lines, just the ending was kinda bad.
A decent DC based fanfic. The MC seems real enough as a transmigrator to the DC comic world. The author loves calling out the logical fallacies of the comic world but it's like saying wrestling is "fake". Overall this is still a quality DC fanfic worth taking a look at.
The only good quality I've seen here is the grammar, and there are some hiccups (words missing mostly). A quarter of the text is the story, the second quarter is begging for power stones, the third is ranting about comments and reviews and the last one is full of ads for his new (dropped) fanfics. Spare yourself the trouble, don't start it.
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if only mc killed those thugs and villains . At least occasionally 1 or 2 everyweek. And instill some kind of fear in the villain.then it would have been gold . straight to my top 3
querias escribir algo innovador pero seguiste cayendo en el mismo cliché de "protagonista normal". Loco, entiendan que a las personas normales no les va pasar nunca eso, y si les pasara se moririan a los 3 dias, al menos que sea una trama de sistema conspirativo pero eso seria aun mas malo ya que al final todo seria arreglado por el sistema y el mc no tendria ningun momento real. DEJEN DE HACER PROTAGONISTAS NORMALES LPM, el mc es el heroe de un mundo, no una basura cualquiera reencarnada, y además, dejen de usar sistemas, cualquier imbecil con un sistema puede hacer lo que sea, hagas lo que hagas solo sera un destino regalado. entiendan lpm
MC claims he's not a hypocrite when he literally is. Despises heroes, describes them as "not real" or stupid for expecting smth to happen by jailing villains. He became the same. Author's excuses for such behaviour are pathertic
It was a good read and I enjoyed the ride but frankly the ending ruined it. It was beyond disappointing and utterly lackluster. To further go into detail; the ”epilogue” was extremely rushed, went into very little detail and threw a complete curveball when considering MC’s romantic relationships. The author also didn’t bother to finish the side character story lines but left them wide open. This would have been a 5/5, with the ending I actually wanted to go 3 stars but frankly I did enjoy the journey here so I’m giving it 4.
The ending was rushed AF. it was like the author one day woke up and decided to end it today .out of nowhere we get a three years later and 5 chapters after that the story ends with an unknown women being his wife all of a sudden .
I like the story but I just started reading it so I hope MC gets stronger but at the same time I also like how he's not getting unnecessarily strong from the very beginning so yeah pretty decent stuff
You thought you’d find a helpful, informative review that will help you decide whether or not to read the story, but it was me! Wicked the shameless author, giving my own story a 5-star review!
So! Here's my review on what I think is a DC fanfic with a ton of potential and has my mind wanting more to read. Writing Quality: So, quality wise it's good. Only reason I'm giving 3 stars is because of the errors here and there scattered about that break my immersion at times. Also, because as far as I'm aware, the author is English speaking. Even if it is auto correct, I still give 3 stars for not going back to edit the obvious ones. Stability of Updates: This is a new fanfic so not really much to review on, but so far so good. Story Development: It's good. Not original at first, but then again nothing is in fanfics, but has it's own charm and is still in it's developing stages at the moment. There is no clear goal for the MC and I like that. Not saying the author doesn't know what he's doing, but that the story is naturally developing in a way that has me thinking of multiple possibilities that I don't know the end goal. Character Design: I like the MC. I've seen comments hating on him for being a "beta MC" but that's just them reading too many OP fanfics and Wuxia face slapping BS. The MC is no pushover, but he isn't an idiot either. He's a regular guy, in a f****ed up world and is suffering from a disconnection from reality and fiction in a realistic fashion that isn't presented as being a wimpy kid but isn't treated as a nonchalant passing of rushed character development that he gets over quickly and pursues strength. He's a guuy genuinely searching for some meaning in his existence and following the most convenient path for himself until he finds it. World Background: Not much going on, but that's because it's still new. For now, it's enough, but can probably be more descriptive in terms of his (MC) current setting in scenes. Right now, it's more like a description at the start and end of scenes with some breaks in the middle that describe a scene change before going back into dialogue. But still a 5 because the details mentioned in passing are enough for the imagination. Overall: Ton of potential with a unique MC and thought process that I can see him easily become insane or "real" in the eyes of the residents of DC. It's rare seeing this type of personality and thought process being explored in a way that doesn't make it feel like I'm reading a dictionary or scientific report. This feels like a nice, simple fanfic with some spice and not like the other existential crisis MC's in stories that take one chapter to write about nothing but filler, or some that are rushed so much that there is now flow. Short Version: I like it.
