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I enjoyed it and I don't know why people are complaining; this novel is better than most. The only complaint I have is that the main character is naive.
Good start while there are some details that needs to be ignored for a better immersion everything else is quite right. That is until mid 40's, not really fan of harem but since it has a good start i did give it a try. But then again until chapter mid 40's, everything snowballed into something cannot be defined. Still good job for the work though, i really like the idea of being able to jump back and forth into his previous world. Just for my suggestion, please limit the chickens. I guess 5 would do but if you can lower to 1 heroine, much better.
It's a great story The only tinglado i didn't like is that the imagen of the Estarossa could plis if you leave Webnovel go to... Wattpad or fanfiction
I had high expectations for this novel, especially because of the other books from this author. But the idea that a 3 years old child acting, speaking, and interacting with people as an adult and nobody questioned it, is a massive turn off. At one point he sent a signal for help because people attacked them, and he didn’t want to use his power so that he doesn’t kill any innocent people because he can’t control it well. Next second he blast someone with CRUEL SUN which is an overkill kinda attack, next to a girl and nothing happens to her. Another point is the way people interact with gods in danmachi as if they are coworkers, there are not much respect. And also it seems like the gods here are stupid. There are alot more comlaints but I’m going to stop here. Sorry for the rant, but i was really excited to read the story. Oh well, i’m still at the beginning, lets what happens later.
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It reminded me of that fanfic where even at chapter 350 the main character was still a child of 6 years old, like at the beginning. Absolutely rubbish idea to write from the point of view of a child with adult thinking. I wonder what drives the minds of such authors? Why make the main character a child, with adult thinking, this is not Family Guy dude.
A great story, in which it shows us how the various realities are connected and these interact and are affected by others. It is also important to see how each story specifically affects the state of the world in which they are merged. Since these can lead to a disaster or an advance in the development of society and the future history of that reality. The characters are something that will also be affected, such as the Fairy Tail dragon slayers that have not yet appeared, since they have not made an appearance so far and that affects the flow of time and the reality of how it should have been.
(Google translator) here we have a high level story 🍷🗿 (Google translator) here we have a high level story 🍷🗿 (Google translator) here we have a high level story 🍷🗿
it's an interesting story expect for the fact that the mc pluck females left and right like pokemon........Good work author but pls lessen up on the female plucking ...... 👍
I can't say I liked it, but at least it entertained me. It's a generic Wish Fulfillment with a lot of characters from different multiverses, those who like stories like that might like it. Personally, I hate the Gender Bender and I didn't really like the development of the story. But objectively speaking, it could be said that it is good.
It's just one those cliche harem gathering novels, guy travels to different worlds, gathers whatever females he likes. It's like a traveling circus of different breeds of animals, It decently written, not too many errors at all. but it has no substance, nothing new to appeal to, every girl falls for the mc, even a few after a moment of meeting each other are already flirting for no reason. It is after all a wish fulfilment story, of course it will be nonsensical at times, but the way it is done is not really satisfying to read. He never mentions to his zoo of women, that he has others in different worlds, the constant lying, showing off whenever possible has its turn offs. It becomes harder to read the more you read.
It's meh. But alot of cliché, The Mc doesn't use his head in a fight, I know he is op but killing a weak enemy with a city destroying attack is d*mb. And let's not forget he is acting like a grown man at 3 years old but the people around him don't find it weird (He literally went out hunting animals at 3 years and no one questioned it). I don't think the author was thinking when he wrote this.
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This is a basic power fantasy / wish fulfillment story. I probably would have enjoyed this story if the main character wasn't a three year old who acted like an adult. It would have been better if the MC was inserted when Grandpa left and the body he was put in acted how the MC would have acted if he was reincarnated without memories but with his personality so nobody would notice any changes. Honestly one of my biggest hang ups for stories are the childhood arcs, most fanfic writers don't make them well. People seem to forget children are children not mini-adults. Also a head injury on a three year old that changes their personality should be a bigger deal then " oh you became more mature because of that fall ". In a world like Danmachi a swift personality change should be a huge cause for concern.
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author , can i ask how many Harem members in the end this fic please? 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.
the incongruity of his age to his actions and specially the reactions of the people around him is what held this fic back for me. people might think it's a minor thing but when it doesn't affect perceptions of the characters when it's supposed to be, then there's something wrong with it. I read your previous fics and relatively enjoyed it, but somehow because of that detail it affects everything in the story...
