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ShadowKatake

Review from Katake Kage Zenchi himself. This is a short guide of what to expect from this novel. Allen Walker (MC) might be powerful but if you have read my other novels, you will know that he is weak when compared to other Semi-Supreme Beings. The power level of all my novels is quite high and it might even be higher than dbz since one of my mcs (Lolicon Shota Cultivator With Soul Fetish or also known as Seref Zenchi), can destroy a universe with just a slash of his sword. For those who are wondering, yes, this novel's world background is inspired from Danganronpa. Of course, the <Supreme> are much more powerful than the <Ultimate> in Danganronpa. The <Supreme Hacker> can hack reality itself while the <Ultimate Hacker> in Danganronpa cannot. There are references in this novel and those are mostly from my favorite vocaloid musics cuz why not? For updating stability: I entered this in WSA so expect daily updates and if I don't update, then either the timer is set wrong or I am currently under tribulation or also known as an illness by you mortals. Character Design: what can I say other than most of my mcs have a mental illness or two? especially Allen who has an inferiority complex at the start of the novel. Is this a crossover? The answer is yes and no. Yes because you will encounter mcs from my other novel. No because the mcs are not from cannon except for Seref Zenchi. If you have any other questions, you can comment in this review and I will answer it. Also, not giving myself five stars since I believe that nothing is perfect. Only Katake Kage Zenchi, my main body, can be deemed as perfect.

2yr
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IamMountTai

CRITICAL REVIEW- Read 107 Chapters. It's well, an unique story. It feels very wish-fulfilment, power fantasy, somewhat fanfic-like and uh the author's self-insertion shows. However, that isn't a bad thing. I only point these out because the story has a great degree in this regard. There are many such stories out there, but usually its something we acquiesce and use to. In this story, it's pretty glaring and maybe too far? But having said that, I hope people are not discouraged from reading it. It's enjoyable and has a story going for it. From what I've read, it's more of a slice of life about quirky, extremely powerful cast wandering around the universe. I suppose there will be very serious stuff occurring later in the story, but the pacing of the story is somewhat slow so it will take a while for that point. As for the mc of the story, he is okay. I don't like him, but I don't dislike him either. He just got lucky and was able to obtain an extremely powerful ability which makes him SEEMINGLY omnipotent. As a result, I find it hard to see him struggle later along the line. Yes he still can be considered an 'Ant' in the grand scheme of things (Because powers scaling is at the universal/omniversal/multiversal.) But the mc is like a walking Gary Stu and sure he has some internal dilemma which is his inferority complex but that can only do so much when you already basically a god. Not to mention the execution of the story shows that you shouldn't expect much in that regard to show development through his weaknesses. The main characters in the story are fine and I do like them. Nothing much to say, but I do feel they could've been fleshed much better. It's comedy so don't any seriousness. IA, however, was done quite poorly imo since her creation I feel has a lot to do with the Mc's internal issues. The story has a tone of references to other works and memes and what not. The characters all appear to understand these things as well, which kinda questions the realism considering each of their backgrounds. But yeah, don't take it seriously. It's done in a way like Gintama which of course is amazing. It's just par for the course. Hence, it may kill your immersion during the early parts of the story, it would just become the norm that you would enjoy (that is if you understood them). The writing quality is surprisingly good in terms of punctuation and grammar. Hardly any mistakes. Better than most webnovel quality. There was also surprising amount of detail when it came to the explanation of the universal structure. The author definitely takes that part seriously after all he claims to be Katake Kage Zenchi himself. His universe or whatever, naturally when it came to this part its all sorted well. Quite good. On another side, there were also many things that made me go 'Hmm...' I wasn't sure how I felt about things. For instance, a few times seemingly reiterating that the mc wouldn't show mercy to woman and such. Another time was bringing up the point specifically about a Chinese protagonist to which the whole cast was very reluctant to meet. I can definitely see the author's frustration of him having read many works as he tends to point out flaws in order to show that his work isn't like this, though the latter was shown as a way to point fun of. The point I'm trying to get with is that the author I feel doesn't execute this well despite the slice of life element it has. The jokes or points he mentions kinda seem immaturely executed. As a result of all of the above, I find it kind of hard to say about my feelings of this novel. It was a unique experience that was for sure. I enjoyed it but there were many instances that made me raise my brow. It's not like other novels don't make me do that, but the degree in this one is quite much. It's still a good novel, which you may wish to take a shot with if you enjoy a comedic slice of life of a powerful cast as they travel the universe unbound. There is potential. That is why my score of rating this which is 4.4/5 is quite high despite me seemingly complaining. Though I'm pretty lenient with reviews. No shipping here! Since it doesn't seem like the author intends to have multiple love interests. Not that it's a bad thing with how the author is developing the story. Just my preference.

