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- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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Good storytelling and good plot the only thing that makes me sad is theres only few chapters ......................................
the ultimate young master is born with body guards that have the power to destroy multiverse. Let see how they raise the saiyan emperor find out next on dragon ball super
Please tell me your going to make the mc the strongest of the erased gods that would be really cool to see and also good chapter i like the story so far keep it up.
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Read all chapters very disappointed wished you did it differently but its good just not my type of story so good bye and Farwell and hope you have a good journey with this fan-fic.
Good storytelling and good plot the only thing that makes me sad is theres only few chapters ......................................
the ultimate young master is born with body guards that have the power to destroy multiverse. Let see how they raise the saiyan emperor find out next on dragon ball super
Please tell me your going to make the mc the strongest of the erased gods that would be really cool to see and also good chapter i like the story so far keep it up.
I Love It So Far Please Don't Drop[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Read all chapters very disappointed wished you did it differently but its good just not my type of story so good bye and Farwell and hope you have a good journey with this fan-fic.