The Phoenix - A GOT Fan-Fiction

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ArrogantYungMaster

The hour is late as I discover this gem, the filth of these harem lovers covers this piece of art and I, for one, shall not stand for this. Rally under me those who want a good novel without a dubious MC stringing females along for his own enjoyment, those of you who fight for a novel that’s not stained with the filthy merrymaking that ruins these great novels. There may come a day when every novel has a harem with no storyline to be seen, BUT IT IS NOT THIS DAY. There may be a day when you open a novel and you see a list of potential harems that author will let these filth choose between, BUT IT IS NOT THIS DAYY. Today we fight!! Let’s send these disgustin b*stards back into the abyss they crawled out of.

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iLoveHarem_S2

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Melshan

Harém: Daenerys Targaryen, Sansa Stark, Margaery Tyrell, Arianne Martell, Myrcella Baratheon....... HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM

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PyteWriter

The story goes nowhere. When your MC is a reality bending phoenix with no limits to power, the story gets stale within a couple of chapters. Whats the point of any of his plans and actions when he can just will anything into existence?

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Rorschach22

This book is nice, I guess, and has a good writing quality but has an enormous flaw that ruin everything so I decided to write this review so that other people like me will not waste their time reading it and then having to drop it later. The flaw I'm talking about is that the MC is born as a reincarnation of a God like being and the story is simply boring, he knows everything, has no equal and he can stop everything he don't like from happening, in one of the last chapter i read he resurrected a character who died years before his birth ... It's not a story, it is more of a dream diary where the MC do something then he teleport and destroy an army in a second because he doesn't want a city to get sacked then resurrect someone and so on. The author has a good writing style but this book is not

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Ferro

It started somewhat good, with good plot and hopes for character development but then it goes to the classic harem WN that you can expect on this site. Writing Quality - 3= Good, it could improve with time. Stability of Updates - 5= Nice updates in my opinion, taking into consideration the length of the chapters. Story Development - 3= Not that great after the harem starts kicking in, as I said, I think this is not good. Character Design - 2= Somewhat 2 dimensional character that confuses me, cannot relate with the MC and the characterization is somewhat basic, coupled with the harem behavior makes this MC subpar in my honest opinion. World Background - 2= The expansion made into an already made world is not that great to guarantee more than 2 stars. Harem novel will always fail to gather the attention of more attentive readers. In all honesty my review serves no purpose if you are writing just for you, or because it is fun. But if you want to write something good and competitive in the market and grow as a writer, then the common harem route is not the way... At least I think so. Have a good day.

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Tyicius

I like the premise of the story and the introduction of the MC, though his background and motivations got lost after he inherited the memories. I'm having a hard time seeing where this can go. It's the problem with an immortal all-powerful entity there's no suspense, only curiosity regarding how will the story will unfold. I'll continue reading because I am curious, I'm just apprehensive because so many of these op mc stories are terrible or dropped. Maybe this will be different, still too early.

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RackTagz

Not much depth to the characters. At No time at least so far do you feel anything for the characters. Very bland, oc is op from the start and doesn’t really have any Challenges or emotionel depth. It just is. The story is not very deep it just skins over the details of the world.

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Phoenix1998

Nice. interesting concept. never read an immortal in got fanfic. excited for it though. Nice. interesting concept. never read an immortal in got fanfic. excited for it though.

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Eltheldreda

I had just finished reading this novel from start to finish and I found it to be a truly interesting read very enjoyable from start to finish and that ending truly had me tearing up. Many who have read up to a certain extent or even finish the book may say stuff about the romance and s*x scenes but the story has plenty of actual story on top of that. All in all it was a great read and I highly recommend for people to give it a read.

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Benoit_Valtin

Hello I'm looking to give someone an idea for a Marvel story, based on the mcu here is the speech, an Afro Frenchman comes back to life after being dead, he died because he had nothing to do with this rotten world anymore , war in Ukraine, racism, corrupt politics, corrupt stars (Pierre Palmade)... in his new world, he discovers that he has superman's powers and that he is in Marvel. After several days of reflection he decides to kill the president of North Korea, China, the United States and most of the countries of Africa (including the black panther tchakka) once that is done, from wakanda who can transfer his lyrics all over the world it makes a statement. ********************* My name is Kal El I am the last of my race the Kryptonians, and I am not human. I have lived in your world for several years, learning your customs, your failures and your successes and I must say that the humans have disappointed me deeply. You don't have to know what to do to save your planet, you limit yourself to greed and self-sufficiency, it's enough, I'm going to take charge of a country, France, and a continent, Africa in 5 years I will show the results of my efforts. Also know that I am going to the desert island sgsgtsgfr and will stay there for the next 24 hours. You are free to send a nuclear bomb on me, or whatever is stronger, I have already determined that no power in this world can harm me, I do not intend to save this world if it does not want to not be saved but I made a gesture for those who have the good will by killing the most corrupt presidents of this world, I leave you the continuation. ********************* More than Marvel, it's about country management, a system will arrive once its video is sent to the world.

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RetMod

Man what to tell about this novel - Heart warming story - Alot of onion cutting chapters - God MC who everyone respects - Harem with good Leads cant wait to read more of this author

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pointbreak_101

one of the best game of thrones fanfiction I ever read

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Angry_Reviewer

If you're looking for a wham, bam, thank you mam, 5 minutes and you're back out the front door story definitely isn't for you. If how ever you are looking a nice long Sunday drive along a scenic highway were the journey is as important as the destination then give this a shot. Sure it's a slow build but it gets there in the end and is enjoyable the whole way.

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Daybreak_6987

I mean what can I say it’s an op character written perfectly. For obvious reason there isn’t much strength development where the story shines is in its word development and emotional development due to our ocs existence he has all these memories that are not his and because of that he’s a blank state at first only really caring for his mother but as he has his OWN experiences he grows more and more till he has his own wife’s then childern and legacy in the world of Planetos. Overall his character shares the biggest change with the very creature his is a phoenix that being change and rebirth he changes the world of Planetos forever while also accepting nothing lasts forever and you need to let go and move on. Overall an easy ten outta ten which is even more impressive again given he’s all power in most areas from a young age.

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EugenSimion

First and foremost I want to say that I normally hate the combination of an OP character and harem, but this story is simply breathtaking! It's a marvelous piece to read, and reading it was a privilege, for witch I want to thank the author for. For those that are interested in this one, give it a chance, it's worth your time!

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

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SomethingMalefic

usually like Op mc but this got real boring real fast.

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PhonyGhost08

You had no right to make that ending so good!!!