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The only drawback is that there are no more chapters so far everything is smooth. When I read my heart it feels fresh I wish my life was that easy xD
Okay here is my review . . . Wrting quality is okay not perfect has not too many flaws and very readable. As for Story Development... Not too many chapters as of now but I'm liking it's development for now for Character Design now is not your best MC and is actually laid back and down to earth Updating is Fast maybe 2 chapters every other day and for the World Background is not your typical Info dump every action the MC takes over all VERY GOOD definitely will continue reading and waiting for new chapters. .
The story is pretty good and I would love to continue it if the grammar hadn't stopped BUGGING ME! I have a bit of OCD so sorry but the story's nice though. I'm dropping it still.
The only drawback is that there are no more chapters so far everything is smooth. When I read my heart it feels fresh I wish my life was that easy xD
Okay here is my review . . . Wrting quality is okay not perfect has not too many flaws and very readable. As for Story Development... Not too many chapters as of now but I'm liking it's development for now for Character Design now is not your best MC and is actually laid back and down to earth Updating is Fast maybe 2 chapters every other day and for the World Background is not your typical Info dump every action the MC takes over all VERY GOOD definitely will continue reading and waiting for new chapters. .
The story is pretty good and I would love to continue it if the grammar hadn't stopped BUGGING ME! I have a bit of OCD so sorry but the story's nice though. I'm dropping it still.