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I just started reading this book and I have to say it is one amazing book The first chapter alone is intriguing and makes me want to read more ☺️ Keep up the good work author🤗
I have read all the chapters and I can't wait for the next update when will it be updated [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I read all the chapters in one go... really really loved it.... and now I want to know more of their story and what will happen next ... hope to read more soon...
This Author is so good at what she does, I love her books and they are all amazing ,here is a recommendation to those that haven't had a taste of this book or this Authors books ,Please read this book and trust me you won't ever go wrong after reading this book .I hope you can enjoy the book as much as I did😉❤️🤗
Let me just say I love the way this author plays with words great job Author for this excellent work, keep it up Author 💯. the grammar is amazing the plot is great, I lo e this book what a masterpiece.
i really love this kind of novels and i feel sweet to read such sort of novels. it isn't easy to write such novel as it has higher of making a plot hole mistake....i appreciate your work
A great novel! I'm really impressed author. So, first is the writing quality. Honestly, it's a lot better than a lot of novels on this platform, but it's not the best either. There are typos here and there, but they don't detract from the flow of the story. My only advice would be to either proofread your work before publishing it or have a friend proofread it. Second is the stability of updates, which, from the author's explanation is because of finals. Of course, I understand this, because I was faced with the same problem, but still, not posting for 28 days makes it so that your novel is pushed far down in Webnovel's algorithm. I honestly recommend you republish your novel. I did the same thing with my novel, which had 150k views and 700 collections after exams were over because Alekzi told met to. Now, a 2 days after the re-upload, I've finally broken the 1000 barrier in the ps rank of the novel, and my views are already at 20k after 2 days. Honestly, I recommend you do the same thing. Onto story development, which I think is the best part of this novel. The story development is actually really good, with minor plot points here and there building up the main plotline. The pace is neither too fast or two slow, and it kept me engaged. I think this is high praise coming from me as I rarely read a FMC novel, because I just can't connect, but somehow, the pace of this novel kept me on the entire time. I don't know why really... Next is character design. Honestly, I don't like the ML that much. Whilst the FL is incredibly unique, with her cunning mind and hazy background, the ML is just the generic brooding alpha male that you will see in any romance novel. I am honestly disappointed in the ML and I just wished that you would have made him more unique. Some lost potential here that you could fix in a re-upload. Finally, there's the world background. Again, it's very generic right now, with no uniqueness to make it stand out from the rest. Being an author myself, I just wished that the author could have come up with a more unique world, imagining things that nobody else could have ever imagined, making the world of their story unique, as all of us are unique too. Well, that's all I have to say, it's a good novel with a lot of potential. Keep working hard author!
I'm already in love with the story. The characters are so well sketched and the small interaction between Charlie and Luciana is so heartwarming I thought I would melt. By the quality of the chapters, I can tell that the author have worked extremely hard and has done a great job. I highly recommend this book for a read.
An interesting storyline with an even more interesting characters. I fell in love with Luciana at the very first chapter. She is a sweet girl and an amazing best friend. The character development is good and the flow is fantastic. Another person I adore is our cute little prince, Charlie. He is such a darling. Overall the story is interesting so check it out
Did you see that cover? The male lead is a hottie, what else are you waiting for to delve into the story? The FL lead has a colorful tongue and she used the word, "booboo" how hilarious could she get? Well she invited trouble but knocking into Oscar, well, that's fate at work, don't you think so. I give this book a five-star ,although a few grammar errors. But then who doesn't make mistakes?! Dive into the story already! Good work ,my darling author priyal ❤️
The story flows nicely and the accident in the beginning revealed the essence of the characters. Very brilliantly crafted. The synopsis is engaging and the plot is very catchy. Keep up the nice work Author-san.
Loved it. Luciana and Evelynn are great characters and Oscar is awesome too. The writing quality is top notch and the plot is amazing so far, gonna keep reading and will recommend it to everyone!
Luciana is strong fl. I like her from the start. this is going to be another powerful book from our dear author this year. I love the interesting story line🤩
Luciana as a character is very interesting with her flamboyance and her quick wit. Oscar on the other hand, tsk. Overall, a very nice book and good development. Bravo
Omo don't I love this book already?!!! Dashing cover!! Lovely title and... *drim rolls* Breathtaking synopsis... Oh my Goshhh in as much as I love the ml, I am killing for the little children... Little son is adorable and knows how to get what he wants. Gosh a few chapters in and I want.... oh I feel like a baby trying to get a lollipop with her small hands. Author I love uuuuuu ur book is muahhh!! Come n read... Good
First off I got hooked by the cover🤩🤩 like that wasn't enough the title dragged me in without me realizing and I fell in deep after reading the synopsis ☺️❤️❤️ I want to take Oscar's heart now taming bad boys has always been fun!!🤭🤭 wish you all the best author!!
Okay, Catchy title... good synopsis. And most importantly, I want to steal the heart of your male lead. He is rich, handsome and dangerous, that's absolutely my type 😍😍😍
Oh my goodness! The first four chapters made me hooked on the story. Hope this story is going to be another hot romantic novel from my favorite author. What a combination, Cold-hearted and Arrogant ML and Feisty FL. Wanna read more chapters.....