2yr
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TeraBaapHuMai

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11mth
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Aster_lilac

uhhh dear author is this drop or in hiatus???

1yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Aster_lilac

i like this for me the story is good 10/5 star but the problem is the last update of this is 2 months ago is it drop or only in hiatus?

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Ireallylikereading

i dont know what to say, i wasnt actually planning to read the novel i just wanted to know the specifics of this thing called Limited free, but after clicking at the chapters by accident it showed that the limited 24 free unlock had started so now i dont know if i should read or not, truth is dont actually want to read the novel i just thought that it would be a waste not to start reading but i also thought that it might not be worth reading and just make me annoyed, in short can someone tell me if the novel is good or not cause i honestly dont trust these people who only give 4 and above stars in anything even if its complete trash, whats worse is they dont even give believable reasons on why it deserves 4 stars they just say it does so i cant tell if this novel is actually worth it. im sorry if i offended anyone i just really dont wanna waste my time and emotions on a work i cant enjoy

1yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Heattcliff48

just read bro its amazing! trust me bro!

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Zaztra_Vandesh

It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
JesusMan

nice book . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Sojuuuus

Definitely tried to read it sounded like it could be interesting but they just said supreme entirely too much

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
SleepingOuroboros

I don't need to explain, Just read it and find out for yourself- but this wouldn't be a review if I just ended it there. I'm the op genre type of guy, and as you all know people who only like to read about op Mcs are picky and like quick n stable plots. My boy Allen might not be the most op, but he is chill and makes for a fun character to read about. The way the ability and skills are made leaves a lot of room for the reader to think about and enjoy. There have been multiple times I stopped reading mid-paragraph to think about the combinations and possibilities. While not what I thought of, it left nothing lacking and I fully am enjoying the creativity and m-, Our favorite Shot- family of protagonist in this writing. :)

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2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Spelloyal

The writing quality is good, but the story itself is bad. The MC is a true Gary Stu and his power is to have all the powers at the maximum level, he is just not the strongest of the multipurpose because his level is currently just destroying planets. The story in general is boring, it looks like a generic OP MC fanfic chat group, the kind with literally nothing special, only because it's not a fanfic this story gets even worse oois we don't have interesting characters from other fandons appearing. If this was the first OP mc story I've read I might end up liking it, but as this is just one mks and without anything special it ends up becoming a boring read for those who have read others of the genre.

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Ruler_of_Endless

It's a nice book. An author recommended this to me. I see the potential in your book, sir. I like the characters already, and the story development is top-notch. I'm rooting for you. Good work!

2yr
ดู 4 การตอบกลับ
strange_skeleton

interesting combining your other books into this one [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Dusilindironlordor

I have read to the last chapter, it is quite interesting, but there is a lot to grow, I just wish you good luck on this path, with love from me, and everything else

2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Lelantos_014

Let me give this an honest review, the author have fallen into worst kind of traps which is the diversity of abilities that confuses us as readers and makes the story quite boring. for example: the MC has a problem using his [Supreme Solving Problem] & [Supreme Luck] he able to avoid it. It makes the story bland and not only that it also makes the MC's personality quite distorted (tsundere, playboy ...etc) because of his systems.

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2yr
ดู 8 การตอบกลับ
ViolettAbyss

This Novel offers a new unique approach to the group chat plot. Writing quality is very good without any noticable grammar mistakes which presents itself well with the stable chapter updates. All of the Characters are fleshed out with different kind of personalities. They share similar goals aligning them all to together making this novel not only centred around the MC. The World Background is yet to be uncoverd in later chapters but so far it's looking good. 9/10

2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
LORDOFDESTRUCTION

I am impressed because almost all of your novel characters are here.........................................................................

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2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Six_faced_

To me this is one interesting novel as tbh it’s really rare to see a chat group novel not being a fanfic. Hopefully this doesn’t get dropped.