The mc doesn’t have the ability to see the future he is so weak This is joke im trying to get a laugh Out of author before he deletes it
Years of reading fanfic and all kinds of things, when I tell you that I am capable of reading cultivation novels, young master and the kid who thinks he is Mount Tai, it is not enough, the fanfic starts well, it has a panic attack that makes you conscious of the danger of the world and you have a homeless man who is the best martial artist in DC, with a good system... and with all that, you screw up in the most epic way possible, he is not a "normal guy" in DC, he is a retard who doesn't know how to do anything well, He does not understand his power, he is afraid of any criminal who appears, he always gets beaten up, he is a hypocrite who criticizes heroes and does the same From one brother to another, if you are not able to get through the tenth chapter without getting stressed, do not continue with this, it will only get much worse, for your health leave it there, you will only want to kill the protagonist yourself
I thought I recognized this writing style! I loved both this book and DC: System Shock. Im going to look through your other books here in a second to see if any catch my interest, but lovely work, nonetheless.
It's an interesting story concept. A hero story, but not your usual one while willing to help, the Mc doesn't believe he needs to be a "cape" to help. His progression from just concern for himself to concern for his city is amazing growth. And the dc comic knowledge is huge, and while certain characters fell like they were just thrown in, others were paramount to the story.
Legendary Fic ............................................................................................. That's really all that needs to be said
Just completed reading every single chapter. I must say it good read for someone who has basic knowledge of DC universe. It was a bit rushed, but it can pass. Didn't like the time skip and the ending, feels like the author wanted to finish it as quickly as possible.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Man, I like stories with interesting MCs, no matter what, but this MC is like "NOTHING", the statistics are a lie and unbalanced, and the system forces the MC to do things hahaha, the worst type of system in general
Whiny, pushover mc, don't expect the mc to act like an adult or ever be not a pushover. . . . . .. . .. . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . .. . . .
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ An enjoyable story to read in your free time with good characters and different directions from the normal cliches. My main gripe with this story is the actions of some of the characters and mc, as well as the end of the story being extremely rushed which leaves a bad aftertaste.
the author said the mc wouldn't be like batman, but I clearly see the mc act a bit like batman, he's emo, doesn't kill, slightly paranoid.
Bom no geral final meio apressado e no início o mc é um pouco chato com o sistema más tirando isso é uma boa história..............................................................................................................................................................
It’s so sad that cheating has become common nowadays which made me draw the conclusion that no one is to be trusted. In my own case, my ex-boyfriend cheated on me with a coworker which I actually noticed but I couldn’t get any evidence until I got in contact with a professional IT guy who helped me out. Then I got access to his call logs and text messages then I realized he had been cheating on me all along, if you really need his services you can reach him on hacksecrete@ gmail. com or call/text or whatsapp on +1 7 7 4 2 0 2 9 4 4 5 I’m sure he’d help you in just one swipe. you can also reach him if you're not able to withdraw your funds from any online trading platform like expert-option ,cal financial, Analyst , coinspot, Ctxprime and many more .
you write synopsys as though you try to create proper quality novel fic but turend out another system power fantasy garbage
Started great, Ended bad. Shouldv've ended the story when learned how he ended up in DC and how he got the system.
author writes this in the synopsis ' Are you sick of the usual power-wank, wish-fulfillment garbage? Are you tired of one-dimensional fanfiction protagonists? Have you had your fill of monotonous monologues and forced dialogues? Do you want to see steady, slow character development and power level growth?' then goes ahead and give mc a system that makes him overpowered in the less than 100 chapter and then has to comeup with bs negative psychological traits for balance. there is no struggle, no hardwork, almost everything is given by system. story goes bland fast and just another fanfic of many.
slow paced and i like it, i ship with Harley Quinn. i didn't read DC comic but even so i didn't see anything wrong why The history
me a encantado la historia, el final es un poco amargo. pero por el resto me a encantado, se nota el gusto por los personajes al no corromperlos para adaptarlos a la historia.