So far it's going to be another banger but it has a few problems with timeline in the first world(could say because it's a au that's why) and the second problem is Mc's age doesn't makes sense if he is around the same age as lily in pre time skip he should between 7 to 10.
favorite fanfic author, another awesome story in the making. Keep it up. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I like how the story is going here you have my support for the future And I like that you have added a little bit of the personality of escanor to the mc really noticed that escanor vs galand when he fought with the 7 demons until he became or stone hahaha hahaha And clark as a new god I also like I hope you continue to upload it because your stories are very good master
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Are you gonna be continuing Clark story becuase I would really like to read it ...................................................................
I thought it was good because of the touching prologue at the start, but then the MC gets killed by his sister cliched style followed by him meeting Superman God. So I read the rest and recognized a pattern. You can check the author's works, he has good updating stability but his stories lack substance, full of plot holes, changing personality of the MC, cliche scenarios, etc. I thought he would improve from his previous works but it's all the same. It's a good wishfullfilment but that's it overall. The MC basically bros with Superman God but is actually working for him, anyways it's a wishfullfilment in a predictable storyline that the author slightly altered by adding extra tidbits like turning the OG main character a girl. (Bell from Danmachi to Bella) It follows an overpowered MC that can hunt at 3 years old, talk perfectly and none of the world's inhabitants are the wiser to point it out. Not my cup of tea, but good for wasting time if you turn off your brains.
I like the story ......................................................................................................................................
Ya es la segunda historia seguida de tus historias que leo, la primera fue la de HOTD. Solo puedo decir que es perfecta, no hay nada que pueda criticar ya sea del MC, el desarrollo de la historia, el harem, el trasfondo mundial, etc. Me encantó como incluiste los otros mundos en el crossover sin afectar mucho su mundo actual, también el rol que el MC tomó en los mundos en los que estuvo. Una muy buena historia. La única razón por la que no leo la historia de Clark es que no soy fanático de DC pero seguro es igual de increíble que estas 2 historias.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I enjoyed it and I don't know why people are complaining; this novel is better than most. The only complaint I have is that the main character is naive.
Good start while there are some details that needs to be ignored for a better immersion everything else is quite right. That is until mid 40's, not really fan of harem but since it has a good start i did give it a try. But then again until chapter mid 40's, everything snowballed into something cannot be defined. Still good job for the work though, i really like the idea of being able to jump back and forth into his previous world. Just for my suggestion, please limit the chickens. I guess 5 would do but if you can lower to 1 heroine, much better.
It's a great story The only tinglado i didn't like is that the imagen of the Estarossa could plis if you leave Webnovel go to... Wattpad or fanfiction
I had high expectations for this novel, especially because of the other books from this author. But the idea that a 3 years old child acting, speaking, and interacting with people as an adult and nobody questioned it, is a massive turn off. At one point he sent a signal for help because people attacked them, and he didn’t want to use his power so that he doesn’t kill any innocent people because he can’t control it well. Next second he blast someone with CRUEL SUN which is an overkill kinda attack, next to a girl and nothing happens to her. Another point is the way people interact with gods in danmachi as if they are coworkers, there are not much respect. And also it seems like the gods here are stupid. There are alot more comlaints but I’m going to stop here. Sorry for the rant, but i was really excited to read the story. Oh well, i’m still at the beginning, lets what happens later.
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It reminded me of that fanfic where even at chapter 350 the main character was still a child of 6 years old, like at the beginning. Absolutely rubbish idea to write from the point of view of a child with adult thinking. I wonder what drives the minds of such authors? Why make the main character a child, with adult thinking, this is not Family Guy dude.
A great story, in which it shows us how the various realities are connected and these interact and are affected by others. It is also important to see how each story specifically affects the state of the world in which they are merged. Since these can lead to a disaster or an advance in the development of society and the future history of that reality. The characters are something that will also be affected, such as the Fairy Tail dragon slayers that have not yet appeared, since they have not made an appearance so far and that affects the flow of time and the reality of how it should have been.