2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Unsightly

Now this book is awesome for starterrs , I'm surprised that I hadn't seen this before but my homepage of webnovel, It provides a great new concept of People having talents and 1 boy was lucky enough to have Talent that encompassed them all, and on top of that he got admin rights in a chat group What's best about this story is the multi verses the author presents are completely original (or it could be something I haven't seen pls tell me in a reply) ANYWAYS this book is really nice and I love it. Please like so new readers can see this and read the book too :D

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2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
GreedyNoble

life is like a rock but more importantly than that is. Why lemons? Why is water wet? but its not that it is when will we get a purely CGI Snow White, but its not that either the real question is the amount of likes on this comment

2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
DMC_MAX

After reading this to the third- ahem! Chapter, I am finally ready to release an honest review. First of all, the book premise is somewhat confusing to me... There wasn't any clear introduction of the background expect from the story is in a world where people can become <Supreme> and own legendary abilities. Just starting from the part where the mc wants to kill himself didn't really help me relate to him. Anyways, it's a good start when compared to others. ^_^ Pacing is alright, not too fast nor too slow, but I think the character development is a bit rushed. He just got all his abilities at once, and I wasn't able to feel with the mc as he grows from weak sidekick of his brother to OP big shot of the world! For character design, as far as I know there's only one character apart from Chat Group members that I know... but, at least the character isn't some trashy dumb idiot at the beginning. The author's updates are stable, great for a new book with a lot of potential. :^) Anyways, it's a gem all in all and I hope the author gets better and better with time. Peace, as always.

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
S_Takeshi

[Chapter 15 review] everything else: 4-5 stars Story Development: 3 stars I feel that the "hook" at the start of the story isn't strong enough to 'excite' me for the rest of the story. I get that he was pressured to his death but only 3-4 paragraphs were describing his past. Probably add in a small scenario of dialogue of people belittling the protagonist and we will be good. After 15 chapters, I don't feel a build-up of "hype". It feels very bland and mostly is just system crafting, etc. Maybe add in a bit more action or conflicts. Something commendable is your creativity in building a world different from the very generic "awakened" story. But I am still confused about the "antagonist" of the story. Is there something that threatens your protagonist's world? etc. The characters are not bland, which is a good thing, and they add to the comedy aspect of the story. (I don't like comedy, so my review here might be slightly biased. Overall, good development in the world and characters. It's just the lack of hype.

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
The_Novel_Man

Ladies and Gentlemen. this novel is a unique piece of art, the writting quality is good, updating quantity is also good. but what it's best at is it's extra ordinary content, a system existed from merging of rest of systems. Don't drop it without reader it.

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Darkswan

I have only read the first few chapters so let's start with the writing quality here, it is good I would give it 4/5 the story could use a little editing, sometimes it's a little fast-paced then slows down but that's just according to me. The mc of the story is likable I don't see much of a problem with him, there are no major problems with this book, it's definitely interesting. The story development is good along with the character design. Overall a good book i would recommend it for those people looking for something similar to Cultivation chat group.

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Lili101
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Good book. Not my favorite, but good. Was interesting recommendation by a friend. can't wait for more chapters, not sure if the author has dropped this or he has just started updating this book. can't even vote power stones, don't know what's wrong.

2yr
ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
Xizzem

Writing Quality: While reading the novel, I found little to no grammar mistakes at all. The writing style is original and well done. Story development: The story shoots off from chapter one throwing one right into the action. It's a 5/5 Update stability: It is stable. Daily updates. World background: it is unique and intriguing as it is a multi-universe world that consists of different characters from various parts of the universe. Overall: It isn't my cup of tea but is a great read. I highly recommend this book to readers who enjoy system novels. It is neatly done and worth a read.

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
SighingClouds

Let me do the honor of being the first few homans to review this book. Writing Quality: Top-notch among the original novels I've read. Story Development: Quite good! It's interesting. From low to high, and it rolls. Character Design: Very interesting! Especially the members of the chat group. What I liked the most is the MC's cheat, it's so self-fulliling. I'm worried of one thing though, the MC is kinda OP, I wonder how the author will control it to bring the best entertainment. Updating Stability: It's good and should be good! World Background: I appreciate the author's creativity in this book. The world he designed is very interesting. Among the hundreds of novels I've read, this one has a unique world background.

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Rita_Chioma_9038

Just a few chapters and still interesting. writing Quality... Very good. mistakes are limited and almost absent which is an enormous push to read further Story development... I love the pace and how intriguing the beginning was. Character Design... The ML is very relatable and reminded me a lot of someone who scorned herself a lot in real life. I love the character building esp for Allen. updating stability... top notch. quick updates and I love it. World background... I love this one as well. world background isn't really something that turns me off from a book. You've done an amazing job so far, keep it up.