Best DC book I Have read so far and i am still 100 chapters from finishing.
poor character in a bs story written by a bs poor author who refuses to admit his mistakes
This is one of those fanfics you start reading and immediately get an headache. The MC apparently get an existential crisis and have a mental breakdown a few days after reincarnating, he doesn't want to be a "fictional character in DC" and doesn't believe anyone around him is actually "alive" as they are only figures preprogrammed to act as they are acting by script. That leads to him not wanting to use the points he gets from the system to get stronger, even after almost getting killed twice in one week he still doesn't use the points to get stronger. Eventually he gets over his fear and starts using the system points to get stronger, but yet he is still not killing anyone for some reason. That leads to the exact situation of all DC heroes, defeating a villain just to fight the same villain again a week later after he recovers... So he become just what he feared and criticized, a hero who is always taking out his enemies but never killing them, just like Superman and Batman... (I know the author said that the MC doesn't kill cuz he doesn't want the Justice League to be on his tail and arrest him, however that is stupid cuz even if they arrest him, he can just escape from prison just like every other villain does every week... and even after he gets stronger so he doesn't fear the Justice League he still didn't kill anyone... So in general the Anti-Hero tag is just there to pull readers...) Now, how to describe the story as a all? Predictable... Just as every DC comic, the author points out how stupidly and predictable the heroes act in those comics, and yet the MC acts exactly the same... I've never seen such an hypocrite author. On the one hand he makes the MC complain about how unfair it is that the civilians are getting killed constantly by villains who escape prison, and yet the MC too doesn't kill anyone and simply send them to prison to escape again...
Weak MC with the mentality of a spoiled 13y/o for the first 20 chapters or so, after that he becomes stronger, but still keeps on complaining and moaning, even when he gets system rewards. Then somewhere around ch50 or so Batman shows up, tells him to jump and he says ''how high?'' That's where I dropped it and the reason for the low score.
The story was very good, but the ending was very boring and poorly told, but the story is very good, the beginning is great, the protagonist is not a door that you lose interest after two lines, just the ending was kinda bad.
A decent DC based fanfic. The MC seems real enough as a transmigrator to the DC comic world. The author loves calling out the logical fallacies of the comic world but it's like saying wrestling is "fake". Overall this is still a quality DC fanfic worth taking a look at.
The only good quality I've seen here is the grammar, and there are some hiccups (words missing mostly). A quarter of the text is the story, the second quarter is begging for power stones, the third is ranting about comments and reviews and the last one is full of ads for his new (dropped) fanfics. Spare yourself the trouble, don't start it.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ if only mc killed those thugs and villains . At least occasionally 1 or 2 everyweek. And instill some kind of fear in the villain.then it would have been gold . straight to my top 3
querias escribir algo innovador pero seguiste cayendo en el mismo cliché de "protagonista normal". Loco, entiendan que a las personas normales no les va pasar nunca eso, y si les pasara se moririan a los 3 dias, al menos que sea una trama de sistema conspirativo pero eso seria aun mas malo ya que al final todo seria arreglado por el sistema y el mc no tendria ningun momento real. DEJEN DE HACER PROTAGONISTAS NORMALES LPM, el mc es el heroe de un mundo, no una basura cualquiera reencarnada, y además, dejen de usar sistemas, cualquier imbecil con un sistema puede hacer lo que sea, hagas lo que hagas solo sera un destino regalado. entiendan lpm
MC claims he's not a hypocrite when he literally is. Despises heroes, describes them as "not real" or stupid for expecting smth to happen by jailing villains. He became the same. Author's excuses for such behaviour are pathertic
It was a good read and I enjoyed the ride but frankly the ending ruined it. It was beyond disappointing and utterly lackluster. To further go into detail; the ”epilogue” was extremely rushed, went into very little detail and threw a complete curveball when considering MC’s romantic relationships. The author also didn’t bother to finish the side character story lines but left them wide open. This would have been a 5/5, with the ending I actually wanted to go 3 stars but frankly I did enjoy the journey here so I’m giving it 4.
The ending was rushed AF. it was like the author one day woke up and decided to end it today .out of nowhere we get a three years later and 5 chapters after that the story ends with an unknown women being his wife all of a sudden .
I like the story but I just started reading it so I hope MC gets stronger but at the same time I also like how he's not getting unnecessarily strong from the very beginning so yeah pretty decent stuff
You thought you’d find a helpful, informative review that will help you decide whether or not to read the story, but it was me! Wicked the shameless author, giving my own story a 5-star review!