16รีวิว
4.4
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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not exceptional but not mediocre either. The plot is interesting however it lacks a lot of information about the mc and his environment, which limits the immersion and sometimes gives the impression that the world is absurd.
it's a great read. the pacing is good and the story always leaves room to develop further. I would definitely pick this up when your between reads.
well I like this story and even the plot but the updating stability is truly bed it's been like one month since I am been waiting for a new chapter but there is still no update to it well anyway I wanted to ask if any of you seen the same kind of Novel like this in which a boy got a portal in his bathroom ( and this is for author bhai thoda jaldi karna maybe Punjab ke pass rahata hun aur mujhe yah story janni hai Tum Jo Tera Ghar Bata de main vahan a jaunga ya FIR upload karna shuru kar de no offence but thoda jaldi karo kafi time se vate kar raha hun itna bada review to maine jindagi mein nahin likha sirf tu ek pass Rahane wala isliye likh raha hun anyway agar tujhe dusre novel ke bare mein kuchh pata hai to batana ) well I don't know if you are from Punjab or not but I believe you are because you have used this novel if you are Indian you should understand what I have written
Yes the book deserve 5stars.The mc is little naive for now but everything workout good.Author just keep in mind to not show any discrimination in the future as it could have negative effect on the novel.Overall i like the slice of life and buisness building novels so its is on my fav list.
It is the story of an average person getting a portal to the technological world, up to the 17th chapter, there is no young master, no scheming, just a boy starting his business with robots. Update of one chapter is very slow. I need at least 10 chapters a day. Need more, update fast. Grammar and connotation are slightly misplaced but the overall story and character development are good. There isn't much to think about, the story is straightforward and enjoyable to read.
It seems like a good story, is it the kind of growth of the kingdom and recruitment of survivors while getting rich and having a harem? If so, there is still no indication of that. it seems to be slow growing the story so far is just the mc and the robots and it seems like there is only desert on the other side of the door.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
Amezing world build if you can add kingdombuild to this novel one green plant or blue plant or both will be greet and if you can add 2 chaper per day
Good story so far. Keep it up and update more. There are some punctuation writing mistakes other wise good overall. It doesn't seem like English is your 3rd language.
I love Sci-fi stories. It is still startlet, but still good. It isn't a complex story in which I have to remember things. The story is easy to follow. Love the story so far. keep it up
So far so good. 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
Not bad since Author has English as 3rd language. Though there's a need for proofreading and fixing punctuations~~ Overall the story is easy to follow.
your story is Extraordinary with unique😍 ideas. Arrangements of characters very well. your plot is well organized. keep it up. well done. 😊
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Hello, I am the author. Please comment and review if you like it. thank you for your support and also give some suggestions if you have any.
almost the same story a few months back. was a Chinese novel, guy finds a portal in his apt bathroom and brings gs tech back to get rich.
not exceptional but not mediocre either. The plot is interesting however it lacks a lot of information about the mc and his environment, which limits the immersion and sometimes gives the impression that the world is absurd.
it's a great read. the pacing is good and the story always leaves room to develop further. I would definitely pick this up when your between reads.
well I like this story and even the plot but the updating stability is truly bed it's been like one month since I am been waiting for a new chapter but there is still no update to it well anyway I wanted to ask if any of you seen the same kind of Novel like this in which a boy got a portal in his bathroom ( and this is for author bhai thoda jaldi karna maybe Punjab ke pass rahata hun aur mujhe yah story janni hai Tum Jo Tera Ghar Bata de main vahan a jaunga ya FIR upload karna shuru kar de no offence but thoda jaldi karo kafi time se vate kar raha hun itna bada review to maine jindagi mein nahin likha sirf tu ek pass Rahane wala isliye likh raha hun anyway agar tujhe dusre novel ke bare mein kuchh pata hai to batana ) well I don't know if you are from Punjab or not but I believe you are because you have used this novel if you are Indian you should understand what I have written
Yes the book deserve 5stars.The mc is little naive for now but everything workout good.Author just keep in mind to not show any discrimination in the future as it could have negative effect on the novel.Overall i like the slice of life and buisness building novels so its is on my fav list.
It is the story of an average person getting a portal to the technological world, up to the 17th chapter, there is no young master, no scheming, just a boy starting his business with robots. Update of one chapter is very slow. I need at least 10 chapters a day. Need more, update fast. Grammar and connotation are slightly misplaced but the overall story and character development are good. There isn't much to think about, the story is straightforward and enjoyable to read.
It seems like a good story, is it the kind of growth of the kingdom and recruitment of survivors while getting rich and having a harem? If so, there is still no indication of that. it seems to be slow growing the story so far is just the mc and the robots and it seems like there is only desert on the other side of the door.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Amezing world build if you can add kingdombuild to this novel one green plant or blue plant or both will be greet and if you can add 2 chaper per day
Good story so far. Keep it up and update more. There are some punctuation writing mistakes other wise good overall. It doesn't seem like English is your 3rd language.
I love Sci-fi stories. It is still startlet, but still good. It isn't a complex story in which I have to remember things. The story is easy to follow. Love the story so far. keep it up
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Not bad since Author has English as 3rd language. Though there's a need for proofreading and fixing punctuations~~ Overall the story is easy to follow.
your story is Extraordinary with unique😍 ideas. Arrangements of characters very well. your plot is well organized. keep it up. well done. 😊
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Hello, I am the author. Please comment and review if you like it. thank you for your support and also give some suggestions if you have any.
almost the same story a few months back. was a Chinese novel, guy finds a portal in his apt bathroom and brings gs tech back to get rich.