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
ShadowKatake

Review from Katake Kage Zenchi himself. This is a short guide of what to expect from this novel. Allen Walker (MC) might be powerful but if you have read my other novels, you will know that he is weak when compared to other Semi-Supreme Beings. The power level of all my novels is quite high and it might even be higher than dbz since one of my mcs (Lolicon Shota Cultivator With Soul Fetish or also known as Seref Zenchi), can destroy a universe with just a slash of his sword. For those who are wondering, yes, this novel's world background is inspired from Danganronpa. Of course, the <Supreme> are much more powerful than the <Ultimate> in Danganronpa. The <Supreme Hacker> can hack reality itself while the <Ultimate Hacker> in Danganronpa cannot. There are references in this novel and those are mostly from my favorite vocaloid musics cuz why not? For updating stability: I entered this in WSA so expect daily updates and if I don't update, then either the timer is set wrong or I am currently under tribulation or also known as an illness by you mortals. Character Design: what can I say other than most of my mcs have a mental illness or two? especially Allen who has an inferiority complex at the start of the novel. Is this a crossover? The answer is yes and no. Yes because you will encounter mcs from my other novel. No because the mcs are not from cannon except for Seref Zenchi. If you have any other questions, you can comment in this review and I will answer it. Also, not giving myself five stars since I believe that nothing is perfect. Only Katake Kage Zenchi, my main body, can be deemed as perfect.

2yr
ดู 37 การตอบกลับ
IamMountTai

CRITICAL REVIEW- Read 107 Chapters. It's well, an unique story. It feels very wish-fulfilment, power fantasy, somewhat fanfic-like and uh the author's self-insertion shows. However, that isn't a bad thing. I only point these out because the story has a great degree in this regard. There are many such stories out there, but usually its something we acquiesce and use to. In this story, it's pretty glaring and maybe too far? But having said that, I hope people are not discouraged from reading it. It's enjoyable and has a story going for it. From what I've read, it's more of a slice of life about quirky, extremely powerful cast wandering around the universe. I suppose there will be very serious stuff occurring later in the story, but the pacing of the story is somewhat slow so it will take a while for that point. As for the mc of the story, he is okay. I don't like him, but I don't dislike him either. He just got lucky and was able to obtain an extremely powerful ability which makes him SEEMINGLY omnipotent. As a result, I find it hard to see him struggle later along the line. Yes he still can be considered an 'Ant' in the grand scheme of things (Because powers scaling is at the universal/omniversal/multiversal.) But the mc is like a walking Gary Stu and sure he has some internal dilemma which is his inferority complex but that can only do so much when you already basically a god. Not to mention the execution of the story shows that you shouldn't expect much in that regard to show development through his weaknesses. The main characters in the story are fine and I do like them. Nothing much to say, but I do feel they could've been fleshed much better. It's comedy so don't any seriousness. IA, however, was done quite poorly imo since her creation I feel has a lot to do with the Mc's internal issues. The story has a tone of references to other works and memes and what not. The characters all appear to understand these things as well, which kinda questions the realism considering each of their backgrounds. But yeah, don't take it seriously. It's done in a way like Gintama which of course is amazing. It's just par for the course. Hence, it may kill your immersion during the early parts of the story, it would just become the norm that you would enjoy (that is if you understood them). The writing quality is surprisingly good in terms of punctuation and grammar. Hardly any mistakes. Better than most webnovel quality. There was also surprising amount of detail when it came to the explanation of the universal structure. The author definitely takes that part seriously after all he claims to be Katake Kage Zenchi himself. His universe or whatever, naturally when it came to this part its all sorted well. Quite good. On another side, there were also many things that made me go 'Hmm...' I wasn't sure how I felt about things. For instance, a few times seemingly reiterating that the mc wouldn't show mercy to woman and such. Another time was bringing up the point specifically about a Chinese protagonist to which the whole cast was very reluctant to meet. I can definitely see the author's frustration of him having read many works as he tends to point out flaws in order to show that his work isn't like this, though the latter was shown as a way to point fun of. The point I'm trying to get with is that the author I feel doesn't execute this well despite the slice of life element it has. The jokes or points he mentions kinda seem immaturely executed. As a result of all of the above, I find it kind of hard to say about my feelings of this novel. It was a unique experience that was for sure. I enjoyed it but there were many instances that made me raise my brow. It's not like other novels don't make me do that, but the degree in this one is quite much. It's still a good novel, which you may wish to take a shot with if you enjoy a comedic slice of life of a powerful cast as they travel the universe unbound. There is potential. That is why my score of rating this which is 4.4/5 is quite high despite me seemingly complaining. Though I'm pretty lenient with reviews. No shipping here! Since it doesn't seem like the author intends to have multiple love interests. Not that it's a bad thing with how the author is developing the story. Just my preference.

