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At first maybe the MC is a naive but its actually a good novel and I like the concept of god of highschool to be in dxd ..............................
it's bad. Your grammar is a mess. your use of stat points is broken. you say he had 800 but you added in 1900. there's no character building just the same poor me I need to repent and do good. and the worst part is the story is dragging nothing is really getting done for the sole fact that you want people to sub your Pat and writing total waste chapter so you can get money.
straight trash in a book form. grammar is awful and the story just hops all over the place. no character growth or background. don't waste your time.
Interesting premise but badly executed. The translation is horrible even for a machine. The characters are flat and not well developed even after 40 chapters.
i m sure the author is a 13 yr old high on hormones and caffeine and wrote this while smoking weed and jerking off cuz this is a abomination mate
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Me gusta mucho el fanfic, espero que sigas actualizando y mejorando, saludos --------------------------------------------------------------
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The MC is very naive, it doesn't seem like he's done bad things in his past life and that already damages the foundation of the fic because the authors are like that, they start well but most start to put stupid things that damage the fic in the tags, he says system but he system where is it?
~Ahem you got me author first by dxd pic on cover now...... ...Kaede .....Lexia.....Celial.....Shuri ...'cough' Akeno 'cough' no I'm talking about mature version (no pedo) I have high hopes for you author in this novel (waiting for segs 'cough')~
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i want to continue but i can't. I 'm losing my brain 🧠 cells reading this fic. .................................................................
I like it good keep up the good work don't let what others comment affect you [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
Author writes a "cruel" past for the main character, then when the story begins, everything loses meaning. The main character acts, thinks and talks like a 9-year-old brat with a stupid hero complex. MC is beta, simp, cuckold man.
Good,good,good,good,good,good,good,Good,good,good,good,good,good,good,Good,good,good,good,good,good,good,Good,good,good,good,good,good,good,Good,good,good,good,good,good,good,Good,good,good,good,good,good,good,Good,good,good,good,good,good,good,Good,good,good,good,good,good,good,
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main character lies for no reason. . ..... ... . ..... .... ..... ..... .... ...... ........... .. ... ..... . ..... .. .... ..... ... ....
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Just like another tier 3 harem fics, the plot is cliche and the mc development is so stupid. You make his past is yakuza but you write it like 16 yo boy with hero syndrome, his alignment should be neutral, why you make him like beta mc, it should be black-white mc...
Too much grammatical errors, plot barely makes sense, mc character is inconsistent. Ignore the bot reviews. If you want to read something good then do not waste your time here.
Just the first four chapters was amazing I expect a lot of good things to come from this book. Also I think you should focus on more of uploading more chapters per day if you’re able to do it that is.
at the start its good but later grammar gets worse and plot starts to lose its meaning
Not Good . . . . . . . .................. Very bad ........................ 😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶🤢☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😓😓😓😓😓
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ At first maybe the MC is a naive but its actually a good novel and I like the concept of god of highschool to be in dxd ..............................
it's bad. Your grammar is a mess. your use of stat points is broken. you say he had 800 but you added in 1900. there's no character building just the same poor me I need to repent and do good. and the worst part is the story is dragging nothing is really getting done for the sole fact that you want people to sub your Pat and writing total waste chapter so you can get money.
straight trash in a book form. grammar is awful and the story just hops all over the place. no character growth or background. don't waste your time.
Interesting premise but badly executed. The translation is horrible even for a machine. The characters are flat and not well developed even after 40 chapters.
i m sure the author is a 13 yr old high on hormones and caffeine and wrote this while smoking weed and jerking off cuz this is a abomination mate
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Anti spam [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Me gusta mucho el fanfic, espero que sigas actualizando y mejorando, saludos --------------------------------------------------------------
betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC betaMC
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ The MC is very naive, it doesn't seem like he's done bad things in his past life and that already damages the foundation of the fic because the authors are like that, they start well but most start to put stupid things that damage the fic in the tags, he says system but he system where is it?
~Ahem you got me author first by dxd pic on cover now...... ...Kaede .....Lexia.....Celial.....Shuri ...'cough' Akeno 'cough' no I'm talking about mature version (no pedo) I have high hopes for you author in this novel (waiting for segs 'cough')~
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i want to continue but i can't. I 'm losing my brain 🧠 cells reading this fic. .................................................................
I like it good keep up the good work don't let what others comment affect you [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
Author writes a "cruel" past for the main character, then when the story begins, everything loses meaning. The main character acts, thinks and talks like a 9-year-old brat with a stupid hero complex. MC is beta, simp, cuckold man.
Good,good,good,good,good,good,good,Good,good,good,good,good,good,good,Good,good,good,good,good,good,good,Good,good,good,good,good,good,good,Good,good,good,good,good,good,good,Good,good,good,good,good,good,good,Good,good,good,good,good,good,good,Good,good,good,good,good,good,good,
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main character lies for no reason. . ..... ... . ..... .... ..... ..... .... ...... ........... .. ... ..... . ..... .. .... ..... ... ....
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Just like another tier 3 harem fics, the plot is cliche and the mc development is so stupid. You make his past is yakuza but you write it like 16 yo boy with hero syndrome, his alignment should be neutral, why you make him like beta mc, it should be black-white mc...
Too much grammatical errors, plot barely makes sense, mc character is inconsistent. Ignore the bot reviews. If you want to read something good then do not waste your time here.
Just the first four chapters was amazing I expect a lot of good things to come from this book. Also I think you should focus on more of uploading more chapters per day if you’re able to do it that is.
at the start its good but later grammar gets worse and plot starts to lose its meaning