(Google translator) here we have a high level story 🍷🗿 (Google translator) here we have a high level story 🍷🗿 (Google translator) here we have a high level story 🍷🗿
it's an interesting story expect for the fact that the mc pluck females left and right like pokemon........Good work author but pls lessen up on the female plucking ...... 👍
I can't say I liked it, but at least it entertained me. It's a generic Wish Fulfillment with a lot of characters from different multiverses, those who like stories like that might like it. Personally, I hate the Gender Bender and I didn't really like the development of the story. But objectively speaking, it could be said that it is good.
It's just one those cliche harem gathering novels, guy travels to different worlds, gathers whatever females he likes. It's like a traveling circus of different breeds of animals, It decently written, not too many errors at all. but it has no substance, nothing new to appeal to, every girl falls for the mc, even a few after a moment of meeting each other are already flirting for no reason. It is after all a wish fulfilment story, of course it will be nonsensical at times, but the way it is done is not really satisfying to read. He never mentions to his zoo of women, that he has others in different worlds, the constant lying, showing off whenever possible has its turn offs. It becomes harder to read the more you read.
It's meh. But alot of cliché, The Mc doesn't use his head in a fight, I know he is op but killing a weak enemy with a city destroying attack is d*mb. And let's not forget he is acting like a grown man at 3 years old but the people around him don't find it weird (He literally went out hunting animals at 3 years and no one questioned it). I don't think the author was thinking when he wrote this.
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This is a basic power fantasy / wish fulfillment story. I probably would have enjoyed this story if the main character wasn't a three year old who acted like an adult. It would have been better if the MC was inserted when Grandpa left and the body he was put in acted how the MC would have acted if he was reincarnated without memories but with his personality so nobody would notice any changes. Honestly one of my biggest hang ups for stories are the childhood arcs, most fanfic writers don't make them well. People seem to forget children are children not mini-adults. Also a head injury on a three year old that changes their personality should be a bigger deal then " oh you became more mature because of that fall ". In a world like Danmachi a swift personality change should be a huge cause for concern.
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author , can i ask how many Harem members in the end this fic please? 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.
the incongruity of his age to his actions and specially the reactions of the people around him is what held this fic back for me. people might think it's a minor thing but when it doesn't affect perceptions of the characters when it's supposed to be, then there's something wrong with it. I read your previous fics and relatively enjoyed it, but somehow because of that detail it affects everything in the story...
So far it's going to be another banger but it has a few problems with timeline in the first world(could say because it's a au that's why) and the second problem is Mc's age doesn't makes sense if he is around the same age as lily in pre time skip he should between 7 to 10.
favorite fanfic author, another awesome story in the making. Keep it up. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I like how the story is going here you have my support for the future And I like that you have added a little bit of the personality of escanor to the mc really noticed that escanor vs galand when he fought with the 7 demons until he became or stone hahaha hahaha And clark as a new god I also like I hope you continue to upload it because your stories are very good master
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Are you gonna be continuing Clark story becuase I would really like to read it ...................................................................
I thought it was good because of the touching prologue at the start, but then the MC gets killed by his sister cliched style followed by him meeting Superman God. So I read the rest and recognized a pattern. You can check the author's works, he has good updating stability but his stories lack substance, full of plot holes, changing personality of the MC, cliche scenarios, etc. I thought he would improve from his previous works but it's all the same. It's a good wishfullfilment but that's it overall. The MC basically bros with Superman God but is actually working for him, anyways it's a wishfullfilment in a predictable storyline that the author slightly altered by adding extra tidbits like turning the OG main character a girl. (Bell from Danmachi to Bella) It follows an overpowered MC that can hunt at 3 years old, talk perfectly and none of the world's inhabitants are the wiser to point it out. Not my cup of tea, but good for wasting time if you turn off your brains.
I like the story ......................................................................................................................................
Ya es la segunda historia seguida de tus historias que leo, la primera fue la de HOTD. Solo puedo decir que es perfecta, no hay nada que pueda criticar ya sea del MC, el desarrollo de la historia, el harem, el trasfondo mundial, etc. Me encantó como incluiste los otros mundos en el crossover sin afectar mucho su mundo actual, también el rol que el MC tomó en los mundos en los que estuvo. Una muy buena historia. La única razón por la que no leo la historia de Clark es que no soy fanático de DC pero seguro es igual de increíble que estas 2 historias.
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