2yr
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TeraBaapHuMai

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11mth
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Aster_lilac

uhhh dear author is this drop or in hiatus???

1yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Aster_lilac

i like this for me the story is good 10/5 star but the problem is the last update of this is 2 months ago is it drop or only in hiatus?

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Ireallylikereading

i dont know what to say, i wasnt actually planning to read the novel i just wanted to know the specifics of this thing called Limited free, but after clicking at the chapters by accident it showed that the limited 24 free unlock had started so now i dont know if i should read or not, truth is dont actually want to read the novel i just thought that it would be a waste not to start reading but i also thought that it might not be worth reading and just make me annoyed, in short can someone tell me if the novel is good or not cause i honestly dont trust these people who only give 4 and above stars in anything even if its complete trash, whats worse is they dont even give believable reasons on why it deserves 4 stars they just say it does so i cant tell if this novel is actually worth it. im sorry if i offended anyone i just really dont wanna waste my time and emotions on a work i cant enjoy

1yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Heattcliff48

just read bro its amazing! trust me bro!

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Zaztra_Vandesh

It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
JesusMan

nice book . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Sojuuuus

Definitely tried to read it sounded like it could be interesting but they just said supreme entirely too much

2yr
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SleepingOuroboros

I don't need to explain, Just read it and find out for yourself- but this wouldn't be a review if I just ended it there. I'm the op genre type of guy, and as you all know people who only like to read about op Mcs are picky and like quick n stable plots. My boy Allen might not be the most op, but he is chill and makes for a fun character to read about. The way the ability and skills are made leaves a lot of room for the reader to think about and enjoy. There have been multiple times I stopped reading mid-paragraph to think about the combinations and possibilities. While not what I thought of, it left nothing lacking and I fully am enjoying the creativity and m-, Our favorite Shot- family of protagonist in this writing. :)

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2yr
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Spelloyal

The writing quality is good, but the story itself is bad. The MC is a true Gary Stu and his power is to have all the powers at the maximum level, he is just not the strongest of the multipurpose because his level is currently just destroying planets. The story in general is boring, it looks like a generic OP MC fanfic chat group, the kind with literally nothing special, only because it's not a fanfic this story gets even worse oois we don't have interesting characters from other fandons appearing. If this was the first OP mc story I've read I might end up liking it, but as this is just one mks and without anything special it ends up becoming a boring read for those who have read others of the genre.

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Ruler_of_Endless

It's a nice book. An author recommended this to me. I see the potential in your book, sir. I like the characters already, and the story development is top-notch. I'm rooting for you. Good work!

2yr
ดู 4 การตอบกลับ
strange_skeleton

interesting combining your other books into this one [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Dusilindironlordor

I have read to the last chapter, it is quite interesting, but there is a lot to grow, I just wish you good luck on this path, with love from me, and everything else

2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Lelantos_014

Let me give this an honest review, the author have fallen into worst kind of traps which is the diversity of abilities that confuses us as readers and makes the story quite boring. for example: the MC has a problem using his [Supreme Solving Problem] & [Supreme Luck] he able to avoid it. It makes the story bland and not only that it also makes the MC's personality quite distorted (tsundere, playboy ...etc) because of his systems.

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2yr
ดู 8 การตอบกลับ
ViolettAbyss

This Novel offers a new unique approach to the group chat plot. Writing quality is very good without any noticable grammar mistakes which presents itself well with the stable chapter updates. All of the Characters are fleshed out with different kind of personalities. They share similar goals aligning them all to together making this novel not only centred around the MC. The World Background is yet to be uncoverd in later chapters but so far it's looking good. 9/10

2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
LORDOFDESTRUCTION

I am impressed because almost all of your novel characters are here.........................................................................

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2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Six_faced_

To me this is one interesting novel as tbh it’s really rare to see a chat group novel not being a fanfic. Hopefully this doesn’t get dropped.