Hello. I was wondering if anyone else had the problem were after chapter 88-89 the whole book repeated? Because that’ exactly what happened to me. I didn’t get 188 chapters. I got 88. Did anyone else get this? I was so enthralled by the book I wanted more I just didn’t get more lol 😂
I just started reading this book and I have to say it is one amazing book The first chapter alone is intriguing and makes me want to read more ☺️ Keep up the good work author🤗
I have read all the chapters and I can't wait for the next update when will it be updated [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I read all the chapters in one go... really really loved it.... and now I want to know more of their story and what will happen next ... hope to read more soon...
This Author is so good at what she does, I love her books and they are all amazing ,here is a recommendation to those that haven't had a taste of this book or this Authors books ,Please read this book and trust me you won't ever go wrong after reading this book .I hope you can enjoy the book as much as I did😉❤️🤗
Let me just say I love the way this author plays with words great job Author for this excellent work, keep it up Author 💯. the grammar is amazing the plot is great, I lo e this book what a masterpiece.
i really love this kind of novels and i feel sweet to read such sort of novels. it isn't easy to write such novel as it has higher of making a plot hole mistake....i appreciate your work
A great novel! I'm really impressed author. So, first is the writing quality. Honestly, it's a lot better than a lot of novels on this platform, but it's not the best either. There are typos here and there, but they don't detract from the flow of the story. My only advice would be to either proofread your work before publishing it or have a friend proofread it. Second is the stability of updates, which, from the author's explanation is because of finals. Of course, I understand this, because I was faced with the same problem, but still, not posting for 28 days makes it so that your novel is pushed far down in Webnovel's algorithm. I honestly recommend you republish your novel. I did the same thing with my novel, which had 150k views and 700 collections after exams were over because Alekzi told met to. Now, a 2 days after the re-upload, I've finally broken the 1000 barrier in the ps rank of the novel, and my views are already at 20k after 2 days. Honestly, I recommend you do the same thing. Onto story development, which I think is the best part of this novel. The story development is actually really good, with minor plot points here and there building up the main plotline. The pace is neither too fast or two slow, and it kept me engaged. I think this is high praise coming from me as I rarely read a FMC novel, because I just can't connect, but somehow, the pace of this novel kept me on the entire time. I don't know why really... Next is character design. Honestly, I don't like the ML that much. Whilst the FL is incredibly unique, with her cunning mind and hazy background, the ML is just the generic brooding alpha male that you will see in any romance novel. I am honestly disappointed in the ML and I just wished that you would have made him more unique. Some lost potential here that you could fix in a re-upload. Finally, there's the world background. Again, it's very generic right now, with no uniqueness to make it stand out from the rest. Being an author myself, I just wished that the author could have come up with a more unique world, imagining things that nobody else could have ever imagined, making the world of their story unique, as all of us are unique too. Well, that's all I have to say, it's a good novel with a lot of potential. Keep working hard author!
I'm already in love with the story. The characters are so well sketched and the small interaction between Charlie and Luciana is so heartwarming I thought I would melt. By the quality of the chapters, I can tell that the author have worked extremely hard and has done a great job. I highly recommend this book for a read.
An interesting storyline with an even more interesting characters. I fell in love with Luciana at the very first chapter. She is a sweet girl and an amazing best friend. The character development is good and the flow is fantastic. Another person I adore is our cute little prince, Charlie. He is such a darling. Overall the story is interesting so check it out
Did you see that cover? The male lead is a hottie, what else are you waiting for to delve into the story? The FL lead has a colorful tongue and she used the word, "booboo" how hilarious could she get? Well she invited trouble but knocking into Oscar, well, that's fate at work, don't you think so. I give this book a five-star ,although a few grammar errors. But then who doesn't make mistakes?! Dive into the story already! Good work ,my darling author priyal ❤️
The story flows nicely and the accident in the beginning revealed the essence of the characters. Very brilliantly crafted. The synopsis is engaging and the plot is very catchy. Keep up the nice work Author-san.
Loved it. Luciana and Evelynn are great characters and Oscar is awesome too. The writing quality is top notch and the plot is amazing so far, gonna keep reading and will recommend it to everyone!
Luciana is strong fl. I like her from the start. this is going to be another powerful book from our dear author this year. I love the interesting story line🤩
Luciana as a character is very interesting with her flamboyance and her quick wit. Oscar on the other hand, tsk. Overall, a very nice book and good development. Bravo
Omo don't I love this book already?!!! Dashing cover!! Lovely title and... *drim rolls* Breathtaking synopsis... Oh my Goshhh in as much as I love the ml, I am killing for the little children... Little son is adorable and knows how to get what he wants. Gosh a few chapters in and I want.... oh I feel like a baby trying to get a lollipop with her small hands. Author I love uuuuuu ur book is muahhh!! Come n read... Good
First off I got hooked by the cover🤩🤩 like that wasn't enough the title dragged me in without me realizing and I fell in deep after reading the synopsis ☺️❤️❤️ I want to take Oscar's heart now taming bad boys has always been fun!!🤭🤭 wish you all the best author!!
Okay, Catchy title... good synopsis. And most importantly, I want to steal the heart of your male lead. He is rich, handsome and dangerous, that's absolutely my type 😍😍😍
Oh my goodness! The first four chapters made me hooked on the story. Hope this story is going to be another hot romantic novel from my favorite author. What a combination, Cold-hearted and Arrogant ML and Feisty FL. Wanna read more chapters.....
Hello. I was wondering if anyone else had the problem were after chapter 88-89 the whole book repeated? Because that’ exactly what happened to me. I didn’t get 188 chapters. I got 88. Did anyone else get this? I was so enthralled by the book I wanted more I just didn’t get more lol 😂