2yr
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Unsightly

Now this book is awesome for starterrs , I'm surprised that I hadn't seen this before but my homepage of webnovel, It provides a great new concept of People having talents and 1 boy was lucky enough to have Talent that encompassed them all, and on top of that he got admin rights in a chat group What's best about this story is the multi verses the author presents are completely original (or it could be something I haven't seen pls tell me in a reply) ANYWAYS this book is really nice and I love it. Please like so new readers can see this and read the book too :D

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GreedyNoble

life is like a rock but more importantly than that is. Why lemons? Why is water wet? but its not that it is when will we get a purely CGI Snow White, but its not that either the real question is the amount of likes on this comment

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DMC_MAX

After reading this to the third- ahem! Chapter, I am finally ready to release an honest review. First of all, the book premise is somewhat confusing to me... There wasn't any clear introduction of the background expect from the story is in a world where people can become <Supreme> and own legendary abilities. Just starting from the part where the mc wants to kill himself didn't really help me relate to him. Anyways, it's a good start when compared to others. ^_^ Pacing is alright, not too fast nor too slow, but I think the character development is a bit rushed. He just got all his abilities at once, and I wasn't able to feel with the mc as he grows from weak sidekick of his brother to OP big shot of the world! For character design, as far as I know there's only one character apart from Chat Group members that I know... but, at least the character isn't some trashy dumb idiot at the beginning. The author's updates are stable, great for a new book with a lot of potential. :^) Anyways, it's a gem all in all and I hope the author gets better and better with time. Peace, as always.

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S_Takeshi

[Chapter 15 review] everything else: 4-5 stars Story Development: 3 stars I feel that the "hook" at the start of the story isn't strong enough to 'excite' me for the rest of the story. I get that he was pressured to his death but only 3-4 paragraphs were describing his past. Probably add in a small scenario of dialogue of people belittling the protagonist and we will be good. After 15 chapters, I don't feel a build-up of "hype". It feels very bland and mostly is just system crafting, etc. Maybe add in a bit more action or conflicts. Something commendable is your creativity in building a world different from the very generic "awakened" story. But I am still confused about the "antagonist" of the story. Is there something that threatens your protagonist's world? etc. The characters are not bland, which is a good thing, and they add to the comedy aspect of the story. (I don't like comedy, so my review here might be slightly biased. Overall, good development in the world and characters. It's just the lack of hype.

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The_Novel_Man

Ladies and Gentlemen. this novel is a unique piece of art, the writting quality is good, updating quantity is also good. but what it's best at is it's extra ordinary content, a system existed from merging of rest of systems. Don't drop it without reader it.

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Darkswan

I have only read the first few chapters so let's start with the writing quality here, it is good I would give it 4/5 the story could use a little editing, sometimes it's a little fast-paced then slows down but that's just according to me. The mc of the story is likable I don't see much of a problem with him, there are no major problems with this book, it's definitely interesting. The story development is good along with the character design. Overall a good book i would recommend it for those people looking for something similar to Cultivation chat group.

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Lili101
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Good book. Not my favorite, but good. Was interesting recommendation by a friend. can't wait for more chapters, not sure if the author has dropped this or he has just started updating this book. can't even vote power stones, don't know what's wrong.

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Xizzem

Writing Quality: While reading the novel, I found little to no grammar mistakes at all. The writing style is original and well done. Story development: The story shoots off from chapter one throwing one right into the action. It's a 5/5 Update stability: It is stable. Daily updates. World background: it is unique and intriguing as it is a multi-universe world that consists of different characters from various parts of the universe. Overall: It isn't my cup of tea but is a great read. I highly recommend this book to readers who enjoy system novels. It is neatly done and worth a read.

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SighingClouds

Let me do the honor of being the first few homans to review this book. Writing Quality: Top-notch among the original novels I've read. Story Development: Quite good! It's interesting. From low to high, and it rolls. Character Design: Very interesting! Especially the members of the chat group. What I liked the most is the MC's cheat, it's so self-fulliling. I'm worried of one thing though, the MC is kinda OP, I wonder how the author will control it to bring the best entertainment. Updating Stability: It's good and should be good! World Background: I appreciate the author's creativity in this book. The world he designed is very interesting. Among the hundreds of novels I've read, this one has a unique world background.

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Rita_Chioma_9038

Just a few chapters and still interesting. writing Quality... Very good. mistakes are limited and almost absent which is an enormous push to read further Story development... I love the pace and how intriguing the beginning was. Character Design... The ML is very relatable and reminded me a lot of someone who scorned herself a lot in real life. I love the character building esp for Allen. updating stability... top notch. quick updates and I love it. World background... I love this one as well. world background isn't really something that turns me off from a book. You've done an amazing job so far, keep it up.

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